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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: sakuraa

Now that I completely understand what u are saying:

I can only do this

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thanks simra i hope with translation you could undesrtood in more depth and
i am happy i managed to post translation in timeotherwise many would not have
able to reach at the core of this part
Edited by bsingapury - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: bsingapury

.....yes dear now yura will remain in back ground and other situaions in other people's life will take main stage.
You are so sweet Beena. Give us more NiSha and their mature relationship.
saksh seeing bangles😳..................that's why bangles has come out of the cupboard😉......but when and how will he see that's something we have to wait
Not fair. But why to wait? Are they going to use the bed?😉
and about nobody enter nikki's room i promise not even a single person will enter through that close door😕😕
Oh Beena, i love you. So nice of you and a big thankyou from me and from Nikki-Saksham too.
now i am also waiting for detail analysis........because i am not satisfied too reading only this much in analysis😳

Yes, i am writing this but got distracted by funny ED analysis. I'll be posting in few minutes.

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Posted: 17 years ago
you are most welcome and NiSha going to use bed noooooooooo.........not that soon warnaa i will get all chappals and sandles than i have to request all to throw in pair and that's also my size😆😆😆
kirti you did not read my line properly because i said nobody will enter to nikki's room's close door there is catch there...........now i am defo going to get sandles in pair uneven😲😲😲
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: bsingapury

.....kirti you did not read my line properly because i said nobody will enter to nikki's room's close door there is catch there...........now i am defo going to get sandles in pair uneven😲😲😲

What ?????? 😲
Mere purane jute chappal are ready to attack.
Is hafte main koi bhi sadi gali sabzi phenkne waali nahin hoon. All will be used as missile directed at you. 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
Beena, i was testing your patience. 😆😆

Beena its getting difficult to analyse your FF day by day. Its such a nice experience to read. After reading I really feel content, in the sense that I feel its just perfect, it could not have been better than this. Sometimes I even think if I write the same part how would it be. But I am not able to think this much deep as you think, and you give meaning to each and every thing, that is so sweet. I truly get surprised from where you get such beautiful thoughts, and how are you able to write so well.

Ok, though its difficult, let me come to analysis

Now I feel it was better that instead of Nikki Yudi decided to stay with Rani. Earlier I was reluctant for yudi but if you had opted for Nikki it would have been worse. Yudi's presence was so convincing. I liked yudi's behaviour.

[quote]....Ye khayaal aate hi oosne rani ke massom lekin murjaye huve chahere ko apni hatheli main liyaa aur halke se ooske mastisk ko chuma aur phir joro se apni baaho main oos ne rani ko jakad liyaa aur ooski bhaavna ek ashr bindoo banke ooski aakho main umad aayi''oose lagaa aaj ooske pyaar ne ooski taaqat banke oose samet liyaa hain''..aur aaj oose ek chattan ki tarah''.adig rah kar har tufaan kaa saamnaa kar ne ki oose taaqat di hain'.aur ek ret kaa tilaa jo jaraa se havaa ke joke se bikhar jaaye'..woh ban ne se rok liyaa hain''. [/quote]

How beautifully you have written.

So ultimately it was Rani who stopped him from losing his control. It is also proved that Rani is his strength, the strength to overcome his weakness.

But Nikki's pain was really heart-wrenching.

[quote] jab oosne apni pith ke pichhe rani ke kamare kaa darwaajaa bandh hone ki aawaaz suni pataa nahi oose kyun lagaa ki ek darwaajaa kahi ooske andar jo oosne badi majbooti se bandh kar diyaa thaa woh kisi ne achanak se ek hi dhakke main khol diyaa thaa''''..[/quote]

How long she can keep the door closed. Aakhir kyun???

The 'udhaar ki zindgi', how true and how cruel. Why has she no right on her own happiness? She has to feel happy when others are...

[quote]..aur achanak se oose lagaa ki rani kaa chaheraa ooske khud ke chaahere main rupantarit ho rahaa thaa aur '''..jab oos aadmi ki aur oosne dekhaa to woh sukhe patte ki tarah kaamp gayi kyunki oose yudi ki jagaahaa'''''saksh kaa chaheraa nazare aayaa''''.

Kyun '..kyun oose aisaa aabhaas ho rahaa thaa ? oos ne joro se apni aankhe mood li'.lekin aanshu to rukne kaa naam nahi le rahe the bekaabu hoke bahe jaa rahe the'.aur vichaar''..woh bhi bekaaboo ho rahe the''..oose lagaa jis tarahaa aaj rani ko bachaa ne ke liye yudi ne kadam oothaayaa thaa'''.agar aaj rani ki jagah woh hoti aur yudi ki jagaahaa saksh hota to kyaa woh bhi yahi kartaa????????

