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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: sshekar

Good morning!
I woke up feeling happy today and then realized that it was only Wednesday...darn it! ๐Ÿ˜†
Hope today is a big day for the show...someone needs to see Prem...fast!!
Today's chapter is just a build up to the party....so I hope you like it....๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Chapter 54

Heer stood in front of the mirror, and ran a critical eye over herself, as she adjusted the pleats of the silk chiffon saree she was wearing. It was dull yellow color, the border and pallu embroidered with rich zari work, she had fallen in love with it on one of her and Ash's shopping trips. The sleeveless blouse was made of plain silk, same shade as the saree, with a deep cut in the back. Heer had been a little skeptical about having so much of bare skin showing, but Ash had assured her that it was pretty common and that it was almost tame compared to what the other women would probably wear to parties like these. She had decided to give her cousin the benefit of doubt, hoping she knew what she was talking about. Heer kept her make up to bare minimum; eyeliner to highlight her eyes and a touch of bronze lipstick. The only jewelry she wore were long earrings, pearls set in an intricate gold design, with a pair of bangles that matched. Gayatri had insisted that she wear them, considering how well it matched her saree. Brushing her hair, she left it loose, to fall straight as rain around her shoulders. A dab of perfume and Heer decided she was ready to face whatever was out there.

WOW!....i cood jus imagine her right now....bet she's lookin drop dead gorgeous...prem ki tho hosh udne wala hai....๐Ÿ˜ƒ
She walked down the stairs, knowing full well that all the others had left, with the exception of Preet, who had been running late. Lalit had looked ready to blow a fuse, so Heer had stepped in and assured him that she and Preet would soon follow.

A sigh of relief went up when Heer saw Preet downstairs, looking sullen. "Whoever came up with this monkey suit idea needs to be shot," hahahahaha monkey suit?...omg!...i luv preet!...he muttered, fidgeting with the cuff links. He looked really handsome, wearing a deep grey suit and white shirt. Heer realized that this was also the first time she had seem him dressed so formally.

"You look very smart," she said, taking hold of his wrist to fix the cuff. He gave her a look of deep suffering that she had to laugh at. "Think of all the women who will be swooning at the sight of you," she consoled, working on other wrist he held out. "There is something to be said for a guy in a suit. Ok, all done." i think all the women will be swooning too...lol...and ther is something absolutely heartmelting about a guy in a suit....*sigh*

"Is that why you fancy my brother, because he looks good in a suit?" Preet asked. The grin he gave her was pure mischief. naughty preet..๐Ÿ˜†...but he has a point...

"Well," she said, tilting her head to one side, as if thinking. "I would have to give him some points for that some points?...girl i give a 100% for how he looks in a suit....man oh man i need to stop right here...or else i'll start going on n on bout prem in a suit...lol

"And what else do I get points for?" a familiar voice drawled from behind. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Heer whipped her head around so fast, that for a second she thought she had sprained it. Color rose to her cheeks as she saw Prem leaning against the balustrade, watching her with a smile playing on his lips. hai mein mar jawan!.... "What are you doing here?" and straightening her shoulder added, "This was supposed to be a private conversation." Heer's surprise swiftly changed to a jolt in the pit of her stomach, at the sight of him in a black suit, a pale blue shirt with a striped tie. Every inch of him looked like a man, bred to wear power and confidence with ease. oh wow.....oh WOW....wat an amazing line....i'm in love with this part..."bred to wear power and confidence with ease"....somebody get me water...i'm about to faint...lol

"I'd like to know, nonetheless," he said, staring at her with the same intensity as she was currently bestowing him.

Preet cleared his throat. "I think I'll go wait outside." As he left, he had to admit that everyone at home had buttons for eyes if they hadn't noticed how the air practically thrummed with tension when these two were in the same room. how can u not notice the change in temperature whenever these two are together....

"We'll are going to be late," Heer whispered a little breathlessly, eyes wide.

Prem didn't answer, but his gaze roamed the length of her, taking in the way the saree molded her curves, the tiny telltale of her pulse beating at the throat, telling him just how his attention was affecting her. "That is probably the sexiest thing you have worn by far." WHOA!...have i told u before that i absolutely LOVE the prem in this fic?....he's so SEXY and i LOVE how he isnt shy and all....

Heer smiled a little. "Thank you. That is a marked improvement from the last time." atta girl!

He bowed his head in acknowledgement and grinned. He took her hand and placed it in the crook of his arm. "Shall we?"

