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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: jaan 234

wow sari excellent great👏👏 .............. dono part bohat achay hain bohat maza aaya read kar ke ......................robbie mouli part so funny mein bohat hass rahi thi ....................maza aaya 😃.................sari weldone........................tahnx for ur lovely comment mehak luv u darling

mehak 😊

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: robbii

part 5
good raunak and kasturi are bro and sis....................looks gud as sibling
yaar y this robbie is so worst...make him good soon dear.i cant tolerate robbie to be sooo bad and mean to kasturi.ufff...................... arey its attitude man😉
part 6
robbie said:oe moti zara sambhal kay sari class hila di..i love that dialoge.🤣..........😆
i like mauli the moti character............i like it toooooooooo
kasturi laughs on robbie👏.yepeeee...........................yes😆😆
good going.i like the way u write................tahnx keep reading luv

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: cutykoo20

HAPPENING ROKA SCENE COMING TOMORROW............................

thank u soo much cutykoo.....
awesome parts......pls post next part soon.....bcoz i'm eagerly wiating for dat roka scene n for ro or ka to fall for each other.......mouli is really awesome.....her dialogues are fantastics......2nd day itself test......wat a hard-hearted person is prof. agnihotra......so rude n mean.....ur writting is awesome......continue fast!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: RoKa PraNeev

thank u soo much cutykoo.....
awesome parts......pls post next part soon.....bcoz i'm eagerly wiating for dat roka scene n for ro or ka to fall for each other.......mouli is really awesome.....her dialogues are fantastics......2nd day itself test......wat a hard-hearted person is prof. agnihotra......so rude n mean.....ur writting is awesome......continue fast!!!



soon he will fall for her
mouli is funny man
i had that kind of strict prof. so i added him in rokas life😆😆😆
thanx for appreciating my writing skill n my ff
keep reading
updating now
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Posted: 17 years ago

FF: PYAR KI KAHANI SUNO''''''''. PART 7

Its break time.

Mauli and kasturi going to canteen.

Mauli: oh yaar mujhe to buhut bhook lag rahi hai

Ka: haan chalet hain canteen

Ma: aur prof. ne to aur bhook barha di

Ka: kia matlab

Ma: jab bhi mujhe dar lagta haina mujhe buhut bhook lagne lagti hai

Ka: I m worried about this test tooo pata nai kia hoga

Ka: waise test main wo jo unhon ne project dia tha kal wo bhi include hoga

Ma: oh shit mujhe to is bare main kuch nai paat I wsa absent.

Ka: I will help u

Ma: oh thanx yaar

Ma: chalo meri to kafi parhakoo larki se dosti hui hai is saal main definitely pass ho jaongi

Kasturi smiles. Raunak comes.

Ka: bhayya aap?

Ra: haan kasturi wo actually''''..he seees mauli wid question mark on his face?

Ka; oh ye mauli hai my classmate aura b friend

Ka: aur mauli ye mere bhayya hain.

Mauli: hello nice to meet u

Ra: kasturi daikho maine tumhara id form attest karwa dia hai main jama bhi kaar dete per is main tumhari sign chahye tu ye tum ko khud hi kerna parega

Ka: ok bhayya main kaar longi

Ra:' aaj hi karaan hai administration block jao aur ID section main submit kara do.

Ka: ok''''..she takes all documents from him.

Ra: hey mauli umko admin block paat ahi na

She moves her face in yes direction.

Ra: tum isko le jao aur abhi jao nai to admin band ho jayega

Ma: hmmmmmmm mujhe bhi kaar an hai hum abhi jate hain

Raunak leaves.

They go towards admin block

Ma: bas yaar lambi line na ho

Theres no line.

Ma: shukar jaldi chal nahi tu ''.

Mauli grasps her hand n push her towards ID section.

Mauli was first in line.she gives her docu for approval.

Man: ye yahan pe ek photo aur lage gi

Ma: yahan pe?

Man: jao le kar ao

Mauli to ka: yaar main abhi ati hoon mere bag main photo hai ok tum yaahn se hilna nai jagah chali jaegi aur jaldi se apna karao''..

Ka: ok jao

Kasturi gives her form''''''she hears sum recognized voice from next section.

Guy1: are tum do to

Admin man: tum log bhi kia kia karate ho ye lo paper ki copy

Boy 2:ye correct test paper hainna? Prof. agnihotri ka

Kasturi astonishes on prof. name: zaroor kuch garbar hai

Admin man: are aap mujh pe shak kar rahe hain ab agar dhoka karma hi hai tu khol k hi na''''..per zara mera kharcha pani de dijiye ga

Guy1: mil jaega jab dekho mangte hi rehte ho

Guy2: mohan mil jayega ok hum chalet hain kahin koi daikh na le

Kasturi moves to see who are they. Its somi and Robbie.

Ka:ye itne gir gaye k test paper chura rahein hain uffffffff

Both sees kasturi who was ascertain on them. Robbie looks fiercely kasturi.

