Kahin Pyaar Na Ho Jaye(LK,NP,PM)P.37 PG. 85 - Page 54

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Posted: 17 years ago
it was really good
cant w8 to read more
cont soon plz
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: **esha**

it was really good

cant w8 to read more
cont soon plz

thank you for reading
we will continue really soon😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
⭐️ Attention ⭐️
hey everyone plzz check pg. 74 i posted what everyone is wearing for the engagement 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago

hey everyone here is the next part

sorry for not continuing for so long😛



Part 28:-

Recap-l-kt engangement, prachi thinking kt is hidiing something

Now-

Prachi, and mukti were showing pari and archita what they were going to wear for the wedding in prachi's room

Prem and neev were looking at the pictures from the party and deciding who looked the nicest and pretiest in prem's room

Karan, nandini, ganga, sahil, prena, mr.bajaj and tulsi were sitting in the living room and talking about lashya and kt's wedding

P2, saksham were telling lakshya kt and sneha about how they use to hate each other before there wedding in the kitchen while they were talking kt was drinking water and it almost fell on her dress

S- kt be carful

P2- kt go change your dress or it will be ruined

Kt- ok di

so kt want to her room to change when she came to the room she remebered her cell phone was onm the dresser, she goes to the dresser and turned it on,

she had a lot missed calls and messages all from the same person and the last Message said,

"Kt tum kaha ho, main tumse milna chahta hoon. Aur tum mera phone kyun nahi utha rahi ho. Please kt tum kal mujhse collage ki library me milna ok bye"

kt changes her choli and wears this dress


kt goes downstirs to kitchen

in the living room ganga sees kt worried

Ganga- kt

Kt- ha she goes to the livingrooom

G- tum is dress me kitni achi lagrahi ho

Nandini - ha beta you look really nice

Kt- thank you ma, thank you chachi

Mr.bajaj- kt is everything ok

Tulsi- ha beta sab kuch theek toh hai na

Kt- nahi main theek hoon

MR.B- are you sure beta

Kt- yes papa main bilkul theek hoon

Karan- to kt tum lakshya se pehali bar kab mili thi

Kt- umm college ke pehle din pe

K- oh

Kt- main jau

K- haha beta jao

T- kyu lakshya se mil ne ke bahot jaldi hai

kt- nahi dadi woh p2 di aur saksham jiju ham sab ko unki lovestory kaherahe he (telling their lovestory)

T- arre main to majak kar rahi thi

P- tum jao beta it is ok

So kt goes to the kitchen all worried about what to do next.

Then All the Sudden kt hears her name

?- Bhabhi Bhabhi

She turns around and sees Archita and Pari hurrying down the stairs

Kt- ha kya huya

P- Bhabhi neev kahan hai?

Kt- kyu

A-hume kuch personal baat karni hai use

Kt- ha?

P- archita tu chup kar

Pr- di ye dono ko bahar jana hai ishe liye neev ko dhondh rahe hai

Kt- acha waise neev prem ke room mein hai

P- ok thank you very much bhabhi bye(and hugs her)

Kt- bye and kt goes back to the kitchen and Prachi and mukti goes to prachi's room to change

Scene changes to prem's room

A-neev(screams)

N-kya hain meri bhehna

A-mujhe hai na bahar restaurant mein ja na hai kyunki aaj mere bhaiya lakshya ke engagement thi

N- umm''''. Aur tum yaha kya ker rahi ho (pointing at pari)

p- kya hai na lakshya mera bhi bhai hai aur mujhe bhi bhahar jana hai

N- ok toh aisa karte hain hum sab youngers bhahar restaurant mein jaate hai

A & P- yes!!!!!thank you neev

N- to tum bhi aa rahe ho na humare saath

Prem- um'''''.. ofcourse I wouldn't miss it for the world and anyways this party is for my sister

