FF:Pyaar ka ek un dekha ehsaas(prt-7,updt on pg14) - Page 3

Originally posted by: ranjna_m2010

Lovely Pari read both the parts right now.

Now who is this person who just came in I am sure it is Raj.

Great going carry on soon.

Originally posted by: ektay11

its superb dear

plz cont soon

thanx

its really very nice

Great going yaar... Waiting for the third part...

Originally posted by: pennu

Great going yaar... Waiting for the third part...

But I felt second part was tooooooooo small...

First part pe Tak tak tak... 3rd part sirf Tum... kuch zyada likho na.....

very nice..... i loved it..............waiting to know who is that person who entered from backside!!!!!!!!

Originally posted by: chauveen

very nice..... i loved it..............waiting to know who is that person who entered from backside!!!!!!!!

sorry pari dear😃,i m replyin so late yaar main kya karti net hi nahi kaam kar raha tha...............uffffffffff.

aur ab point pe aati hoon kya kya baat hai😆..........yaar i loved it mazaa aa gaya😊 i msure wo R hi hai😳 aur hona bhi chahiye....😆i loved ur dialogues yaar so plz continue soon i will b waitin
this was best part i liked
Maine abhi tak jo kiya apne BAUJI ke liye kiya ek achaa beta hone kaa farj nibhaya , lekin kya sahi hain aur kya galt yeh tum ne mujhe sikhaya . aur isley main tumloga kaa saat dena chahta hu, tum saat hogi tab bhi nahi hogi tab bhi main is deh ki aazadi ke liye larooga jo raastha tum ne dikaya haim ab us se pich nahi hatu ga chaye fir akele hi sahi , kyu ki main tum se bauth pyaar karta hu , pyaar karta tha, pyaar karta hu, aur humesha karta rahugaa is baat kaa afsoos muje humesha rahe gaa jis waqt hum eek dosre ka saat denchayi us waqt hum dono akle hain lekin who din jarro aye gaa kRANTI jab hum dono ek saat ho ge zindagi ke har moorpar .

this is 4 u

Originally posted by: tetuty66

sorry pari dear😃,i m replyin so late yaar main kya karti net hi nahi kaam kar raha tha...............uffffffffff.

aur ab point pe aati hoon kya kya baat hai😆..........yaar i loved it mazaa aa gaya😊 i msure wo R hi hai😳 aur hona bhi chahiye....😆i loved ur dialogues yaar so plz continue soon i will b waitin
this was best part i liked
Maine abhi tak jo kiya apne BAUJI ke liye kiya ek achaa beta hone kaa farj nibhaya , lekin kya sahi hain aur kya galt yeh tum ne mujhe sikhaya . aur isley main tumloga kaa saat dena chahta hu, tum saat hogi tab bhi nahi hogi tab bhi main is deh ki aazadi ke liye larooga jo raastha tum ne dikaya haim ab us se pich nahi hatu ga chaye fir akele hi sahi , kyu ki main tum se bauth pyaar karta hu , pyaar karta tha, pyaar karta hu, aur humesha karta rahugaa is baat kaa afsoos muje humesha rahe gaa jis waqt hum eek dosre ka saat denchayi us waqt hum dono akle hain lekin who din jarro aye gaa kRANTI jab hum dono ek saat ho ge zindagi ke har moorpar .

this is 4 u

oh thank u thank u thanku thank u sooooooooooo much 😃 itni kushi samali hi nahi jaa rahi 😭 main emotional horahi ho just kidding well thank so much u r comments u really feel so honoured dear and tume jaay wait nahi karna pare ga next part will be update shortly. bus thori se touching baaki hain

pari,plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz forgive me hun.u pm me and i couldnt give u a reply.actually yesterday my pc server was so slow that i couldnt even prpperly open IF.so sorry jaan.and regarding ur update well what can i say hun.it is one of the best sequences that i have ever read.simply superb.i completely loved it. and not to forget that u should be a script writer.love u sweety.

...pari.....a big hug for you sweety🤗🤗🤗saachi mein mazaa aa gaya.....and plz update soon