Armaan-Riddhima Love Story-pt 10A pg 28 pt10B pg30 - Page 17

wow nice...i loved it..really nice...cant wait

Hi Mahima

its rlly rlly nice!

RESERVED..will come back after i catch up on all the parts!!
**Edited**
mahiii i'm soo sorry for the late editting. See the thing is...I needed to catch up on your fan fic..and i'm going to do that today. So sorry I made you wait forever...but see right now even though i should be researching for my paper....which is a big part of my grade...i'm being lazy and would much rather read your fic! Haha...see its a perfect distraction for me at the moment....this might be one really long comment! Sorry hun if you get bored😳

Part 1
This was such a cute part! Jan 7th 2008 was such an amazing passion filled day for Armaan and Riddhima. Loved the fact that you took the story line from that date! And Riddhima is such a cutieee asking him if they should tell everybody about them..definitely different from DMG! I remember her not wanting to tell..lol. But Armaan bhii naa...of course has to tease her about marriage! We all know armaan your teasing her because you want to marry her right away! Okay sooo they're only telling Anjali...lets see how she takes the news. I bet better than how she did in the actual DMG. Oh one thing...love how he kept calling her "Jaan" 😳 Oh another little thing about me that you might not know...I love it when ever Armaan(KSG) says "Oyye Hoyye"...I don't know what it is...but i just love it!

Part 2
Okay okay I have a confession to make. I thought you'd some how make it so Riddhima wouldn't tell Anjali...lol. I think my mind was just working overboard! Honestly thought I'm glad she did tell Anji. And hehe she knew right away from the glow on Riddhima's face that she was in love!! Hmm Armaan ke pyar ka effects! LOL. He brings a glow on almost every girls facee😳 Okay...yeah I'm a little too fida over KSG...I knoww...I can't help it!!☺️

Part 3
Goshh girl your parts just keep getting better and better as I read them. Armaan is soo cute pretending to be angry. Haha Riddhima used the curiosity trick...it usually always works! lol. But armaan bhi naa is too smart! Okay so you honestly won't believe it...but I was just thinking while reading the part...riddhima just kiss him and his anger will automatically melt..and then she did! Thats something I've always wanted Riddhima to do when Armaan is angry...to just hug him...or just kiss him...because Armaan loves her way to much to not melt! And haii Riddhima wore the greenish yellow suit.....bringing back memories of first Armaan and Riddhima meeting!

Part 4
Aww loved the bacha scene between AR. Armaan is such a shetan..never leaves a chance to bug our poor Riddhima! Though I loved when she said...that she said mera bacha because Armaan is always going to be hers..😳 That was such a sweet and romantic thing to say! And loved how she said it with attitude that she's the best! Should we be saying mahii your the best? I mean obviously you're the one who thought of the plan lol. No joke, I felt butterflies in my stomach when I read that he pinned her to the wall..lol. I can just imagine that,..him pinning her...romancing with her asking her for a kiss and hug. And now the whole gang knows about them! This fic is headed in a great direction!

Part 5
Mahii merii jaan this has to be my favorite part soo far! You described their confession scene perfectly..and added a little touch of your own to it! Hehe Riddhima is soo shy and cute in your fic. And once again girll you had my stomach fluttering when he pinned her in the wall and they were soo close to a kiss..and i coud feel my own heart beating soo fast and then BAM..their pagers ring! I was like ughh I should have known lol. And aww she told Anjali she'll go home with Armaan. So I thought armaan was pretending to be sad about not being able to get a kiss..but looks like its a whole nother story. He was crying... Oh I forgot to mention...I'm soo glad that all their friends accepted them...and see even their friends think they are a made for each other type jodi! Armaan and Riddhima foreverrr!!

Part 6
Aww it was his parents death anniversary! How sadd Becharaaa Armaan yaar. My poor baby broke down crying. But atleast Riddhima was with him to comfort him. I'm glad they have each other for support. It really seems like they share a strong unbreakable bond at the moment...no clues about what you have planned for in the future..but at the moment they seem so much in love! Oh by the way forgot to mention in the past parts..but I also love it when he calls her basket....! lol

Part 7
Aww this was such a cute short part! Of course Riddhima is going to be mad if he made her wait for half and hour! But I'm also glad that they made up! I don't like it when either of them are sad....love my AR teasing each other ..romancing and just supporting each other. Loved how she asked him for his dimple wali smile....i seriously melt at the sight of those dimplesss☺️

Okayy soo I know I didn 't catch up on all the parts like I planned to....but its getting late here..and I have school tommorrow..soo I should get ready for bed! Promise to catch up on the rest of your fic soon! Seriously love your fic to the core!🤗

^^Heyy....waiting for ur comment!! i hope u like my FF!! :)

Originally posted by: dmgluver01

^^Heyy....waiting for ur comment!! i hope u like my FF!! :)

aww mahima right? I definitely will love your fic..it has my Shilpu in it...and Karan...in other words KaSh...haha and I LOVE KaSh..don't be fooled by my avi KaSh will always be special to my heart....😳
I'll comment soon...promise!🤗

Originally posted by: Gotta_luv_KYPH

aww mahima right? I definitely will love your fic..it has my Shilpu in it...and Karan...in other words KaSh...haha and I LOVE KaSh..don't be fooled by my avi KaSh will always be special to my heart....😳
I'll comment soon...promise!🤗

yeaa...mahima!😊....wats ur name?.....aww....thats soo sweet of u!!! okk....as u can see, i am a really big fan of kash too!! haha...well looking forward to ur comment and i will be updatiing tomorrow😃
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Mahima