FF: Is this Love?? UPD. (Pt. 32a Pg. 76)

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Manusha

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Posted: 17 years ago

#71

Very cute,i am imaging there pose for the pic,too cute,continue soon.

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Vidya

@Vidyaa

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Posted: 17 years ago

#72

Hey Priya!

The update was soooooooooooo cute !!!

Divya realized Amar is not that bad. Im happy about it.

In this update I would like to thank Sonia......

And Jay andPrachi are sooooo cute together. Amazing date they had.

The update was mindblowing. It was tooooooo gooood.

Just loved it.

Thanks a ton for such a lovely update.

Loveeeddddddddd it.

Thanks sooo much.

Vidya

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priya

@Priya_SD

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Posted: 17 years ago

#73

Manusha--thanks sweetie! lol yes i tried many things to make that all work out! but that jsut seemed the most natural!

Vidyaa--awww thanks hun! shout-out to Sonia! Jay and Prachi are defin. toghether. Amar and Divya is where the twist is going to enter. WAit and watch!!

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Radika

@svforever

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#74

Priya hun! I am speechless! You're just toooooooooo good of a writer! I mean your ideas and the scenes that you make between Divya and Amar are justtttttt tooooooooooo cute! How can you do that? Are you a child prodigy or something? Anyways, please continue tom and thank you so much for the longgggggg update! Can you give a long update tom also? Pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee? Bye! Luv ya!

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Saniya

@BMTDlvr8

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Posted: 17 years ago

#75

OMG THAT WAS AMAZING HUN!!! I LOVED IT!! especially the part where amar's plan backfired at him.. ha.. i cant wait until ur next update. keep it up.. luv ya girl!

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Kimberly [ nickname = gg~ ]

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Posted: 17 years ago

#76

Priya - an excellent update! 👍🏼

Awwww ... Jay and Prachi are such an appealing couple! They are sure they have feelings for each other, but are still a wee bit tentative about those feelings. So darling! 😊

Now Amar and Divya - there is quite the pair. Their road to romance is going to be more dramatic eh? heheee Shame on Amar - spiking Divya's drink, that was not kosher! But, Karma stepped in with payback eh? He deserved that! LOL

And Poor Divya, she just isn't sure what end is up at the moment. Wonder if those "plans" of theirs are going to backfire on them soon? 😉

And Sonia playing "matchmaker" with the star-crossed love birds - too funny! Your potrayal of Sonia was sooo good! 👏

Really enjoyed your update Priya - looking forward to the next one! 😊

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Pooja

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Posted: 17 years ago

#77

Its a wonderful update Priya.......absolutely loved it..........

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bmtdluver

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Posted: 17 years ago

#78

hi Priya, luved the update!!! really cute! someone is starting to like someone?? right(meaningful wink😉(means that better happen if not,, you have to do extra updates:)) ). thanks for the update! it was really, really, good. later ps- update when you can, hopefully soon!

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priya

@Priya_SD

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Posted: 17 years ago

#79

Part 6:

Amar opened the door to his apartment, and sat down. Sometimes, Jay would crash in with him. And today was one of those days. Amar slowly walked in, and nearly fell on the couch.

Jay: What happened to you? You're not drunk right?
Amar: No...I was supposed to mix something on Divya's drink. But the dumb waiter gave it to me.
Jay: That's what you get dude.
Amar: Hey I had to get her back.
Jay: But it backfired on you.
Amar: Whatever. But she's not so bad.
Jay: Told you.
Amar: So what's up with her sister? Are you good?
Jay: Yea...
Amar: Good. So are you gonna show your mom?
Jay: Well, I mean I want to make sure were definelty....
Amar: An item?
They both laughed.
Amar: Hey hand me the laptop. The party probably is on the school website.
Jay: Bro, you think it's on already? You just got back.
Amar: (laughs) Yea I know. But things get posted fast around here.
Jay: So what's on it?
Amar: Oh nothing...we were put into dance partners randomly by ticket..and Divya was my partner.
Jay: Are there pics?
Amar: Yeha look.
Jay saw the pictures.
Jay: You know you and Divya are in there right?
Amar: WHAT??
Jay: Yea look here. It says couples of the night. You guys are the fifth one.
Amar: Ohh this is bad....
Jay: What happened?
Amar: Divya is gonna kill me. Or...atleast somebody.
Jay: Why what happened?
Amar: Divya was like obsessed over this not being seen by anyone. And if she finds out, she's gonna blow.
Jay: Whao...Jay: Dude you'll be able to handle it. You have a pretty high status. But Divya? No offence.
Amar: Yea I was thinking that. Oh well. I mean it's not that big of a deal. Or is it?
Jay: Uhm...no "friends" take pictures like that Amar. And you guys aren't even friends.
Amar: So what? I mean it's just a picture! It could've been photoshopped.
Jay: But why would anyone photoshop a picture of you two? It's kinda random...
Amar: Yea, but you're making a mountain outa a molehill. Relax!! And it's Saturday! By Monday whose even gonna remember?
Jay: Don't take this so lightly Amar. People will get the wrong idea.
Amar: Ok well, I'm going to bed.
Jay: At 12?
Amar: Yea I know...but I'm just tired today.
Jay: Ok...

