Kya Pyar Aisa B Ho Sakta Hai?? part-80+ note -175 - Page 21

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Posted: 17 years ago
HEY ISHANKI,
ITS OK...
WE WILL KEEP WAITING...
PLEASE DO POST IT AS SOON AS POSSIBLE 😊
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KYA PYAR AISA BHI HO SAKTA HAI- SECOND JOURNEY…

Days: Monday-Thursday

Time: between 6:00p.m- 8:00 pm

PART- 24….

It's 6:00 o'clock, riddhma and armaan were ready..

A: riddhima tickets check kar li??? (Riddhima nods) to phir chalein…

Finally they reached airport, announcement had been done for their flight..

After few minutes they were settled on their seats…

A: riddhima tumhe kuch khana hai??? subah se kuch nahi khaya tumne….

R: (putting her arm around his arm making a lock and leaning her head on his shoulder, closing her eyes) nahi armaan, mujhe neend aa rahi hai..

A: kitna soti ho yaar, kal subah se so rahi ho, neend nahi puri hui abhi tak… mere bare mai to koi sochta hi nahi hai.. (making a puppy face)

R: armaaaannnnnn… mujhe neend aa rahi hai..

A: tum kitni unromantic ho.. (but riddhima had already lost in her dreams, armaan looked at her, finally kissed her on her cheek, then caressed her hair, she smiled in dreams also, armaan put his arms around her shoulder, now her face was on his chest)

Finally they reached jammu, and did taxi for hotel…

Reception: yes

A: I'd booked one room with double bed..

Re: ur name plzz..

A: armaan malik..

Re: yes sir, ur room no. is 155, plz sign it here…. After all the formalities armaan and riddhima retire to their room….. it's 7:00 o'clock in evening

A: riddhima kal subah hum chadhai shuru karenge, jayda saaman na lena, carry karna

Mushkil ho jayega….

R: haan armaan maine alag bag laga liya hai,

A: riddhima dinner bahar lene chalna hai ya yahin par order kar de…

R: armaan yahin par order kar dete hai, I'm tired…

A: riddhima saare raste soti hui aayi ho, abhi bhi thaki ho??? Ye line to meri honi chahiye thi, abhi tak meri arms aur chest mai pain ho raha hai, ek to itni moti ho aur uppar se saara bhar mujhpar daal diya, haaye mera haath bechara ( he caresses his hand)

R: kya kaha mai moti hun??? (she throws pillow on him)

A: aur kya kha kha ke tunn tunn hui ja rahi ho, (before riddhima cud react, knock at door, waiter cums in and took the order, finally leaves)

After dinner, both changed their clothes, finally, riddhima sitting on bed supporting wall and armaan was lying on bed and his head was on riddhima's lap, continuously staring each other, don't know what happened, riddhima little bent down and kissed his eyes, then forehead, then cheeks….

Armaan really enjoyed this, then put his fingure on his lips, riddhima slightly blushed, then put hands on his eyes and closed them, start caressing his hair, both were enjoying their silence romance… after sometime, armaan shifts to his pillow and riddhima stretched out on bed, put off the lights…

In mid night riddhima felt very cold, blanket was not enough, she shifted towards armaan, and put her arm around his waist, they were face to face (sideways), his body was so hot, riddhima felt so relaxed, his hot breathe was doing wonders this time, riddhima slightly moved more close to him, to cover herself in him.. she was feeling so comfortable, now she was asleep….

It's 7:00 in morning, armaan cell start ringing, he slightly opened his eyes,cut the call coz he was in no mood to attend it, then again closed his eyes, but quickly opened it and was surprised to see himself and riddhima…

He was half lying over riddhima, his arms around her waist, and riddhima's arms were around his chest, their faces were crossed, they were so near, so emersed in each other

When armaan was wondering riddhima also opened her eyes, their faces were so closed, that armaan's nose was touching her cheeks with very little gap between their lips….

Armaan slightly kissed on her cheeks…

A: gudmrng basket…

R: (she felt his breathe, feeling tickly in her body, closed her eyes..)

A: waise aapne raat ko kya kia tha hamare saath jara vistaar se batayengi…

R: maine kya kia.. (very sweetly)

Armaan now shifts completely over her, move his head towards her neck so that she cud feel his breathe.. which was doing havoc for riddhima…

A: bataun kya????

R: (slightly whispers ) armaaannnn…..

Though riddhima was unable to control her body reactions for this close contact yet she was enjoying, she wants to put her arms around him, but… knock at door…

Both didn't like this interruption, but.. but…….

Armaan got separated with her, she was blushing, when going to open the door armaan pulled the blanket over her to neck as riddhima was in her night suit…

Riddhima liked his possessiveness… waiter came in for giving newspaper and bed tea…

Armaan again got a call, it's from ritu…

A: (giving cell to riddhima..)

R: hello..

Ri: hiii, gudmrng.. pehle kyu call katti, kya kar rahe the tum dono??? (she naughtily asked that question)

Riddhima blushed and looked at armaan, then: kuch nahi..

Ri: kuch nahi, matlab sab kuch… bata na????

(armaan took the cell, as he had heard what she was saying)

A: rituuu… yaar hum so rahe the, abhi abhi uthe hai, kyu subah subah chep ho rahi hai, pata nahi chirag kaise jhelta hai tujhe…

Ri: armaan tum wapis aao phir batati hu tumhe to…….

