FF- ETERNAL LOVE-upd part 25 on page92 10th feb - Page 62

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Casssp thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
plzzzzzz di continue ur ff. and the people who dont like it then they sould not read this plz dont stop this ff for only some people. and update sooon plzzzzzzzz
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey, please do continue.. i am a big fan of ur FF, please dont stop.. u r an amazing writer..
please do continue.
~nikki
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Posted: 17 years ago
😲 Vandy abtak update nahi kiya? I thought i must have missed new 3-4 parts....
Here comes my Nara...
WE WANT UPDATE....WE WANT UPDATE.....WE WANT UPDATE!!!!😉
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: lilsasha

😲 Vandy abtak update nahi kiya? I thought i must have missed new 3-4 parts....

Here comes my Nara...
WE WANT UPDATE....WE WANT UPDATE.....WE WANT UPDATE!!!!😉



Agree with u shabnam dear..di where r u ? come on update karo..quick..this time i will to catch ur updates dear..sacchi..pehle mera FF update karnedo aur bahut sara work pending hain forums mein ..after that i will read ur update..

WE WANT UPDATE....WE WANT UPDATE.....WE WANT UPDATE!!😭

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: lilsasha

😲 Vandy abtak update nahi kiya? I thought i must have missed new 3-4 parts....

Here comes my Nara...
WE WANT UPDATE....WE WANT UPDATE.....WE WANT UPDATE!!!!😉

kya shab....
you too sided with the others....
naarebaazi band karo.....
abhi update karti hoon.....
love
vandy
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: anushka10



Agree with u shabnam dear..di where r u ? come on update karo..quick..this time i will to catch ur updates dear..sacchi..pehle mera FF update karnedo aur bahut sara work pending hain forums mein ..after that i will read ur update..

WE WANT UPDATE....WE WANT UPDATE.....WE WANT UPDATE!!😭

anu !!!!...you too!!!!
i'm telling you ...don't hang around with shab much,.....she's making you a goodmash.....
stop this naara...
i'm updating now.....
love
vandana
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: Casssp

plzzzzzzzzzzzzz update sooooooooooon

hey cassie....
sorry to keep you waiting...
will update soon
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vandana
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: sweta2005

update plzzzzzzzzzzzz asap waitinggggggggggg.

hey swati.....
veryyyyyyyy sorry....to keep you waiting....
i'm updating it now....
love
vandana
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: sweta2005

waitinggggggggggggggg

i'm typing it....
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Posted: 17 years ago
hello everybody.....first of all i'm very sorry for updating so late....i know many of yoy were waiting for it....and to the ones who pmed me for the update...i'lll reply as soon as i can... well here goes the next part....
part 24


rr could not believe what he heard over the phone....... alll his production plants had been shut down and an enquiry panel had been formed to investigate about his machinery.......what the hell .....he thought to himself.......so much damage had been done and he had not even got the wind of all this......thanks to his injuries.....inflicted by prem......he had not been able to go to office for the past couple of days....and here was the result of all that.....a net loss of millions......god only knew how he would be able to recover all that......all because of that prem...... he was the cause of all this......had he not beaten him up in the first place ......he would have been abe to go to office and maybe done something about it well in time....damn you prem......he muttered under his breath......unknown to the fact that this destruction of his was all planned by prem.......
heer was settling the cupboard in her room......it was almost two weeks since their marriage and heer was getting tired of resting the whole day...with nothing to do......today she had eventually managed to persuade gmom to allow her to settle the cupboards.....well a lot of persuance indeed....it was really hard......mom not allowing her to do that also...incase prem might come to know of it...and hell broken loose on the others......but agter she assured that she would be done before prem returned that gmom reluctantly agreed.....
prem had gone to office promising to be back by mid afternoon to take her for her checkup to the gynaec....this was suppose to be her first checkup after that incident and prem was really tensed what the doctor would say.....
a smile came on heer's lips as she recalled how prem's schedules and priotities had changed after their marriage.... the great business tycoon prem now hardly spent any quality time at his office....he would just go for an hour or so in the morning......just for formality as he said.... and was always back before lunch.......spending the later half of the day with her.......but she was not unaware of the fact that he worked nights so that his work was not neglected.......which left heer wondering at times how he could manage and strike a balance between all the things so well without giving a chance to anyone to complain.......she had always thought that prem would not be able to give her quality time after marriage because of his responsibilities.....but here he was ....hell bent on proving her wrong......not that she was complaining.........but was thankful to god for giving her a life partner who was a perfect son, brother, husband and above all a great uman being as well and she was sure that he would be the best father in this world......
as heer straightened the things in prem's shelf.... a brightly coloured packet caught her eye.......wasn't it the same packet that prem had bought it that day.... but when she had enquired about it.....he had just avoided the question....it had almost slipped out of her mind until she saw it now.....
being inquisitive to know what he had bought that day....she just peeped inside the packet and could not help but smile at prem's naughtiness.......it was a nightgown.......but why had he not given it to her she wondered...and decided to keep it as it was......but was caught by kuldi in the act.......
yeh kya hai heer.... she caught the packet as heer was about to keep it back...and saw the gift......hmmmmm nice one heer.......try kiya hai......heer nodded in denial and told her the story.....but heer you should.... he bought it for you.......nahi diya toh kya hua......saying this she told her to hurry down as prem would be there to pick her up any moment......
as prem entered he saw heer all ready waiting for him in the hall with gmom and kuldi......sorry heer.....was caught in traffic.......he aplologised to her and helped her get up........sambhal ke jaana....gmom cautioned prem.... and call me immediately as soon as you see the doctor.....prem smiled at her anxiousness for he knew that his family was waiting for a clean chit from the doctor so that they could give a huge reception for their wedding and if god was grateful then the reception would be today itself.......
okay guys....this is all for today......i know its a very small update and not that good also.....but still i'll look forward to your comments......
love
vandana
Edited by riks1 - 17 years ago

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