Preet was leaning against the car as he watched them both. "Not a word," Prem warned his brother, who only raised his hands and grinned at them. Heer opted to sit in the back, happy to quietly listen to Preet talk about his new assignment. They first stopped to pick up Ash, who was a few minutes late coming down. And when she finally did, Heer watched her cousin, thinking how stunning she looked in white. The chudidar top seemed to have silver threads shot through it, for it shimmered when she walked and the tiny straps that held it up left her shoulders bare. Her hair had been tied back to accentuate her long neck and show off her pretty earrings.

"Do you know how long we have been waiting?" Preet asked as soon as he saw her.

"Sorry," Ash said a little breathlessly as she scrambled in the back. "I was cornered by a nosy neighbor." She turned to look at Heer fully. "Oh, you look so beautiful!" she exclaimed. "Doesn't she?" she asked Prem, almost daring him to argue with her.

His eyes met Heer's in the rearview mirror and held for a moment. "She does, but then so do you. Well worth the wait," he added, smiling. he's smooth...really smooth...๐Ÿ˜‰

Ash sighed and held a hand over her heart. "You seriously need to give your brother some lessons." hahahahaha!...luv tat part...

"I think he was trying to find the right words to describe how stunning you look," Heer spoke up in defense of Preet. i bet he was...she must be lookin so pretty....tho i'm a preet/meher fan...i like preet/ash in ur fic

"I won't hold my breath," Ash huffed.

"Please don't. I don't know how to administer CPR."

"We'll just add it to the list of all the things you don't know then."

"Children, no fighting," Prem said, loudly, thus ending the argument.

While Ash and Heer admired the dcor, walking through the foyer of the Royal Meridien, Preet asked his brother, "Do you think dad wouldn't have noticed we are late?"

"Are you kidding? Let's just hope that mom has him under control," Prem murmured. hahahaha omg i luv ur sense of humor....u make prem n preet sound like such fun people....and their relationship with each other is amazing....

As they neared the ballroom, it was evident that quite a few of their guests had already arrived. Thankfully, it was dimly lit inside, and no harsh glaring lights were visible, Heer thought. Walking late into a room full of people was something that she was averse to.

"Hopefully we can sneak in unnoticed," Preet murmured, the same thought having occurred to him too. "I think I am going to have a drink before I feel calm enough to face this lot." With that said he grabbed Ash's hand and walked in. Heer was about to do the same when the sight of a slim figure and froze. She clutched Prem's arm and shifted to stand behind him. "What is she doing here?" she hissed furiously.

"What are you talking about?" Prem asked, trying to see who had this effect on her.

"Anita," Heer bit out. "Why did you invite her?" Her eyes flashed.

"Oh," he said sounding almost relieved. "She helped out with organizing, so I had to."

"I don't like her," she blurted, looking up, when Prem turned to face her.

"What? Miss sunshine actually disliking someone?" He was laughing at her.

"I am entitled," Heer said, turning up her nose. "So make sure you keep her away from me."

"What do you suggest I do? Follow her around?" The sarcasm wasn't missed.

When he put it that way, it did sound silly. "Fine'I'll see you later then." She stepped away from Prem and gave him a fleeting smile, before making her way inside. To her relief Gayatri was the first person to spot her and Heer decided that it just might be fun after all.

I enjoyed every bit of this update!....i was grinning so much...lol....so...anita is ther...i'm looking forward to reading how heer handles her...lol...as memory serves...heer was a beast the last time she delt with her...lol....cant wait to read more....n i wonder if premeer's relationship will be out in the open soon...
That's it for today...waiting for your comments!

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Posted: 17 years ago
heer sounds as if she looks amazing!
cant wait for the next part!
lets see how she will avoid anitA!
and what will prem get upto!
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Posted: 17 years ago

yeyyyyy!!!!.....finally i've reinstalled my laptop for $113 and i'm broke ..... neway the good thing is that no more stupid pop-ups ๐Ÿ˜ƒ .......

