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Posted: 16 years ago
#51
im thinking the guy is pratyush
cant wait for the update
luv raji
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Posted: 16 years ago
#52
thanx for the promo dear
do cont soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: rkath

im thinking the guy is pratyush

cant wait for the update
luv raji

hmmm..... culd be,,,,lolz

thanx!

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Posted: 16 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: jeenal20

thanx for the promo dear

do cont soon

thanks!

will try to as soon as im donw with exams!

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Posted: 16 years ago
#55
sorry guys, i noe u wanna kill me.
i was bimbarded with homewroj and projetcs.
i will post a very long update tomorrow, since i am off this whole week.
[thank god.]

sorry guys, reallly am.

-Luv Esha
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Posted: 16 years ago
#56
hey i just caught up, love your FF its awesome the only one on GR so its great and i just love the story. Please update jaldi jaldi and can u please pm me??? plz plz?? i dont reli cum on this forum so its diff to know if u updated! neways thanks for sharing your fic its awesome! cant wait for the next part!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: nadz_J

hey i just caught up, love your FF its awesome the only one on GR so its great and i just love the story. Please update jaldi jaldi and can u please pm me??? plz plz?? i dont reli cum on this forum so its diff to know if u updated! neways thanks for sharing your fic its awesome! cant wait for the next part!

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Nadz

aw thanks Nadz!
sure will Pm u!

Read ur FF's on the FF forum, really nice!!!!

Thankyou!

-Love Esha

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Posted: 16 years ago
#58
Chapter4:
Alice and the others came to Ganga's dorm room when they heard about what just happened to Ganga. All of them wanted Ganga to tell one of the school faculty memebrs about this incident. BUt Ganga refused, saying she didn' want to create more problems.
Alice: Ganga,, your going to have do something about this.
Ganga: please, i really dont want more problems.
Rishi comes over and stands next to Ganga.
Rishi: Ganga, listen. If Pratyush comes back again, and noe of us are here to save you, and he does somethng very wrong, are you going to saty quiet about this? I dont think so.
Ganga: If there is a next time.
Ganga walks away, and goes to the bathroom to freshen up.
Jake: so stubborn....
Nessie: Let's leave, let her get some rest.
Everyone leaves, Alice goes to bed, after liteining to some music.
Ganga comes out and sees Alice fell asleep. Ganga goes to her bed, takes out her laptop, logs in to her email account, and checks if anyone is online.


-Krishna- is online.
-Vicky- is offline
~~Vidya~~ is offline
:Varun: is online


**Ganga** Hey Krishna
-Krishna- Hi DiDi! kaise ho?
**Ganga** Fine, forget that, how's everyone else? Mummy,viky,maasi, specially Papa......
-Krishna- Everyone's fine, how's it going over there?
**Ganga** So far So good. Found some nice friends, there's Jake and Nessie[BF and GF] , Alice and Jasper [again........BFnGF] ,Edward and Bella [also BF n GF] and then.....
-Krishna- Dont tell me, another couple...
**Ganga** lolz, no. There's Rishi, Indian, but different....
-Krishna- Differnt meaning?
**Ganga** I dont know, he's different, stands out somehow....
-Krishna- oooohhhhh
**Ganga** Krishna!
-Krishna- god, joking di,
**Ganga** haha, very funny, okay i need to go, its around 11pm here. got some phsyic test tmoro...
-Krishna- di, wait, woh kal.... nvrmnd
**Ganga** Kaal what?
-Krishna- nothing, ttyl
**Ganga** okayyyyy, ttys

**Ganga** logged off.

Ganga turned her laptop off, flipped through some of her books, and went to sleep.

Next Morning:

The day After Ganga's situation, She goes to college. A car , a Blue Chevrolet, keeps on following her.Ganga gets this weird feeling, frightened almost.Ganga hurries, and enters college...During lunch, she catches up with Alice,Rishi, and everyone else, talking about The Valentine's Day Dance.Later when she goes to her dorm, the same car starts following her again....This time Ganga was really scared..Someone stepped out of the car,and Ganga turned around. A man, looking familiar, walked closer and closer. As he got closer, Ganga sees his face..... *Drops her books*, and stare.
Ganga[Mind] ufff, phirse yeh joker?
The Guy steps closer.....
Ganga backs up, until she hiots something.
'God, couldnt this tree be lanted somewhere else?'
Guy:Hey Ganga........
Ganga: what the hell do u want Pratyush, get the hell away
P: Ganga, come on give me a chance, what i did yesterday was because i was drunk, and couldnt stop myself, sorry.....
G[mind] peethi hain, aur sorry bhi kehti hai... aajeeb aadmi hain.....
P: GAnga, umm i sort of like you, and i wanted to say sorry.....
Ganga rolls her eyes.
P: please ganga, umm.....
G: if i say ur forgiven would u get ur hands off of me?
P: oh, umm sorry.....am i?
G: yea yeah whatever,
Ganga starts to walk off, picking up her books. Pratyush comes along, and helps her. He grabs hold of her wrist.
G[mind] god, phirse haath ko..... ugh
P: Ganga, umm...... you wouldn't mind coming with me to the Vday Dance?
Ganga looks up statrtled.
'Vday dance? sorry"
P: please, for me.....
G[mind] doesnt really hurt if i go rite. no no, eww. but then again....
G: Fine, ugh, now let me leave.....
P: pick u up at 7 tonight.......
From the distance, someone was watching. That someone was Rishi. Rishi stared as Ganga left, and Pratyush drove away in his Blue Chevy. Rishi walked to his dorm, slowly.
At Rishi's DormRoom:
Jake: where is rishi? we got to tgo to the dance..
Rishi comes in to the room, not bothering to look at anyone, or anywhere.
Jae: hello? we have a dance to go to remebr?
Rishi: not going.....
Jake: can i ask y?
Rishi: leave me alone...
Jske goes, and gets Rishi some nice pants and a shirt , and hands it to him.
Jake: wear it, and come out, plz? ill wait outside....
Rishi, not wanting to, goes , wears it, and come out.
Rishi: happy?
Jake: what happened? why u so.... glum?
Rishi: nothing, just lets go, or else im going bak in.......

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Its short i noe, ill post the other part in a bit, got to go and run some errands.
Hope you like it!😳😳


-Esha


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Posted: 16 years ago
#59
why is ganga goin to the dance wit pratyush
aww poor rishi, he's heartbroken
cant wait for the next update
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Posted: 16 years ago
#60
Lovely! loved it ganga is confused, i mean after all that she agreed to go with pratyush??? anyways loving your story keep writing!!!!!


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