(FF) A Flight To Love Epilogue Pg. 80 (Feb 26th) - Page 29

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I'm really busy today, so maybe tonight or tomorrow!
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Part 10

This part is specially dedicated to Ravs, for always reading and commenting and making me feel like these FF's deserve an oscar or a filmfare for best story! 😉 Even though we all know they're not good at all! 😆 Anyways...enjoy!


Next Day


Heer taps her fingers against her desk, as she waits for her laptop to boot up, right then she closes her eyes and imagines Prem to come near her and take her hand in his and kiss the back of it, right as his lips make contact with her skin her laptop *dings* to turn on and she snaps out of it. "Yeh main kya kar rahi hoon? I'm day dreaming about Prem? And I'm engaged to Manmeet, why does life always play cruel games. And of course; on top of that, Prem goes and tells me indirectly that he likes me..." Heer puts her head in her hands right as Meher walks in.


"Kya hua di?" She asks in a soothing tone.


"Meher? You're--you're not upset anymore?" Heer asks hesitatingly.


Meher smiles. "Di, I was never upset with you. I was just sad, ke mere liye aapko itni baari qurbani deni pari,"


Heer gets up and goes to Meher and hugs her. "Don't ever say that Meher. It's not a qurbani, you know I'm willing to do anything for your happiness."


"Theek hain, so what are you doing?" Meher asks sitting down on the bed, directly behind Heer's desk.


"Oh nothing," Heer goes to her laptop and shuts it.


"Come on di...what's up?" Meher asks getting suspicious.


"Kuch nahin, ab tu ja. Don't you have some school work? I'm working on some designs for Prem's hotel." Heer says quickly.


"Will you show me later?" Meher asks, as she's in the doorway.


"Sure," Heer answers absentmindedly as she closes the door. "Whew!" she mutters under her breath. "Agar Meher ne zid ki hoti, to mujhe nahin pata main kya kehti usse."


She opens up her laptop and goes to the email page.


"Hey Prem, thank you for yesterday--for at least giving me the courage to tell Meher about the engagement, but afterwards when you mentioned um, loving the girl that Manmeet got engaged to, were--were you serious?" Heer quickly presses send as she doesn't want anymore second guesses to interfere with her life. She smiles relieving the moment when Prem admitted that he liked her. Right then her cell phone rings. "Hello?"


"Hi Heer di," Preet greets her on the other end.


"Preet? How are you?" Heer smiles.


"I'm good and you?" Preet asks.


"First class," Heer replies.


"Good, any plans for the day?"


"Nope--"


Before Heer can even finish her sentence Preet starts rambling on. "Good, because PB and I were thinking that you could come in to the hotel today to check out the layout and everything, so we can start planning?"


Heer laughs. "Do you need to breath?"


After a few seconds, Preet laughs. "I'm good, so what do you say?"


"I think it's a great idea. What time should I come by?" Heer asks.


"Actually Heer di, would it be okay if Meher also came with you?" Preet asks, with nervousness in his voice.


"Aacha? Meher bhi? Kyun--woh wahan aakar kya karegi?" Heer teases him.


"Aapki madat?" Preet offers.


"Good answer, sure I'll ask her."


"Great, we'll pick you two up in an hour?"


"We'll?" Heer asks.


"PB will be with me,"


"Oh, okay," Heer answers. "I hope to dear god, that he doesn't read that email till later!"


"Any problem bh--Heer di?" Preet asks.


"What were you about to call me??"


"Me? Nothing heer di,"


"Preet."


"Heer di, I didn't call you anything at all. Ab aap jaaye, hum thodi der mein aane wale hain," Preet hangs up before Heer can ask any more questions.


Heer looks at her cell phone and then slides it shut. "Yeh Preet sach mein pagal hain," She shakes her head as Meher bangs on her door. "Yes Meher!" She calls out.


Meher peeks inside the room. "Maine Preet ka naam suna," she gives Heer a bashful grin.


"Andar aaja, uska hi phone tha. He wants me AND you to go to their hotel today to get the layout for the designing," Heer tells her.


