SS: A Day That Never Ends!! prt 3 pg 4 12\13 - Page 3

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kooliio thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
#21

hey minku😛.....

ohhhh tumne itni jaldi update kardiya😲😲😲......

mujhe yakin nahin hoo rahan hai😆😆😆....
waise it was a great part👍🏼😛😉......
poor bani...feeling sad for her😭.....
is she gonna be normal again😃
hope soo😉...jai hai na😛😆
plzz cont.soon😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#22
hey mink
that was very sad..poor bani! and jai too
it sounds scary reliving the same day!
anyways cont soon...waiting for jai's reaction and how he handles the situation!
moon=)
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Posted: 17 years ago
#23
hi minks,
sorry for not commenting on the last part...
rly sweet story so far
poor bani!!
i hope jai would make her better now..
waiting for nex part
do continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#24
jinny - arre jinny dont u worry eveythin is gonna be gud in the end....jai nay jaane diya kyunki bani dint know him.....aab he'll try again na so dont worry lol.......aur bani well wat can be said bout her.....just read on....it wont be that sad from nw on 😃
swati - yaar i have stopped tryin to decipher,,,,,,,,and i am not gonna update until u tell me what u have written....so aab u decide weather u wanna read d nxt prt or not hohohohohohohhoho!!!!

niruba - sowwie teacher ji i just couldnt resist mentioning 19th june...but hey it was a special day for ks so made it a special day for my SS too lol.......... arre i always update fast....its just that ppl make me delay it....ppl like swati above lol

phool - jai wont give up so dont worry sweetie :)

ducky_euro - m sry u found it sad.....hope it will get better for u in d future.

cm - hmmm about bani i dont know cm.....u'll have to read to find out lol......arre i was goin to update today too but this swati made me stop lol.......aab tum usko bolo to tell me wat she wrote nahi toh no updates lol

moon - yeah moon when i saw that movie 1st i thought it must be really scary...thats y those emotions touched me so much and i luv that movie thats y writing this story

teenzs- arre no need for sowwie yaar it quite alright....atleast i know u read my ff...u werent silent na so thanxxx :).....hmm u'll have to read to find out if jai makes bani feel better or not :)

Edited by minks - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: swatinarang

badi daadi ma, loved the part

so JW is gonna work on her memory problem, waise tum ne phir si meri bani ko problem diya instead of ur haathi😡 why u did not make haathi suffer from that disease 😆
really emotional part and it was not at all long but lagta hai is umar mei itna likh ke aap thaak gayi hai, koi baat nahin next time jara lamba sa likhna okay.
mai jo akhe hunda dhayan rakhi nahin tha meda khalla hosi ta teda saar😆 me gonna run now
do continue soon
aap ki poti swati

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minku
i will try my best to translate the above bold letters
it is
if i dont keep my eyes on u then it would be ----- and ur head
can get the word khalla hosi
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Posted: 17 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: jeenal20

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minku
i will try my best to translate the above bold letters
it is
if i dont keep my eyes on u then it would be ----- and ur head
can get the word khalla hosi

thanxxx jinny 😃😃 u r gud.......lub u 😃😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
#27

dhamki: plzz make ur comment in hindi or English or Marwari lol....the author doesn't understand any other lang. And if u cant comment in hindi or English thennnnnnnnnnnn it will be appreciated if u become a silent reader like many others hahahaahahahahaha

CHAPTER THREE

Back to present.

Jai had gone to airport to see maasi off to haridwar (hahahahahahahaha)...........the next day went to the restaurant earlier than usual to talk to aditya.....aditya saw him and asked him "what r u doin here pal?".....jai replied "i wanted to talk 2 u bout bani" aditya shook his head and said "i have said whatever there was to say regarding bani, and i think it will be better for u to forget about her.....and i will appreciate it, if u leave her alone....i wont let u hurt her in anyway or take advantage of her condition....u get that?"

Jai was hurt by wat adi said and replied "i thought u knew me better than that pal.....do u really think i will ever try to take advantage of bani or even try to hurt her in any way....i just....i just want to know her..... i like her.....i want to be her friend for now that is it...... just let me meet her plzzzz" aditya was unhappy about it but said " jai i know u pal, and i know u wont ever take advantage of her but with the way ur going in the end either u will be hurt or u will hurt her and i don't want that to happen to either of u, i still think u should let her be."

