~My Only Desire~ Part13-pg107 NOTE pg 113 17/07 - Page 58

hiiiii jia,

awsome part yaar,😊

mmm...again im here specchless...

awesome update jia👏!

yeah i blame it on the course work too! i know very well how crazy it gets mid semester, so you are excused from the delay! maybe you should get your profs to write you a note next time ;) hehe

well jia jaan im really having a hard time seeing anything else past armaan malik! your descriptions of him have me drooling yaar! like the physical descriptions are too hot! and then hes sooo smooth and charming...its like intoxicating! lol
ok im going to stop complaining about the whole "man evil" and "go women" thing hahaha you just know me too well! i think i need to cut back...just a bit!
poor ridz being poked and proded at, to make her screen beautiful...but the women are right, they just use more and more chemicals to hide the damge the chemicals cause! they end up loosing their natural selves. but im glad riddhima believes otherwise, she wont change herself for anyone! lol so she thinks, lets see what happens!
hmm so armaan is definately attracted to her, but hes far to professional and into his career to fall latoo! it was very sweet the way he was admiring her! although the last line he thought has left me feeling uneasy! ridz is just his pawn :(
OMG ankit wants them to fake a relationsip just to get the shows ratings up!?!? the things people do for fame, recognition, power, etc. its really pathetic! but i guess these are just the kind of games the industry plays, so im not suprised! but i like this new little twist u added jia, i sense some real drama coming up!!!!
really curious to see ridz and armaans reaction, and whether they go through with it! try and update soon :D

awesome part!!!!! wow uve really captured the flaws of this industry!!! amazing job! and omg ankit wants them to act as a real couple?! interesting.. please continue soon! cant wait to read what happens!

awesome part pls cont soon n add me 2 da pm list

hi!!
u updated, thank god!
ridz multi-layered makeup ritual did make me wonder,"my god they have to undergo such a thing that too every time they are on screen!"
anyways ridz seem to bee comfortable on screen
armaan has such a nasty ego built in him
the cunning attitude of his is surely gonna make him fall on his face!

and the twist at the end that now they have to act like a couple off-screen to rise the trps, is such a ruthless one
i mean think abt the situation at the actors house naah

thanks for the pm!

love:
aishwarya

hi jia! i just caught up on parts 67-72 and i must admit that they were fabulous! you've left off with a cliff-hanger, to which i am dying to see what ridhima and armaan's reactions are going to be. i just don't understand where armaan is going with this; one moment he's extremely sweet and then the next, he says that she will be the pawn and he will make all of the moves?

amazing jia di....

hey jia!
thanks for the pm,
glad to see an update.....its been quite a while but i understand....this feb-march time is quite killing for everyone and it seems almost impossible to squeeze in even an hour for an update.i hope you get a little relief by the end of the month!
the update was fantabulous - the end specially.This love story is gonna be sooooo interesting coz both armaan and ridz seem more than willing and armaan actually has a dark side to him and is not the holier than thou type.....and especially coz its written by none other than YOU!!!
love,
sumedha