P- ok hum sab ko batake ate hain chal archi

They both go to Prachi's room

A-guys jaldi jaldi tayar ho jao hum sab dinner ke liye bahar ja rahe hain

Pr- kya lekin kyun

p- kyunki aaj humare bhai ki engegment hui hain

m- kya main bhi aau

A-Ha of course isme poochne ki kya baat hain

Pr- kya prem bhaiya bhi aa rahe hain

P- ha

M- toh mein nahi aa rahi

Pr- come on mukti please

A-please aao na Mukti

P-ya it will be really fun chalo na

M-acha theek hain

P- yeah hum bhabhi aur sab ko batake ate hain

Archita and Pari go to the livingroom

A-dadi kya hum sab youngsters bahar restaurant mein jaye please

T- kyun

P- bas lakshya bhaiya ki sagai hui he na isi khushi mein

T theek hai jao lekin bahot der mat laga na

A-ok thank you dadi

P- Prerna aunty kya hum prachi, Prem aur Kt bhabhi ko le jaye

Prerna- sure zaroor le jao

P- thank you aunty

A-kya mukti bhi aa sakti hai

Pre-of course

A-ok chalet hain

At last both go to kitchen

P- sab log tayar ho jao hum sab dinner ke liye bahar ja rahe hain

Sa- ok that's an great idea hai na p2 ji

P2-ya

P- toh sab aa rahe hai na

S- um mujhe ghar jaana hai

P2- kya sneha chalo na

S- nahi waise bhi abhi sagar ate hi honge

P2- ok

P- toh chalo sab ready ho jao

Kt- mujhe bhi nahi ana

A-bhabhi apko toh ana hi padega, waise bhi ye party apke liye hi toh hain

Kt- nahi mera man nahi hai

P-bhabhi please, bhaiya kaho na

L- ha kt sab keh rahe he toh aao na

Kt- ok

Sa-arre wah lakshya ne ek baar keh diya toh madam raji bhi ho gayi

Kt- jiju!!

Sa- mazak tha

All the youngsters go to the biggest hotel in town

Neev drove one car with archita, pari, and prachi so they could ask prachi about kt's favorite and nonfavorite stuff

Prem drove prachi's and kt's b-day car with mukti,but then P2 and Saksham also ride that car because P2 did not want saksham to yell at her for wearing this dress

And lakshya and kt were in other car since kt wanted to tell lakshya something but didn't know how to start.

L kt kya baat hai bolona

Kt- lakshya woh''woh

L- sab kuch theek toh hai na

Kt- nahi mein tum se kuch kehena chatihu

L- ha bolo

Kt- woh lakshya mein'.

Just then Kt's phone rings, it was neev

Kt- Hello

N- hi Bhabhi

Kt- kya huya

N- aap dono kaha hai

Kt- lakshya hume kitni der leagi pockne mi

L- about 10 min

Kt- 10 min

N- ok hurry up and come we are waiting for you inside ok

Kt- ok bye

N- bye bhabhi

They finally reach their and just then Sneha and sagar also come there.

Sneha-

Kt- Sneha,tum yaha

S- ha woh Sagar mujhe dinner ke liye yaha le aya

Kt- oh waise sneha tum dress mein bahot hi achi lag rahi ho

S- thanks

Kt- aur jiju kaha hain

S-who abhi gadi park kar rahe hain

Just then Sagar comes

Sa-hi Kt

Kt- aap toh baat hi mat karo mujhse

Sa-kyun nahi

Kt- aap meri engagement mein kyun nahi aye

Sa- I am sorry, meeting thi I am sorry and holds his ears

Kt- it's ok

Sa-waise apke hone wale pati kaha hain

Kt- woh abhi ata hi hoga

And lakshya comes there

L-chale kt

Kt- lakshya inse milo ye hain Sagar jiju sneha ke pati

L- hello

Kt- aur ye hain lakshya

S- hi lakshya nice to meet you

l- same here

Sa- waise chale andar

They go inside where others were sitting like this

Archita ,Neev, Lakshya, Prem,Saksham,Sagar.across from

Pari, Prachi Kt, Mukti, P2 and Sneha

Saksham- Sagar tumne kuch notice kiya

Sag- nahi to

Sk- P2 aur Sneha dono ne aaj dress pheni hai

Sag- ha to

Sk- sagar tum bhi na deko jab be hum mil te hai woh dono sari phenti hai

Sag- ha mein ne to dekha he nahi, waise dress mein bhi woh dono kuch kum nahi dikri hai

Sk- who bhi theek hain

Then P2 interrupts

P2- to phir tum mujh par hamesa chilate kyun ho

Sag- Saksham that't very bad

Sk- shut up Sagar(sweetly) woh to isleye kyun ki tum jabi dress phenti ho toh tum bahot choti lagti ho aur mein nahi chahta ki koi ladka tumhare saath flirt kare

P2-oh how sweet hmph

Sagar was about to say something then Senha interrupts

S- ise kuch siko tum

Sag- kya

S- deko kitna kayal rakta hai who p2 ka

Sag- who toh mein tumhare saath hamesha rehta hoon isiliye koi tumhare paas nahi aa sakta

S-acha ji

Prem- ab khana order kare

Sk-sure

Prem-waise basantiji aap kya khana chahogi, agar aap chaho toh mein apke liye order kardu

M-no thanks mein apne aap order kar sakti hoon UD!!!!!!!!!

p-don't call me UD

M-then don't call me basanti

And they argue back and forth

Prachi- ye dono phir se shuru ho gaye

Kt- tum dono yaha mat shuru ho

Pari- bhabhi ye dono to kuch nahi, aap aur lakshya bhaiya toh college ke phehle din pe kitne jagd de the

Lakshya kt stares at each other

N-waise abhi bhi nahi badle hain dekhna shaadi ke baad bhi jagda karte rahenge, hai na lakshya

