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kanu!!! welcome to d nutters corner....and big sorry for delayed reply..i c we have a hindi versin nutter here...we needed one....gud hvin u here!! :)

missy patel....ur realization is alwaz stalking mine right?...it comes well n good, but now a month after it hit me hahahaah u slow coach.....snow it is indeed n wat beauty i cant help but smile despite the horrible fear of this fortnight dam school wish i was a kid again, or maybe older much older to take exams lolzzz....but then perhaps i wudnt feel so alive with all this around the beauty the mesmerization, yes this maybe the age for it, toi wish to enjoy when each moment is a struggle greater, perhaps thats why the enjoyment also tastes a wee bit sweeter??!!!....

oki beautiful verse, um running out of my printing quota for the term n cant help but print out all ur work anywaz....jeez its dec already who cares i cant run over in like 15 daz can i??? :)

lovya hun, for this....n the beautiful thanx giving verse....it touched a cord, most things u pen u, u make each so special, iv given up on claiming favs!

lov,

nj

thanks missy for great welcome 😊

This beautiful land on which i stand,
which makes me feel an existence
an existance which lives a life , without a crawl.
The fears to fall are far away deep in the water,
coz i know u wont let ,the upright figure mixed with the flat dome .
I look around and all i see is love,
love which you made me fall for,
love which u taught me , telling me all the time.
if you want to be loved , you gotta be lovable.
and here im with all that i could confine in me ,
ever so peaceful , ever so content.
Content with the thought that u are still there invisble to me ,
content that im still a part of your thoughts .

Originally posted by: spln

missy patel....ur realization is alwaz stalking mine right?...it comes well n good, but now a month after it hit me hahahaah u slow coach.....snow it is indeed n wat beauty i cant help but smile despite the horrible fear of this fortnight dam school wish i was a kid again, or maybe older much older to take exams lolzzz....but then perhaps i wudnt feel so alive with all this around the beauty the mesmerization, yes this maybe the age for it, toi wish to enjoy when each moment is a struggle greater, perhaps thats why the enjoyment also tastes a wee bit sweeter??!!!....

oki beautiful verse, um running out of my printing quota for the term n cant help but print out all ur work anywaz....jeez its dec already who cares i cant run over in like 15 daz can i??? :)

lovya hun, for this....n the beautiful thanx giving verse....it touched a cord, most things u pen u, u make each so special, iv given up on claiming favs!

lov,

nj

hahahah!!it had 2 be now..cuz u got tem storms ten but i ddi today..ahha n i was rooted at d same spot..wer i do everyday..lol! i had 2 rite it..oh yeh!!
i soooo wanna get dne wi skool...its 2 wweeks...n every class givin us more shocks...papers..finals..feel lke m drownin in tis whirpool bt i thot i knew swimmin...bt it juss wnt do now!!heheh

buttt gladdddd u like ehheh...n d thxgivin verse too...n d 2nd para was so apt..u all leave me blushin dt crimson cheekz all d time!! never spare me ever!!!! c nw m goin purple abi!! lmao!!

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nij ☺️

Originally posted by: *Kanu*

thanks missy for great welcome 😊

This beautiful land on which i stand,
which makes me feel an existence
an existance which lives a life , without a crawl.
The fears to fall are far away deep in the water,
coz i know u wont let ,the upright figure mixed with the flat dome .
I look around and all i see is love,
love which you made me fall for,
love which u taught me , telling me all the time.
if you want to be loved , you gotta be lovable.
and here im with all that i could confine in me ,
ever so peaceful , ever so content.
Content with the thought that u are still there invisble to me ,
content that im still a part of your thoughts .

kanu...bravo!! i abs luved yur verse...dt was such piece of class...niceeee...and d repetition on d right words..it gvez a deeper effect..d choice of words...ahh! wat more can i say!!..wer u been all tis while...aah!!
u gottaaaaaaaa rite more often!! ohhhhh yahhhh!!!

i just came across this post today..and i must say it's tooo funny...is it still too late to join? lol .....btw ..we just write funny stupid verses right?

Originally posted by: missypatel

kanu...bravo!! i abs luved yur verse...dt was such piece of class...niceeee...and d repetition on d right words..it gvez a deeper effect..d choice of words...ahh! wat more can i say!!..wer u been all tis while...aah!!
u gottaaaaaaaa rite more often!! ohhhhh yahhhh!!!

thanks missy... it was one of my passions ..and my luck ifound out this thread..

i once started reading naseems back to newtons law and she writes so brillianty and so deeper....

Here is something i wrote weeks ago :

is that really you ?


in the warm sunrays, that embraces me
giving me a friend to walk with
in the dark night, that dreads me
giving me a friend to share with
when i look around myself, all i ask is
is that really you ?

in the shadow of trees, that covers me
giving me a friend to feel protected with
in the chirping of birds, that tickles me
giving me a friend to laugh with
when i look around myself, all i ask is
is that really you ?

in the cool breeze,that blows past me
giving me a friend to smile with
in the rattling of leaves, that entertains me
giving me a friend , to giggle with
when i look around myself , all i ask is
is that really you ?

in the dark clouds, that hover above me
giving me a friend to fly with
in the lightening thunders, that scares me
giving me a friend to cry with
when i look around myself, all is ask is
is that really you ?

in the drizzling rain, that drains me
giving me a friend to dance with
in the smell of wet earth, that fills me
giving me a friend , to be home with
when i look around myself, all i ask is
is that really you ?


when i look at myself, all i ask is
is that really you ?

shud i write one more 😉

where have you been all the time ,
hiding from my vision,blocking all that i cud see.
Yes , u do mean eyesight to me .

where have you been all the while
oblivious to my smile, distracting all that i cud feel.
yes, you do mean sense to me.

where you have been this long
untouched to my touch, holding all that i cud hold
yes ,you do mean touch to me .