now back to part 53
"so please sit as far away as possible" ๐Ÿคฃ ...hilarious diii....loved it ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
yeyyyy party night๐Ÿ˜ƒ......i was soooooo looking forward to it......thanks๐Ÿค—
awww i love it when you include such little yet real convo btwn two ppl, it's really enjoyable to read๐Ÿ˜Š.....no philosophical craps but natural stuff.....very well done di๐Ÿ˜Š
awww i loved the gift scene.......your story has such an impact on me that i don't even realise whether i m laughing or crying....... here i was laughing at preet's command on the girls and the next minute a single drop has just happened to escape from my eyes......the lines were simple and delivered pretty easily BUT once again the emotions behind it did the trick๐Ÿ‘, hats off to you di๐Ÿ‘ ...... mashallah .....
"That's me," Prem pointed to a picture ..... awww i can visualise him saying that....awww that is sooooo cute **kisshhing my baby premu**.....i love you more di, especially for this line ๐Ÿค—
"Mom says that I was a difficult child," .....yeah ask me๐Ÿ˜†.....but his adorable smile, expressive eyes made me forget about everything ๐Ÿค— .....what else a mother cud ask for???๐Ÿ˜Š
"You know I'll get you for that later." ๐Ÿคฃ....here we get another warning..... beta prem aab toh sudhar jaa....hopeless๐Ÿ˜†....however, wud love to know how he gets back at her๐Ÿ˜‰
"I have come to know the signs." ๐Ÿคฃ isshhhmartt!!!!
gosh!!!.....loved all the dialogues of prem-preet at the end....PERFECT!!!.......thanks for the wonderful part di๐Ÿ˜Š
Now part 54
OMG, my heart skipped a beat reading Heer's get up๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ณ....beautiful.....awww i knew prem wud have a micro-second heart attack๐Ÿ˜†.......poor darling, do we guess that prem will be in misery for the rest of the evening againโ˜บ๏ธ.....haila๐Ÿ˜ฒ did i really say that??โ˜บ๏ธ.....ok i'll confess, your story has another side-effect and that is, the degree of besharmi is exponentially increasing in my case **sigh๐Ÿ˜ณ**.....
sexy yellow๐Ÿ˜, hot blue๐Ÿ˜, God bless me from thinking further **cough**
"Whoever came up with this monkey suit idea needs to be shot," ๐Ÿ˜†....awww poor darling **muah**.......i simply adored the 'fixing cuff' scene btwn preet-heer.....such a cute one di๐Ÿ˜Š .....i love such cute little interactions btwn ppl.....terrific๐Ÿ˜Š
my goodness, speaking of points, what should i give my betu for his cuteness???....i guess "infinite" number of kishes wud work no??๐Ÿ˜‰
everyone at home had buttons for eyes if they hadn't noticed how the air practically thrummed with tension when these two were in the same room. ๐Ÿ˜ฒ**holding breathes** ....OMG mervelous line dii๐Ÿ‘......**sighhhhhhhhhhhh**๐Ÿ˜ณ
"That is probably the sexiest thing you have worn by far." ๐Ÿ˜Š perfect.....you know, I personally believe that women look sexy ONLY in saree......
"Not a word," ๐Ÿคฃ loved it
awwww loved the entire convo btwn prem-heer, preet-ash๐Ÿ˜Š
"Children, no fighting," Prem said, loudly, ....okie, dad-dy๐Ÿ˜ณ
"What do you suggest I do? Follow her around?" ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ....awww my cutie pie shona baby, WE KNOW that you have better things to do other than following her around, such as, umm umm ermm, glue-your-eyes-only-on-your-lady-love๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ
loved every bit of the two parts di......thanks for blessing us with this wonderful story.....God bless you๐Ÿ˜Š
luv
rehana
Edited by tania86 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
Awesome update !!!!!!๐Ÿ‘
can't wait for tomorrow to read your update!!!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: Anhdara13

MINE! Am first! Now lemme read the part..

