FF: Dosti [Part 19 pg. 83] [Aug 6th] - Page 35

Originally posted by: shabo24

aha Sorry I missed this yesterday Ravz, dun't no how i missed it! *dong* It's ok Shabz😊

Aww I could totally get what Heer is going through, I actually agree with her she should TOTALLY make him suffer.😈He broker her heart, thats no small thing, why does this all remind me of Bips and Ranbir in BAH? 😍Yo, this has so much you can do with it, and I KNOW you won't disspoint!! Aha so he set out flowers for her....erm.....he's going to have to do better then that :P She'll try but Prem will manao her in the end. Not sure how yet😆 Ooh I wanna watch BAH now! And I'm sure I will disappoint cuz well...I can't think of anything at the moment😆

Ohh cliffhanger??? That Prem at the window? Well he better have something good planned, Heer can't forgive him that easily, I am thinking 1000 sit-ups and a pound of chocolate to start with?? Ohhh and he can tke her SHOPPING!☺️ Yes it's him. Sit-up? Maybe...we'll see. Speaking of chocolate, I want some!

--luv shabz

Originally posted by: SVlover

Reading such a sweet update makes me want to dance Hehehe You know what'll make me dance? You updating your FF.

Sach mein, it was soooo cute. The way Prem's trying to make it up to her... haiiii! OK I'm not mad at him anymore 😳😆 I can't believe he touched the flowers he was allergic to just so he could decorate Heer's room. And the flowers on the lawn ☺️ Main toh mar gayi! ☺️ Yes Ariba he did that. He knows he messed up and he's trying to do something special just for her.

But I also like the way Heer decided to make him earn her forgiveness. That's exactly the way to do it! 😃 😆😆 Go Heer! 😆 Lol. I'm guessing you want Prem to think of more ways to manao her?😆

Originally posted by: munam_13

hey ravz.... sorry sorry sorry sorry...*holds ears and kneels down* I am very busy nowadays so couldnt comment... this part was so sweet poor Prem is trying all ways to apologize and our Heer's so stubborn but in a way she's correct because she did not get his support when she needed him the most... aww so sweet of Prem that he wrote sorry by himself and gifted her the flowers that she love and he is allergic to.... hope the ice breaks now and she befriends with him again..they are surely lovely friends ...will wait for your next part...

Hello everyone. How's you? I know I haven't updated in a while. Sorry for that. I'd say I was busy but that's not entirely true. I was busy and being a lazy bum. Yeah so...what was I going to say? I can't remember. Oh well. Sorry the update isn't that long. I'm a bit sleepy right now. Enjoy the update and good night

Part 14

Curious, I got up and walked towards the balcony and saw a tall figure standing below. I tried to make out who it was but it was hard to tell. I squinted my eyes and the person looked familiar. They were wearing dark clothes and he/she had a bag on their shoulder.

"Heer!" as soon as I heard the voice, I realised who it was.

"What are you dong here?" I hadn't expected Prem to show up in the middle of the night. What was he doing here?

"I'm sorry Heer. Do you forgive me?" He pleaded.

I can't believe he came this late at night just to say that. Even though he sounded like he genuinely meant it, I still didn't feel that it was enough. "No Prem I don't. Now go home."

"I'm not leaving till you forgive me" he replied

I shrugged. "Suit yourself."

Having said that, I closed my window and continued reading. A while later, when I was completely absorbed in my book, something scratched against the window and I got up again.

"What?!" I yelled.

"Please Heer? I even brought you chocolate. You like Lindor right?"

Actually I loved it but as tempting as that was, it still wasn't good enough. "Yes I do. But I don't want any from you." And I closed the window.

10 mins later I heard a loud voice and sounded like someone singing. Well trying to anyway.

"Jaane bhi de, joh bhi hua jaane bhi de" Prem sang the song from Heyy Babyy.

Any other time I would've cracked up hearing him sing but right now I was getting really ticked off. "Prem stop singing! There are neighbours trying to sleep. Just go home and sleep like a normal person"

"Not until you forgive me." He was being stubborn. But I wasn't going to give in.

"Fine! Just stay there then!" I closed the window and went back to bed.

Again I heard something hitting the window from outside and got frustrated. I decided to ignore it but the since the noise wouldn't stop, I got up for the third time. "Prem stop throwi-" While walking I had bumped into something. Rather someone. I felt them steady me, preventing me from falling "Prem?" Why is it that whenever I'm about to fall, he always catches me? "How did you get up here?!" I asked while looking around to see a ladder.

He gestured towards the pipe. "You idiot what if something happened or you got hurt? What were you thinking?" Honestly, what was wrong with him?

He took the bag he had on his shoulder off. "I just wanted to give you the chocolates I bought for you and this" He held out a teddy holding a heart which said 'I'm sorry' on it. That was really sweet of him. "I figured you wouldn't open the door for me and I was getting a bit hungry and was tempted to eat the chocolate and thought I should give it to you before I ate them all. Plus I didn't want dad to laugh at the bear. He'd call it girly."

"So are you saying that you're embarrassed by the bear and that's why you're giving it to me?" I asked.

"What no that's not what I meant. That didn't come out right" Prem started to explain but I wasn't listening.

I started pushing him down the stairs, towards the front door.

"Heer meri baat toh sun" I just closed the door. "I'm staying outside under your window till you forgive me" he said from the other side of the door.

Since I had been interrupted 3 times already, I gave up reading and put the book away. It was late anyway so I decided to go to sleep. I woke up to the sound of thunder. I glanced towards the clock and saw that I had been asleep for half an hour. I heard thunder again and looked outside. It was raining heavily and I remembered how Prem said he would stay outside. What if he was outside right now in the rain? He wouldn't be that stupid right? He probably gave up and went home. Still, just to make sure I peered outside and saw the dark figure standing there, holding the teddy and the box of chocolate in his hand.