A: theek hai, par tab tak ke liye to baksh de hume…

Ri: wo kya haina ki chirag ko pni bahen ki badi fikar ho rahi thi ki wo tum jaise langoor ke saath theek bhi hai ya nahi isliye phone kiya tha…

A: (fake anger) tune mujhe langoor kaha, tu chipkali, (chirag took the phone)

Ch: kyu tum bacho ki tarah ladte rehte ho, tu bata kit um theek se pahunch gaye the aur kab chadhai shuru karoge….

A: haan theek hai, bas thodi der mai nikal rahein hai…

Ch: okk then byee, take care, enjoy..

A: byeee…

Riddhima already gone for bathing, after sometime when both were ready to go,

R: I luv u armaan… (hugging him from back)

A: oe hoye.. I luv u too jaan…

Then both leave for their yatra…. Armaan had already gathered all the information, means from where to start, what to see etcc.. etc….

Their taxi finally stopped from where the actual yatra starts… they stepped down from taxi, both were not wearing their footwears…

Armaan went to yatra registration counter and took the yatra slip…

Now they were finally starting their yatra, both were happy… they crossed the darshani darwaja, their first step… they showed their slip at banganga check post….

After walking few meters their first stoppage that is banganga arrived, they stepped down.. and settled on base, looking the flow of ganga….

R: waoo armaan kitna saaf aur nirmal pani hai, kitna sundar lag rahi hai ganga maiya, maine aaj tak itna sundar naajara nahi dekha…

A: haan, kehte hai mata ne dharti mai teer mara aur ye ganga prakat hui thi…. Tabhi

To itni saaf hai..

People were bathing in this water, sumone told them to take bath, then proceed forward…

Riddhima was wearing a casual suit, so she decided to get down in water in this suit only and armaan put out his jeans and shirt…

Armaan first stepped down in water, it was too chilled as if ice, he gave his hand to

Riddhima so that she cud easily come down..

As soon as she put her leg in water she stepped out and sits on ground…

R: armaan ye to bahut thanda hai, mai nahi naha paungi..

A: pani ke andar aa jao, dekhna khud thand lagni band ho jayegi…. He opened his arms wide so as to take her in his lap..

R: nahi armaan mai nahi aaungi, finally armaan from water put his arms between his legs and thighs and one arm holding her from back, lifts her up, riddhima shouting- nahi armaan, bahut thanda pani hai….

But armaan finally dropped her in water.. she was screaming mummy kitna thanda hai (like a baby) and enclose herself in his arms.. armaan also put his arms around her… both were standing like this until riddhima felt better…

And the other people were enjoying them, from riddhima mehendi and her chudda everyone understood that they are newly married…

A: riddhima ab bhi thand lag rahi hai????

R: nahi, ab theek hai.. (finally they realized that they were in public place, they got separated)

Riddhima naughtily spilled water on him, armaan in return did the same, both were enjoying very much, playing with water then holding each other hands jump in to water together…. (pehle pani ke andar jane ka mann nahi tha aur ab pani se bahar aane ka mann nahi tha..) after sometime they both get out..

Armaan started changing her clothes, riddhima took out her clothes from bag and searching for bathroom… stopped someone…

R: kya aap mujhe bata sakti hai ki bathroom kahan hoga????

Lady: yahan bath room to nahi hota, aapko nahi pata??? Yaha to saare chunni(duppatta), bedsheet ki oat (shed) banakar change karte hai……

She left after saying this and riddhima was still confused,wondering…….

Ok that's it for today……

Love ishanki….

Sorry for late update…. And thanks for ur support… do tell me ur views abt the part.....

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Posted: 17 years ago
awesome part dear......gud work keep going.......
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Posted: 17 years ago
HEY ISHANKI,
ITS ROCKING YAAR !!
WAITING FOR THE NEXT PART TO COME !!!
YOU ARE REALLY A TALENTED WRITER :)
KEEP WRITING :)
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Posted: 17 years ago
HEY ISHANKI,
ITS ROCKING YAAR !!
WAITING FOR THE NEXT PART TO COME !!!
YOU ARE REALLY A TALENTED WRITER :)
KEEP WRITING :)

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Posted: 17 years ago
hey ishanki wowwwwwww yaar their fstday rckng yaar muje bhi swo din yaad aa gaye jab main gayi thi wow i realy enjoyd it awwwwwwwwwww thnku sooooooooooooo mch fir se yaadein tasa kardi bacho ki tarah khel rahe the wo bhi cold watr mein gud........ridz lft confusd haye kab romantic se prt ayega...........
cnt wait
cont sooooooooooooon
luv yachna
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Posted: 17 years ago
Ishankii think u are north Indian b;coz all rituals ,wedding ceremony,
Vaishno Devi yatra 4rm Katra all that stuff is in Punjabis. Its exactly held
the way u narrate.I seriously felt that i am attendingsomeof my realatives marriage.AnywayTHANX.
BYE & GOOD NIGHTšŸ‘šŸ¼
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Posted: 17 years ago
aww that was a great update! please continue soon...
love,
mona :]
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Posted: 17 years ago
heyy.....that was an awesome part!! plz continue soon! :))
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Posted: 17 years ago
HEY ISHANKI,
U R GOING TO UPDATE TODAY NA.... šŸ˜›
IF YES, PLEASE DO UPDATE SOON ....
WAITING FOR THE NEXT PART .....
PLEASE DO UPDATE SOON . . . 😊

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