*edited*
So you're sad 'cos it's a Wednesday? I look forward to Mondays, Wednesdays and Fridays.. you should know why.. ๐Ÿ˜‰
Hey Radz! Awww....here...just for that you get ...๐Ÿค— what the hell...make that ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—
Wow, Heer sounds like she looks amazing.. I want to see Prem's reaction! How the hell is he going to keep himself away from her, and his hands off of her when she's looking like that? ๐Ÿ˜† And in such a big party on top of that! And Preet is dressed up too.. I wanna see! *sigh* And complaining about it.. ๐Ÿ˜† Why am I not surprised..
Yeah, she doesn't does she? ๐Ÿ˜† Ah...you'll have to see what he does...No spontaneous combustion in store...not yet anyway...You know Preet well donchya? ๐Ÿ˜‰ Of course he is going to complain...
Prem overheard Heer! ๐Ÿ˜† Preet knew he was there of course.. It's obvious.. And Preet's assessment of everyone else's obliviousness pretty much sums everything up.. Though I hope Meher finds out soon..
Exactly...Preet knew Prem was there and he just wanted to stir the pot...pretty neat, eh? Ah, Meher will find out soon.
The PremHeer part was nice.. but no spontaneous combustion, damn.. Oohh, thought: Is this Mr Khurana or whatever his name is and his wife going to be at the party? Wonder what they will say when they see Heer again, with Prem? ๐Ÿ˜†
Ah, you are getting warm...keep guessing...๐Ÿ˜ƒ Like I said, no combustion in the next chapter...
And Ash.. Preet didn't compliment her, and Prem did.. ๐Ÿ˜† And Heer defended Preet.. Abhi devar ke saath de rahi hai? Children fighting would be Preet and Ash right? And Preet is still afraid of his dad? And so is Prem? ๐Ÿ˜† Considering how mad Lalit is at Prem already, not surprised, though Prem may blow up at him.. That I wuold pay to see/read.. ๐Ÿ˜†
Preet, *sigh* has a long way to go. Maybe u can give up Atul and give Preet some lessons? ๐Ÿ˜‰ Yeah, Heer knows that if she keeps Preet happy then he will tease her less...or maybe not...๐Ÿ˜† Ash-Preet were the children...Ah...not saying a word. All will be revealed in the next update...
Preet doesn't like crowds and attention? Is this the Preet I know and love? (I'd have said we, but I don't like to share, and Atul wasn't here..)
He does like it...but not from a bunch of old fogies!! That's what he was referring to...I promise Atul in the update on Monday....
Heer doesn't like Anita.. Am not surprised considering their first meeting.. ๐Ÿ˜† And Prem doesn't know why? Hmph.. He should.. I think he would find it amusing..
Anita is mean...Prem would...but I think he gets sidetracked a little...Heer never felt the need to tell Prem...weird, isn't it? And he never asked her why....
Cannot wait for the party to actually begin! How am I going to survive until Friday? *dramatic sigh*
Ah, but Friday is almost here....๐Ÿ˜ƒ C u tomorrow!!
Love,
Radz



Originally posted by: premeerrock

hey gr8 update as usual ๐Ÿ˜Šbuh plsss tell me tht wen will both of dem confess dere love for each oder???? i mean havent dey waited long enuf to share their feelings?? ๐Ÿค“anyway cant wa8 4 da next update! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Hey there! Thanks...Aww...you are getting impatient...Keep reading...and I promise it will happen...eventually....๐Ÿ˜†



Originally posted by: mithalio

Smita Very nice again.
Mithiya
Thank you Mithiya! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ


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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: Innocent02

Superb part
luved it!!!!๐Ÿ˜‰
Thanks! ๐Ÿ˜›



Originally posted by: kis desh Rocks!

very nice update as always.... Anita??? I wonder if she would be a problem??? waiting for the next part......
Hello! Thank you dear! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ Ah, but you will find out in the next update...



Originally posted by: Intellienough

OH oh Nice update...Heer in yellow does look good in kdmhmd also.I am relieved that she didn't wore pink in your ff.Nice ...keep it want to see more of prem and heer interaction and romance
Hi there...I am glad that you liked the update...๐Ÿ˜† Yeah, I was kind of tired of the pink...



Originally posted by: sweta2005

awesomeeeeeeeee too good very nice part waitingggggggg for next asap.
Thank you! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ


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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: fj08

Hi Smita
Radz is right, M,W,F have a different meaning for us, and the buildup to the party was awesome, so glad prem had enough sense , maybe more belief in her feelings, to compliment her nicely this time
her description sounds sexy, yes thats what i was thinking when reading ur description too, Hi Fatima!! Aww, you guys are so sweet to say that...๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ˜ƒYes, finally Prem said the right words...he is a fast learner, if nothing else, no? ๐Ÿ˜‰ Ah, yes that was what I was aiming for..Heer to look sexy...๐Ÿ˜†
i thought this might have been an ocassion to wear prems gift too, :( wonder if prem will feel that too
so they did sneak in without anyone noticing, i think that was more the reason for preets discomfort, getting reprimanded by lallu in the party, it was nice that heer could voice her dislike of anita Ah, but Prem hasn't given it much thought, I think. She couldn't have worn it...not yet anyway. You are correct, Preet was more uncomfortable about how his father would show his displeasure...๐Ÿ˜ƒ Heer is finally opening up...
looking forward to the party, lallu will be miffed at prem, prem and heer should be making eyes at each other, hey did we completely forget that anita thinkgs prem and heer are engaged, will she mention something in front of lallu, are there any other people from prems office who could spill the beans
cant wait for friday, for more than one reason :) I really did think about getting Lalit even more riled up, but I think you will like what I have in store...No, at least I have not forgotten that Anita thinks Prem and Heer are engaged. No...there are no other office people there....๐Ÿ˜†
thanks for a great update, hope we have a great wednesday, there isnt much time left for the show to surprise or disappoint us
tc
fatima
I have not watched the episodes this week...will do so tomorrow...But i heard today's episode rocked...At last we had a great thu, no? one of many? ๐Ÿ˜† Take care and c u tomorrow!