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It was Monday morning, and Divya was walking with Prachi to the lockers. Every now and then, people would look at her and whisper something.

Prachi: Divya?
Divya: Bol?
Prachi: Is everything ok?
Divya: Yea..why?
Prachi: No it's just that...everyone keeps on looking at you..
Divya: Ya I know...I honestly have no clue.

Just then a few girls walked over to Divya. They were smiling.

Girl: So..you and Amar huh?
Divya: What??
Girl: Yea Divya!! At the party....you get what I'm saying?
Divya: Yea...he was my dance partner...and??
Girl: You're so nieve honey!! Have you not seen the website?
Divya: What website?
Girl: The school website!! Be sure to check it out!! Ok well gotta go!
Divya: Ok...seeya..
Divya turned to Prachi. She had a confused look on her face. But Prachi looked stern and demanding.
Prachi: What exactly happened at that party?
Divya: Nothing! (whiny) I mean it was normal! I don't know what got into everybody!
Prachi: Then why is everyone acting so weird?
Divya: No clue.Prachi: If you say so...but Divya, I'm telling you. Something's fishy..
Divya: It's probably nothing! She was just messing around I guess.
Prachi: Yea ok. Well seeya I gotta go to math!
Divya: Bye..

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At the end of the day, Divya walked over to Prachi.

Divya: Ready to go?
Prachi: Umm...how about we stay later today?
Divya: What?
Prachi: Yea! Come on let's go to the library. Then we can get a computer and see what everyone's talking about.
Divya: Yea ok let's go!!
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Divya logged in, aned went to the school website.
Prachi: I don't see anything...here go to Raji's party.
Divya clicked on it. Nothing about her showed up..atleast not so far.
Prachi: Hmm! Nothing! Go to photos.

Divya went, and her eyes went from squinty, to wide. There was her and Amar's picture, the first one there. And it was the one Sonia took!! It had..whoa...125 comments. Divya clicked on it. "Divya and Amar?? Wow!! I would've never guessed!" "These two? Are together? Really? Cool." and this was the worst.."Divya?!!? In clothes like that?? And she's that close to a guy??...Whao..didn't see that coming."

Prachi: Divya???!?!?!? What's that? You allowed someone..to take a picture like that?
Divya: Ohh--my--GOD!!! (voice weakening) I told Sonia--n-not to put that pciture anywhere!! She-h-had it on her phone.
Prachi: Sonia? What's wrong with you Divya?!? You know she gets a new phone like, every week! She could've given it to somebody!
Divya: I didn't know that?
Prachi: This is awful Divya..what are you gonna do?
Just then Divya stood up.
Divya: Where's Amar?
Prachi: How would I know?
Divya turned her head to look at Prachi. She(Prachi) looked kind of scared and confused. But Divya's face, all you could see on it was rage and anger.
Divya: WHERE IS HE?
Prachi: I dunno! Probably near the main entrance somewhere.Divya started walking. Prachi was behind, her trying to reason with her. But it was no use. Divya was mad. And when she was, nobody, not even Prachi, could stop her. Divya walked behind Amar and turned him to face her. Amar's friends, Jay and Arun got up. People gathered around (well, mostly guys)

Divya: What the hell Amar?!?
Amar: What?
Divya: Why is our picture on the internet?
Amar: I don't know! I don't run it!
Divya: Why are you so calm!? Don't you care?
Amar: About what?
Divya: What people will think dammit!!!
Amar: It's just a picture! Chill.
Divya: How do you expect me to chill?!!? It may be easy for you! You probably take pictures like that with a different girl every week!!
People: Oooooooo!!!!
Amar: Shut up!!
Divya: No I won't shut up!
Amar: If you're so pressed over the picture, then why would you let someone take it?
Divya: It's not my fault! Sonia made me take that!
Amar: Well that's too bad isn't it!!
Divya: You better get it off of there!
Amar: Uhmm...I don't think so! You want it off then you take it off youself.
Divya raised her hand to slap him, but Amar grabbed it. They were only a couple centimeters away from each other. Everyone's eyes were practically glued to them. Prachi tried to get into the middle of it, trying to stop them. But Jay didn't let her.
Divya: Let go of me!
Amar: What if I don't?
Divya: Shut up and let go of my hand Amar! You will regret this!
Amar: What are you gonna do about it? Go tell on me? Trust me, if you do, don't think I'll just sit around and do nothing about it. I'm Amar Singh, Divya.
Divya tried getting out of his grip. But she couldn't. Amar pulled her close. Divya looked up at him, tears in her eyes.
Amar: Don't forget it Divya. I can do anything.
He let go of her hand. Divya looked at him for a second and then grabbed his collar.
Divya: If you, ever dare to touch me again, I will make your life miserable.
And with that, she left, leaving Amar standing there confused.

Precap: Amar is thinking of how he can get revenge on Divya.

Edited by sharad+divz4evr - 17 years ago