Oose apne khud ke vichaar se dhrinaa ho rani thee'''oosne apne haath apne kaano par rakh liye jaise woh apne vichaaro ko rok paaye'''.[/quote]

Each and everything you have written about Nikki is very very touchy. And the irony, there is nothing wrong what she is thinking but still she thinks that she is doing some sin and cursing herself. These are natural feelings and she has same right on her happiness as anybody else, as yudi has, as Rani has.

You know Beena, everytime I am reading this I am feeling 'romanch', you have described it so well. How many times I will say 'how sweet'.

It was so sweet when Saksh brings bangles for her, from the money which his father had given him for buying some toy. And Nikki's spontaneous reaction.... 'kitni khubsurat hain ye'...., oh God, Saksh got all the reward. What else does he want...

But I missed one thing. How sweet it would have been, if Saksh had put the bangles on her hand.....then while putting these......holding her hand and playing with bangles.....sweet chime, choodiyon ki khanak.....cute childish innocence.....unaware of their social status..... and their whole conversation about the chooriayan......anyway I imagined that..... (it was there but I wanted Saksh to hold her hand as a friend who loves his friend)....

[quote]....She could read unanswered questions in Saksh's deep and emotional eyes. She averted her glance to other direction because she felt she might drown in those affectionate eyes?.

.....Nikki turned to other side she felt she would not able to hide her emotions anymore from saksh.....

.....Aur jaise eesi tufaan se bachne ki nikki koshish kar rahi thee'.woh havaa kaa jokaa jaise akhir main chhoo gayaa '.woh saksh kaa halkaa saa sparsh kaafi thaa '.oosko udaa ke le jaane ke liye'.woh'apnaa sanyam kho bethi'''..aur joro se saksh se lipat gayi'''..jaise barso se registaan ki tarah garami main tapti aur pyaasi ret''.aaj apne dariyaa se jaa mili ho'''.apni pyaas bujaa ne ke liye''[/quote]

Oh God.....how deep....I am extremely happy that Nikki is not able to hide her emotions from Saksh....when she lost her control...it was Saksh, who was in front of her.....I want them to interact to each other face-to-face.....without any mediator....Beena I am so so happy that at last Nikki surrendered to Saksh.....and I want Saksh to reciprocate in the same way. Will he?

Beena i could not analyse it in the way i wanted. Because i doont have words of what i want to convey. I wanted to quote each and every word you wrote about Nikki, because every word has meaning and saying a lot many things. You have written so many things and there are many many things which are hidden, which i can only experience.

Edited by jibi - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

Thank God that you translated it to English otherwise I wouldn't have understood how beautiful and important this part is. This by far, has to be the best part you've posted in ages. I absolutely loved it!

Now, I did promise you that I would tell you how I thought this part was going unfold. I thought after a hasty discussion over if Yudi should or shouldn't provide the warmth, in the end it will be decided that Nikki should do it. I thought his beliefs, morals, respect for Rani and his vow to her wouldn't allow him to take such a step unless he could clearly see that Rani was on the verge of death.

However, despite all that, I'm so glad you to decided to take the story this way. I always knew that mentally Yudi's such a strong character but to see him momentarily melt and cross the borders he set himself but then to allow a mere memory pull him back was phenomenal. Now I'm just waiting to see Rani's reaction to all this. Will she see reason to Yudi's treatment? Or will she shamefully remain aloof?

But my heart goes out for Nikki. How she always has to be ethically right even though her feelings scream to do something totally different must be killing her. I love the part where Nikki imagined if Saksh would do the same for her if she was in Rani's place. That's such a realistic thing to do; we all often imagine ourselves in the shoes of others and wonder how things will materialise with our very own. In a way, we find solace in it because we are in charge on how we want the events to emerge despite knowing it's such a wrong thing to do so I can totally relate with Nikki there.

It must be agonising for Nikki's to realise that she's receiving this sympathy love more than the unconditional love she must've received from her family once upon a time. They all empathise with the events that lead her to becoming a widow which unconsciously must be a constant reminder of how lonely and painfully she has to live. She knows that although they all think about making her life a better one, no is prepared to action it besides Saksh'and that must be true love. So to see Saksh standing there after refreshing suppressed memories of him and him actually asking of her well being must take a toll on her emotions and she has no other option but to succumb to them.