Originally posted by: Madiha Pardesi

Lovely part as usual!!!...i can actually imagine prems condition when he saw her....wen he complimented her n she sed markd improvement was sooo funny!!!...n poor ash didnt gt ny compliments frm preet...lol...willl b w8in till friday now=D
Hello! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ Thanks dear. I am glad that you liked the update...Ash will survive...๐Ÿ˜†



Originally posted by: *angadkripa*

great update!!

Thanks! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ


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Posted: 17 years ago
hey i loved it can actually imagine how heer and prem looks....and i really like the convo between preet and heer...preet is so sweet...

wonder wht will happen at the party as mr. kapoor is there and also anita...

i want to tell u tht i really like the way u write everythg flows and falls in place....the way the relationship between heer and prem grew through ur writing is amazing๐Ÿ‘
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: nikki786

hia

wow that was amaing
premeer are so cute and preet is such a cutie
cant wait for next part
Hi Nikki...thanks dear! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ I am glad you liked the update.



Originally posted by: iqbals4ever

awesome part cont soon plz!!!!๐Ÿ‘
Thanks! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ



Originally posted by: miss_hyper

loved it ....LOVED IT SO MUCH....lovely update and u r one awesome writer i must say if i havent already told u
Hi Sonia! Thank you...I am glad you liked it...it is really sweet of you to say that!! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ



Originally posted by: heerkimehr

Hi Smita darling...
Looks like you got your wish... I'm happy for Gayatri.. it was a bitter-sweet, nostalgic and poignant episode today... Going to read your update now...
STILL have a lot to say... haven't forgotten.. :)
Take care,
heerkimehr
Hey dear!! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ Woohoo...I am glad to see u! And also the fact that u liked the update...no problem...u can take your time. I will still be here...๐Ÿ˜†


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Originally posted by: lghosh

Smita,

Where do I start? The entire update had me rolling on the floor with all the wit & humor between the brothers. I know I sound like those programmed toys but seriously seldom I have come across a good writer like u. U give the right touches to everything, the finesse of ur writing, the wit, the humor, the romance, the passion, the right details of everything, proper decent treatment of the situations r all just fantastic. No wonder I just love this story. Hi Lana! You can start right at the beginning....๐Ÿ˜† Nah, I could never get tired of hearing from you...regardless of how many times u say it!! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ Thank you!! I am glad u liked this update...

I can so imagine how ravishing Heer must have looked, I just could picture her in front of my eyes. U know today u fulfilled 1 of my wish, I wanted her to wear a saree to see Prem's head turn & u did that. I wanted to tell u that but forgot but u gratified my wish without even my asking. Thanks. I have to say saree is one of the most elegant, sophisticated, stylish piece of garment one can wear provided ofcourse its worn properly. Nothing can beat it with the right accessories & makeup. See...I can read your mind...it is uncannily like mine...๐Ÿ˜† I wanted Heer to wear a saree, because you said it...it is one of the most elegant, stylish and sophisticated piece of garment...and has to be worn right of course...some people can just kill it!! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ Prem's head is more like spinning...not just turning...๐Ÿ˜‰

I have heard guys grumble so many times when they have to wear formals, specially Tux, & Preet's complain was no surprise to me! A monkey suit, eh! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ And I also knew if Prem knew Heer is going later he would do anything to be with her no matter what. So I had this knowledge in the core of my heart that this guy is going to appear soon to sweep Heer off of her feet with his looks. And voila, he did appear from nowhere to gather more knowledge about his befitting merits from his ladylove. Its really eerie how I have come to know ur Prem. ๐Ÿ˜Š And Preet saw him coming because he could see him while Heer had her back to him. So purposely Preet asked her that question, right? This guy is also too good, just love him. Hehehe very true the unaware people have to have buttons for eyes for not noticing the explosive chemistry this 2 share. Preet left, imagine if we were there, we would be like ๐Ÿ˜, saying carry on u 2, just don't mind us! ๐Ÿ˜† It is a well known fact...some guys just hate formals and I thought Preet fit the bill for this one...not Prem, Atul or Harman. Yeah, you were absolutely right!! You do have an eerie knowledge about this Prem...donchya? ๐Ÿ˜‰ Yes, Preet saw him and hence the little prodding. I think it was right of Preet to leave, no? And that is why there is no Lana or Smitha in the story...๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† We would have just sat there and made notes...I would have.