Meher immediately starts grinning. "That sounds like fun," She quickly glances at Heer. "For you of course, I mean it's your job. Main wahan akar kya karungi?" Meher bites her lip.


"Preet hain na? Give him some company," Heer laughs.


Meher giggles and goes to her elder sister and hugs her from behind. "You think he's a good guy na di?"


Heer smiles and puts her hand on Meher's cheek. "If I didn't, I wouldn't let you meet him would I?"


"Besides, jiska bhai Prem ji jaise ho, woh aacha hi hoga na di?" Meher grins as she releases Heer from the hug.


Heer looks up at Meher and nods slowly. "Yeah," She quickly glances at her clock. "They'll be here soon, go get ready!"


Meher rushes out of the room, forgetting that she wanted to know why her di looked so sad at the mere mention of Prem ji. "Oh well, I'll ask her later!"


About an hour later


*honk-honk*


"Meher! What kind of boyfriend is this? He doesn't even come up and ring the doorbell?" Heer laughs as Meher stumbles down the stairs, putting on her earrings.


"Di!" Meher pouts. "Chale?"


"After you," Heer smiles as she locks up the house behind her. She slowly walks towards the back but then sees Meher and Preet already sitting there, but still she is about to open the door when Prem rolls down his window.


"Please Heer, don't make me feel like a driver for all three of you, sit in the front na?" He smiles, pleading with his eyes for her to sit with him.


That's it, I know it wasn't that long, but I still hope everyone liked it! 😃 I'll try continuing soon! 😃


Love you,


Meera😳

Edited by indiandoll89 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

I shall be back after I'm done sleeping😊

*Edit*
Ok so after I posted that...I changed my mind. Screw sleep. Reading this is more important😊
Aww I feel so special now. Thanks for dedicating it to me. And yes they do deserve and award and EVERYONE agrees. You're just in denial and we've had many discussions on this topic. I think it's time you realised the truth
Omg Heer's day dreaming already? That part made me go to lala land😍 Stupid laptop interrupted such and amazing moment *sigh* And of course she had to bring up Manmeet... but I am glad that Prem's invading her thoughts and she's curious about it. I love how she quickly sent the email before changing her mind. I would just like to go up to her and tell her that of course he was serious! He wouldn't mess with her like that
And Meher's so nosy. If only she found out that Heer's secretly in love with Prem. I'm sure she'd team up with Preet and then team Meet would make everything better.
Wow that was close. He was about to call her bhabhi. I wonder how she would've reacted🤔 I change my mind, it would've been better if he just said bhabhi. But then that would make things awkward...Never mind😛 I'm debating with myself on that😆 Anyway..Preet's so sweet, wanted to spend time with his beloved Meher. And she comes running at the sound of Preet. I love Meet.
Yay! Meher finally noticed that Heer's sad and it has to do with Prem! Yay!!! Now the question is, will she remember to ask Heer about it?
Oh and she gets to sit with Prem in the car! I wonder how that'll turn out. That made me wanna sit in the front with Prem☺️ I'll tell you right now Meera, I'm jealous of Heer😆 But of course I love their jodi and wouldn't want anyone to come in between them *cough* Manmeet *cough*
-Agent Ravs
Edited by ravioli_11 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
awesomeeeeeee too good very cute part waitinggggggggggg for next asap.
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Posted: 17 years ago
Thanks Ravs! 😃 I shall wait! 😛

Thanks Sweta!
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Posted: 17 years ago

aww!!

So cute - just love prem
lol he didn't want to feel like a taxi driver lol
such a cute update
plz do continue soon
wonder if prem read the email or not yet!
Thanx for the pm
mucho luv
-Sadi*
Edited by sadizzle - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
Well Meera you don't have to wait any longer😊
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awesome... now its only your guys ff that will keep us up now that teh show is going down the drain especially now another stupid character is coming in...lol anyways aweosme epi!!! update soon
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I shall comment back asap! 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
Awesome update!!!.. the whole update was soooo cute!!!!... preet was about to call heer bhabi.... would've loved to see heers reaction if he had!!!!... plz continue soon!!!!!!

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