Jai said "aditya i have thought over it very seriously and i'll be honest with u..... i think i luv her, i don't know hw and i don't know y.......but i luv her.......and whatever u said yesterday doesn't makes a difference to me....the day before yesterday when i talked to bani....i got to know wat a beautiful person she is from inside as well as outside.....and from the amount we talked i could feel that she liked me too......i just want to explore my feelings for her adi that's it.....just let me talk to her, get to know her.....i wont hurt her.... i promise....and i will back out the moment i realize that i am hurting her someway or other i promise....just let me........."

Thought he dint want to but in the end adi succumbed to jai's argument but what really made adi let jai go near bani again was that he could clearly see the love jai had for bani in his eyes, so he just couldn't refuse and he thought maybe by spending some time with bani....jai would be able to get her out of his system.

Adi said "ok pal, i am goin to let u meet bani....but d day i feel that it is not good for bani....u will have to back out.... u get that??" jai agreed happily....so then adi said "so hw r u gonna talk to her today?? She doesn't knows u as far as she is concerned" jai smiled and said "oh hi have my own charm....u just wait and watch"

So when bani came that day and went and sat on her usual chair, jai went upto her after a while and said the same thing he had two days ago but this time the reply he got from bani was not the same, bani said " ohh so u r the owner of the restaurant???" when jai nodded his head happily, bani replied angrily "get lost u sucker, i know the owner of the rest. Very well....so try some other tactic to flirt with a grl....nw go b4 i call the real owner and get u thrown out" jai tried to put in his to cents but bani cut him short by shouting "are u goin or not??"

Jai realized adi was not goin to help him out on this one so he just dejectedly scooted off the restaurant.....where aditya joined him after coming out from the back door and lafed his head off at his and mimicked jai "i have my own charm.....u just wait and watch hahahahahaahahahaha charm indeed hahahaahahahahaaha so wat happened to ur charm jai hawhawhawhawhawhaw my bani is a smart gurl she wont fall for u stupid tactics hahaahahhahahaaha i have my own charm"

Jai just looked at adi and said "alright had ur fun???.....so this time it dint work out but there is always a tomorrow and i will get her to like me tom. U JUST WAIT"

And this was the beginning of many encounters between jai and bani....somedays bani liked him instantly and somedays she wouldn't let him come near her at all......but in the end of many encounters jai was now sure that bani was indeed the love of his life and he was willing to do anything for her and he was pretty sure that deep down inside her heart bani luved him too.

Aditya had been the witness of all these encounters between jai and bani and by now he too was pretty sure that jai had fallen in luv with bani but he saw no future for jai and bani together and he was pretty sure that jai would end up hurting himself pretty badly by the end of all it so he decided it was time that he called bani's father and tell him about jai....he was sure that nishkant dixit will make jai understand that he had no future with bani and would keep bani away from jai somehow.................to be cont.

Edited by minks - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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meeeee 1st
my comments
gr88 part minku dear
wow jai and bani getting close
and loved the way bani talked to jai saying u are a big flirt
hehehhee
that was so hilaous
and minky update se pehle u have wriiten a nice line
i hope dii ko akal aa jaye
and aditya ko koi roko
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont soon
Edited by jeenal20 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#29

Hey mink,

Read the last two parts!!! Very good indeed, you fast forwarded it so fast. Anyways looking forward for jai and Nishikant's meeting!!!!

God bless

Dhani
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Posted: 17 years ago
#30
Ha I'm wearing my glasses correctly and i'm gonna say it again...it was SHORT....and i mean it....
i have got my charm.......this is sooo true.....JW dream man...kiss ne kaha i'm bani fun....lol i'm....but JW is may babe....cant get my mind off him....damn!!!!!!!!!!
great part...cont....it is dificult to see how JW will win bani.....so i decided that i will not watch 1st 50 date...i will wait untill your ss hasnt finished....then i will watch it.....lol
sonam

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