thoda saa pyaar hua hai ALL DA PARTS - Page 2

immm bacc!!!!!
logged in after two days.... searched and came here first......so wheres the next part???
btw loved the whole agar tum miljao bit....very sweet... 👏

did u liked it this much??????

Part 5
Sorry for the delays no time to type it up!
First Scene

(Then Shruti is back from Khandala)

Akshat: di, aaj aap bohot arsey baad itni khush nazar aarahi ho kya baat hai…?
Shruti: nahi bas aise hi
Tulsi: Beta, kaisi ho? kaisa tha tumhara trip?
Shruti: it was really excellent ma!
Tulsi: Beta, Shruti ek baat mein tumse kehna chaah rahi thi ki…
Shruti: Kya
Tulsi: kay ab tum jawaan hogayi ho ab kamaanay bhi lagi ho aur to aur
Tumne apni post graduation bhi khatam kar li hai
Shruti: to…?
Tulsi: to shaadi
Akshat: what ma?
Shruti: kya ma shaadi? Aur mere itne crucial moment mein main itna bada bhoj mein nahi utha sakti
Tulsi: to kab beta kab
Shruti: ab to time hain naa maine kaunsi badi shaadi itni jaldi karni hai
Dekho maa agar main haan bolti bhi hoon shaadi kay liye itni jaldi koi accha ladka kaise mil sakta hai
Tulsi: haan beta wohi to mein tumsey kehna chaah rahi hoon kay ek ladka hai meri nazar mein
Akshat: what? kon hai wo
Tulsi: wo sab chodo
Shruti: nahi
Tulsi: kyu kya kharaabi hai usmey ladka khaandaani hai, raeez hai, paise waala hai,
Apney daddy ka radio station ka managing director hoga aur kya chaahiye tumhey?
Shruti: nahi maa mein shaadi vaadi nahi karney waali
Tulsi: shaadi nahi karna chaahti ti mein shaadi talwa deti hoon ok
Shruti: agar yahi baat hai to yahi sahi rahega ok maa

Next Scene:
Aryan & Shruti are in the sea side
Shruti: Aryan kaise ho?
Aryan: accha bhala hoon kyun?
Shruti: ghar mein main jawaab de de kar thak gayi hoon mein
Aryan: kis baarey mein aur kya?
Shruti: maa to yahi baat lekar kay baith gayi hai kay shaadi kay baarey
Shaadi main ne talwa di hai lekin pata nahi aagey kya hoga?
Aryan: seeda seeda keh do ki tum shaadi nahi karna chaahti
Shruti: ye bhi keh chuki hoon main kya karoo
Aryan: ye sab tension chod do tum
Shruti: promise me that kay tum mujhe chodogay nahi promise me kay meri jagaa koi nahi lay sakta
Aryan: I promise you

Next Scene:

The whole gangs of College friends are invited in coffee day to have some fun over there
Including Sumit and Kumkum.

Sumit: Hi
Kumkum: kaise ho pinic ke baad to miley hi nahi
Sumit: dekho normally mere paas time nahi rehta hai naa
Itna bada singer hoon to time kaha rehta hai?
Kumkum keeps staring at Sumit and then the background song starts:

" Chaahe tum kucch naa kaho maine sun liya
Kay saathi pyaar ka maine chun liya
Chun liya maine sun liya
Pehla Nasha pehla khumaar naya pyaar hai naya intezaar
Kar loo mein kya apna haal aye dil e bekaraar mere dil –e-
Bekaraar tu hi bata"

Kashish: Dekho is baar Diwali ka function aa rahaa hai to lets have some fun na
Sujal: hmm Kashish sahi keh rahi hai kucch khaas karna padega
Kashish: see guys I have to go now think and call me Kumkum ok bye

Next Scene:

In Kumkum's hostel room Kashish comes to discuss about Diwali party

Kumkum: hey hi Kashish what a pleasant surprise?
Kashish: you live here?
Kumkum: yes off course koi shak
Kashish: nahi dekho tumhara room to koi fan club lag raha hai
Kumkum: hmmm hai to.......
Kashish: Tumhare room mein to saari ki saari Sumit ki posters se full hai
Kya tumne kabhie bataaya ke…
Kumkum: kya…? Kay mein uski fan hoon haa bataaya
Kashish: anjaan mat bano mein jo pooch rahi hoon uska sahi jawaab do
Do you love him?
Kumkum: tum bhi naa kahaa ki baat kahaa tak le gayi?
Kashish: I asked do u love him?
Kumkum: yes I like him
Kashish: dekho mein tumse zabardasti isliye kar rahi thi kyunki
Sumit jaise celebrities apney aap ko kya samajhte hai
Jahaan ladki hai wahaa chale jaatey hai
Kumkum: ye tum kya keh rahi ho
Kashish: yahi keh rahi hoon ke tumhe jaldi sambhal jaana hoga
Jaldi keh do until its too late…
Kumkum: ok tum kehti ho to…

End of episode
Tata

good part dilwali contd. soon

haila!!!!!
is kashish creating probs btw kum-sum or is sum really not a nice guy????

hey guys i am not getting positive comments i mean so many ppl read it and then no reply and then what about the part5?

Part 6

Kumkum is really happy that she is going to say her " dil ki baat"
She is waiting for Diwali a special day for Kumkum to propose her love Sumit
And then she is in the college dreaming about Sumit and the Diwali day to arrive
And Suddenly Sujal goes to Kumkum says that:

Sujal: hi
Kumkum: hi
Sujal: ye jo tumkar rahi ho wo kuch theek nahi kar rahi ho
Kumkum: kya theek nahi kar rahi hoo Sujal?
Sujal: yahi tum Sumit ke saath
Kumkum: hmmm
Sujal: wo sahi ladka nahi hai tumhare liya plz uska peecha chod do
Kumkum: kya?
Sujal: dekho mein uski guarantee nahi de sakta uske bare mein to plz mein tumhe kuch anhoni ka andeshaa de raha hoon
Kumkum: dekho sujal aap mere se bade hain to main aapki izzat karti hoon lekin mein ye aapke baat se bilkul sehmat nahi hoo
Sujal: wo accha ladka nahi hai
Kumkum: aap apney bhai ke bare mein aisa keh rahe ho Sujal?
Sujal: Jaise tumhari marzi…

(Us waqt Kumkum ke sar mein Sumit ke pyaar ka is qadar nasha chaaya tha ki usey kucch nahi sooj raha tha)

Next Scene:
(In the college class)
Kashish: Salaam Namaste Sujal!
Sujal: Hmmm
Kashish: Sujal kya huwa…
Sujal: Kucch nahi
Kashish: Kucch to bolo
Sujal: Nahi dekh sakta mein
Kashish: Kya sujal kya nahi dekh sakte?
Sujal: (screams) Nahi dekh sakta main ek ladki ki zindagi barbaad hote huey
Kashish: PATIENCE! Kiski zindagi barabaad hotey huey
Sujal: Kumkum khaas karkey aisi ladki ki jis key pyaar bohot mainney rakhte ho
Kashish: Hmmm bola to maine bhi tha lekin uski marzi kea agey kucch nahi
Sujal: Main usey kaise bhi bacha loonga

Next Scene:

Shruti kept on dreaming about whichever moments they spent together

End of this episode
Will Sujal rescue Kumkum? Is Sumit a true lover or simply playing with girls?
So stay tuned !

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gr8888 part diwali_sshh.continue soon. 😛

i am not getting replies as every one gets over in this fan fic... but y????? 😡

IT'S VERY GOODplease cont fast