So: oh yaar is ne daikh lia

Ro: no probz yaar ye kuch nai kar sakti

Both leaves.

Ma: tumhara ho gaya

Ka: haan per ''''

Kasturi is astound wat she looked.

Ma: hato mujhe kaarne do nai tu ''..

Ka in heart: job hi ho mujhe kia raunak bhayya ne bhi Robbie se door rehne ko kaha hai'..wo job hi kare mujhe kia'''''.

But her conscience puling her to say truth and dun win criminals'''''but she dun want to interfere in his matter. She knows how brutal he is.

''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''

SARI

Edited by cutykoo20 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

FF: PYAR KI KAHANI SUNO''''''''. PART 8

AFTER BRAEK:

Ka n mauli sitting in the class. Mauli notices ka is so upset.

Ma: kasturi r u ok

Ka in upset mood: yaar ek baat hai jo khatak rahi hai dil main

Ma: kia mujhe batao

Kasturi tells her everything about robs gang she saw

Ma: ye log to hain hi aise per inhon ne paper leak kia that's crime

Ka: haan aur unhon ne mujhe daikh bhi lia k I know everything

Ma: are tu kia hua wo koi don thori na hain k tumko ura dainge chill kar

All class students comes inside the class for next period.

Its mam sonia's foreign affairs class. But prof. agnihotri comes.

All students shocked to see him in this period.

Prof> to mam: I want to talk to u plz excuse me

He takes her out of the class after some time prof. enters in the class

Prof.; aap log mujhe daikh k parishan honge k main is time pe class main kia kar raha hoon

All students worried

Prof.: actually main aap se ye kehne aay hoon k parson ka test cancel ho gay hai

All students breaths of relief 'jaan choti baal test se'

Za: kuch gar bar hai

Sa: yea I m sure kuch buhut bora hone wala hai meri dain ankh pharak rahi hai

Robbie dun bothers'''''''''

Prof.: aap poochain gay nai k kion test cancel hua

Prof.: kionk test paper leak hua hai

Now its robbie's turn to worry

Za looks towards Robbie she knows ye Robbie ki hi harkat hai

Za whispers wid robs: Robbie ye tum ne kia ahi na

Robbie' facial expression can say everything

Za; omg robbioe agar inko maloom ho gaya to tum suspend bhi ho sakte ho

Robbie knows it very well prof. is very strict he cant expel him from uni but he will inform mom dad about this matter and he doesn't want to listen mom dad's lecture.

Prof.: so ab aap log itne bare criminals bhi ho sakte hain

All students moves their face in no direction

Prof.: aap main se wo job bhi hai wo mujhe bata de warna khair main ye pata laga hi longa k admin k kis aadmi ne paper leak kia hai

Prof.: koi us k bare main kuch janta ahi

Mauli cant leave this opportunity to catch Robbie

Mauli says to ka: kasturi tum sir ko bata do

Ka: no I cant

Ma: but why

Ka: main is Robbie k chakkar main ani parna chahtin

Ma: yaar tum usse dar gain

Ka: baat darne ki nai hai per us pagal Robbie k chakkar main nai parhtin

Ma: no kasturi ye ghalat hai tum yoon har nai maan saktin

Mauli: sir ye jantin hain k wo kaun hai''''''.she tells to sir

Mauli raised her hand constraintly.

Prof. to kasturi: stand up

Kasturi looks mauli in anger.

Ka unwillingly stands up

Ka: yes sir

Prof.: do u know him\her

Ka looks towards Robbie. He looks her like that if u say anything u will die.

Ma: bata do kasturi daro nai

Prof.: y r looking back say do u know or not

Her conscience pulling her to say truth to sir.

Ka: yes sir

Za looks towards him how kasturi knows

Za: omg ye moon na khol de

Prof.: daro ani aur bolo

Ka closes her eyes and recite 'gods name in mind and condemnly said

Ka: its Robbie n somi

Ro n somi's face watchworthy. She belied their effort totally. And they caught in crime.

Prof.: mujhe andaza tha ye in musuf ki hi harkat hogi sab se ziada ulta dimagh inka hi chalta hai

Prof.: aap dono mere saath ain gay

Kasturi has no dare to see in robbie's eyes. He is gazing her fiercely.

Prof.: ao kia invitation dena hoga

Prof. leads them to principal's office.

THE END


SARI

Edited by cutykoo20 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awesome part......but scared dat wat ro will do to ka for saying this.....shit!!!mauli put kasturi in danger......update next part tomorrow itself or if u can today😉😆😉.....bye.....and once more very very very nice part!!!
Edited by RoKa PraNeev - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
sorry roka praneev

may be u will find roka scene bit thanda not happening buh when he will fall for her i garuntee u u will hav fun wid my ff

keep reading
luv u

sari
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Posted: 17 years ago
very nice parts.....😊....robbie will take badla now....😭
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Posted: 17 years ago
Wow amazing parts
loved them awesome
Hopefully ro wont hurt kas
but im sooooooooooo eager to read the next part
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update soon.

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