L-chup!! tumhe to mein Chodunga nahi

Kt- kyu isne kya kiya hain

L- kt plzz mein tum se nahi neev se baat kar raha tha

Kt- toh kya

L- toh, to woh mera bhai hai

Kt- toh woh mere devar hain( then she realizes what she said )

N- thank you so much bhabhi

Kt- mein '.mein abhi ayi ( she goes to the restroom)

N- (neev laughs saying) bhabhi shermagai

Senha- exuse me mein bhi abhi ayi

N- neev smiles and looks at lakshya's face

In the restroom

Kt was crying and Senha comes running in

S- kt tum theek to ho na

Kt hugs sneha

Kt- mein aisa nahikar sakti

S- I know kt, ye tumhare liye bohot he mushkil hai

Kt- you know usne mujhe aaj text kiya tha ke who mujse mil na chata hai (she stops crying and shows senha the text)

S- ab tum kya karo gi, I mean agar collage main kisene tum dono ko sath dek liya toh.

Kt- mein lakshya ko sab kuch bata dongi, I know ki who mujhe samjhe ga

S- hatum theek keh rahi ho

Just then p2 comes in

P2-kt tu theek toh hai na

Kt-ha I am fine

P2-toh chal chalte hai

Kt-ha chalo

Three of them go

End of part

Hope you like it

Who do you think kt is talking about?

Stay tune to find out 😳

Edited by Radhakrishna123 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

thanx for udpate...after so long!!

lol
wow so who is this guy?? - i hope kt get's a chance to tell laksh about this..
plz udpate soon!!
btw - thanx for the PM!
mucho love
Sadi*
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: sadizzle

thanx for udpate...after so long!!

lol
wow so who is this guy?? - i hope kt get's a chance to tell laksh about this..
plz udpate soon!!
btw - thanx for the PM!
mucho love
Sadi*



ya sorry for the late update😊
will really continue soon
😛
and Thank you for your comment😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
I just read this whole fanfic(took a few days) and its just superb. I love all the couples. Wonder who the new guy is.
Plz continue soon
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Originally posted by: vid_hurry

I just read this whole fanfic(took a few days) and its just superb. I love all the couples. Wonder who the new guy is.
Plz continue soon



Thank you very much for you comment👏👏
Will try to contine soon😛

Edited by Radhakrishna123 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
here is the next part
Part 29-
The Next day
At bajaj house:-
Everyone was having breakfast.
Prerna- suno tum teeno kal se chutti lele na theek hai
Prem- per mommy shaadi ke liye abhi ek(one) week hai
Prerna- ha par bahot sari shopping karni hai aur tayaria bhi toh karni hai na, aur ha ye shaadi bahot dhumdar se honi chahiye
Prem- right mommy, akhir ye meri pyari si behen ki shaadi jo hai
Prachi-hmmmm
Prerna- kal dinner kaisa tha
Pra- it was really nice momma, aap ko pata hai prem mukti ek dusre ke saath lad rahe the aur phir lakshya jiju aur di bhi chalu ho gaye
Pre-prem tu mukti ko humesa kyun chedta rehta hain
prem- kyunki it's really fun mujhe bahot maza ata hain use tease karna aur waise bhi woh meri dost hai
Pre- tum dono kabhi nahi sudroge
Prem-correct mother india!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Bajaj- kt beta tum kuch bol kyun nahi rahi ho
Kt- mein kya bolu papa
B- tum khush toh ho na beta
Kt- ha papa, agar aap sab khush hai toh phir main bhi bahot hi khush hoon
Kt- acha waise prem aaj thoda jaldi chalte hain mujhe library mein kuch kaam hai
Prem- library mein kyun?
Kt- who kuch kaam hai please
P- theek hai toh chalo prachi
Pra-jee
At college:-
Prem, prachi and kt reach there
Kt- mein abhi ati hoon theek hai
Just when she was about to leave mukti comes
M- hi guys
Pr& Kt- hi mukti
P- lo aa gayi
M- tumhe koi problem hai
P- tum mujhe baat kar rahi ho
M- nahi main carse baat kar rahi ho
P- oh bichari car
M-Prem
P-Mukti
M-tumse toh baat karna hi bekar hi hai
P-thank you basanti
P-Prem I mean UD kitni baar kaha hain ki mujhe basanti mat bulao
Kt- CHUP!!! Main abhi ayi
Pra-di jaldi karna ok
Kt- ok
M- use kya huwa
P- zaroor tumhari vaje se hi
M- mein toh abhi ayi
Pr- tum dono na kabhi kuch nahi samjo ge
Kt goes to the library look around to find that person
?-Kt puts his hand on her shoulder
Kt turns around and sees a boy
Kt- Raunak –she smiles
The end
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Posted: 17 years ago

I AM SOOOOOOOOOOOO SORRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRY😭, I DIDNT reply b4, i read the 2 parts now, it's wonderful, awesome, cant w8 to know what happens n can we have a picture of raunak, or is jatin shah playin da role, plz update soon. its awesome, cant w8 to read the next part

update soon plz

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