I'm really looking forward to see how things pan out from here. Will they both let loose all the rights and wrongs of royalty and confess their feelings? How will Saksh comfort her? Will Nikki curse herself for surrendering to her feelings?

Left you with many questions to answer but don't worry, you have all the time in the world to answer them. But I'm telling you Beena, you've totally out done yourself here and I must sincerely thank you for washing away the so far treacherous week I've had.

Edited by jyk88 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: jibi

What ?????? 😲
Mere purane jute chappal are ready to attack.
Is hafte main koi bhi sadi gali sabzi phenkne waali nahin hoon. All will be used as missile directed at you. 😆

😆😆😆
yaar puraane ke saath naye bhi phenk sakti ho muje koi atraaz nahi hain........😉😉
aur abzi sadi gali ho jaaye tab tak wait mat karnaa oos se pahele hi phenk dena......ho sake to pakaa ke phenknaa sirf khaane ki jahemat karni padegi😆😆....karelaa mat phenk naa itnaa pasand nahi hain😆
and yaar you really test my patience but it was worth waiting i will get back with my comments on comments by tomorrow........
jenny thanks dear for lovely comments and i will comments on them tomorrow
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Posted: 17 years ago
are yaar naye jute-chappal lane ke liye to mandir jana padega 😉.
aur kya kaha....maine theek se sun liya hai....karela bahut pasand hai...theek hai saare karele hi phenkoongi.....jab mere kabab mein haddi aayegi....to kya main tumhe shahi pakwaan khilaaungi....😆😆
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: jibi

are yaar naye jute-chappal lane ke liye to mandir jana padega 😉.

aur kya kaha....maine theek se sun liya hai....karela bahut pasand hai...theek hai saare karele hi phenkoongi.....jab mere kabab mein haddi aayegi....to kya main tumhe shahi pakwaan khilaaungi....😆😆

kirti aise mandir main jaanaa jahaa shaadi ho rahi ho tabhi achhe waale joote milenge warnaa log aaj kar puraane chapal hi pahen ke jate hain mandir jaante hain gaayaab ho jaate hain😆😆😆
hailaa karelaa .........chalo yura aise bhi bade sweet hain😉😉........to karele ka juice pi lenge ...to sugar ki problem nahi hogi.........
shahi pakwaan bhi thodaa saa chakh ne ke liye bhej denaa😆😆😆........saath main aur hadi wala kabaab bhi chal jaayegaa😆😆
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: bobbiedhillon

Beena di,

Very nice part.........So Yudi decided to save his love I see......😉. There is so much emotion going on in this part....Loved it. Poor Niharika....part of her emotions seemed so real that I felt her pain. This part was more about Nisha than Yura....
Loved it....Thanks for posting translations but I was enjoying the Hindi parts more.... You are so poetic in your writings. Great job.....Please post soon....Tuffan to ab ayega......😊

thanks bobbi , i know this part was very emotional and i have noticed that whenever i write any part about nikki or saksh it become very emotional i think their character is like that
i will try to post next part soon because it will be like concrete part that will lead this track further more
thanks for lovely comments
[quote=sharan]

Beena...this is an amazing, mindblowing update....i read bot hthe Hindi and English parts and you have me speechless at the moment....the way you have described Yudi's feelings, how he controls his emotions even though he is so close to rani n can so easily lose his control...is really commendable...you handled this very delicately and aesthetically

the way Nikki feels her lonliness seeing yura together is just incredible...........your description of the bangles and how 1 bangle is lonely and comparison of 4 bangles to friends etc etc.. is so poetic.....
Yes Nikki and saksh are the center piece of this tufaan...how nikki realises her own feelings for saksh.....how she is unable to control her feeling is indeed very touching. N I agree let saksh also let go of his feelings for nikki n acknowledge them.....
You descriptions and comparisons are so poetic....I could visualise the whole thing in front of my eyes......
a truely remarkable update!!!!!!
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thanks dear i wanted to show that yudi is also normal human being who get helpless infront of situaion but yes he has his morals and virtue to hold him back ....and i am happy you all liked it..........that part was difficult to write because i amnot good in writing this kind of romance ....and same time i did not want it to look like something po*no or c grade scene because that moment was very dilicate and had it's own meaning ..........
and about nikki and saksh i really sometimes feel surprised that few things come to my mind for them very naturally that bangle part was not planned at all but i wanted something to lead this relations and just it came to mind and i wrote as it is but i amhappy everyone liked that
thanks dear for lovely comments
this comments helps a lot

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