Have to say Prem has improved, has learnt to praise properly after last time. I thought Heer would comment about his looks as well. And her jolt at the pit of her stomach checking him out, oh ho, another long sigh of satisfaction! And Prem so dynamic as if he is born to bred to wear power & confidence, what can I say? Smita really u leave me speechless. Smita I am editing here today. This line kept haunting me whole of y'day & even at night in bed ๐Ÿ˜† (yep crazy me, u can say that again) & everytime I get this image of royalty bestowed on Prem & he is gracing us by treading on the face of this Earth. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ A perfect blend of power & confidence! I get the aura of that scene in Rajasthan when he was walking on the sand like an emperor just before the imaginary hug of Heer. Oofff I need to shoot myself! Hey u edited!! I know coz I devour ur comments...mull over it for a day before responding. Nice, no? ๐Ÿ˜‰ Ah, that line really did it...even for me...it was too good to miss. And yes, it does remind you of that sand dune scene in Rajasthan...with the black coat billowing behind him, hands in his pockets, the winds puffing his hair as he stood there to survey his kingdom...*thud*....I think I will go shoot myself too...๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
Again laughed at the brother's interaction just as they come out of the house. Really how do u do it? U r beyond comparison. Again the interaction in the car was too funny between Ash & Preet. The CPR comment was hilarious. I think now whenever I am depressed I will have to read Destiny to cheer me up with this one liners of urs. All this while P&P used to work its magic on me but now I can use Destiny as well for this purpose. I can guarantee all ur friends must look forward to see u specially for ur sense of humor among other applaudable qualities of course. Aww..so glad u liked it. OMG...Destiny Vs P&P...it is not all happiness and cheer, u know? Don't kill me when the tough times start...๐Ÿ˜ƒ I promise to give you lots of spontaneous combustions...๐Ÿ˜† I wouldn't be so sure about all my friends wanting to see me....๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† It is rarely that I get on extremely well...I am very very picky...can u believe that?
Its hard to believe Preet is scared of Lalit. And Smita why did Prem sound relieved when he found out Heer was referring to Anita? Did he expect some1 else? And Ms. Sunshine, again superb touch here. As I said all throughout I was laughing away reading today. Then his comment to her about following Anita around, simply amusing! Nah, Preet was not scared of Lalit. Prem was relieved only for the reason that he was wondering who this new character might be who could throw a wrench in his works...๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† I am glad u liked it...
Now I am looking forward to Friday desperately. Many scenarios r popping in my mind about the party. 1st about Anita, now she knows Prem & Heer is engaged, so my 2 cents worth of prediction, if she blurts it out in front of Lalit, a sight worth to see! Moreover those worthless Kapoors will be there & my question is will they recognise Heer from the other day? If they do, their reference about her to Lalit, again worth watching. Just hope Lalit has enough sense in him to add 2 & 2 together. U know Smita I would love to see if Lalit can pull the wool over Prem & Heer's eyes if he can continue his act of annoyance & tells both of them they don't have to marry each other & he really is looking for someone worthwhile for Heer. But don't think he has that depth & maturity enough to pull it of. But something like this will be really comical to watch. Ah, Friday is another action packed chapter. I don't believe in dallying...although considering that it has been what 54 chapters and Prem and Heer still haven't confessed...Ekta, move over!! ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† Ah, Lalit is not that innocent...keep reading...
Overall a splendid update Smita, my words will fall short of any applause I want to make. I just loved it. It was intense, humorous, romantic, lovely! Keep it up, can't stress enough about ur capability as a writer.
Will try to wait patiently for Friday,
Lana.
Thanks...Friday is almost here. I will reply to your PM tomorrow and we'll talk about the show then. Till then..take care...๐Ÿ˜†



Originally posted by: guju_angel

great update!.. hope tu see the next part on fridai lol =D.. keep up d.. u kno wat?.. ur updates r so guud i crnt even discribe them lol.. so am just gunna say keep it up!.. byee.. tc
x-Radhika
Hi Radhika! Thanks dear! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ I am glad u liked the update...and thanks for the kind words. They mean a lot!


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