FF- - When Love comes in....UpDt......Prem returns - Page 42

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Posted: 17 years ago
update plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz waitinggggggggggg with a long part asap.
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Posted: 17 years ago
Cool haan?.............Sab kuch mujh par hii chod diya tum sab ne..........Chalo kuch sochi hoon..........😳😊
Baaki a common thnx o all of u...........Its diwali time isliye I'm busy like hell these days...........but ofcourse enjoying it!................Iss hhaftey short updates............next weekend pukka long one..............Thanx once again.............😊😃
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KD is all smiles too as she says-- Haan pata hai…………bas abb Prem kii birthday party mein koi kami nahiin honee chahiye…………samjhaa?............Aur mainne maa se baat karkey unse bhi permission le lii hai…………….bas abb tera kaam yeh hai kii u have to make sure…………..kii aaj Prem baraah bajey se pehle ghar mein kadam naa rakhey……………

KD continues telling Preet the complete plan of action-- Dekh baujii kuch saat bajey ke kareeb ghar se nikleingey………….main toh bachchon ko baaahar gumaane ke bahaane se……shaam mein hii Heer ke paas jaongii…………Baujii ke jaaney ke baad……….Harman maa ko lekar aa jaayega………..Veera mere saath hii hogi………………Abb tuu lunchtime mein ek baar Prem ke ghar zaroor hokey aaiyo………..aur kal kii party mein music kii zimedaari bhi teri hii hai………..Decorations ka kaam mera hai………….Kal kii party kaa menu Veera already decide kar chukii hai………….lekin cake laaney ka kaam tera hai…………….Sab kuch samajh gaya naa?

Preet is excited and replies-- Kya baat hai KD?!.................aap toh ek dum kamala hain……….mere kuch sohney se pehle hii………….aapne sab kuch plan bhi kar liya?!...................Abb aap bilkul fikr matt kariye dii…………..Sab kuch aisa hii hoga……………..Prem bhiaya kaa Heer bhabhi ke saath yeh janmdin yaadgaar hoga……………..One of its kind………….and I'll make that sure………….

Preet then asks KD-- Waise dii………..vo chotey shaitaan kahaan hain?..........kya kar rahe hain teenon?...................

KD laughs and replies-- Vo teenon……….vo apney Prem maamu ke liye B'day kaa card banaaney mein busy hain……………….

Preet is all smiles as he says-- How sweet………..

KD says-- Chal abb main phone rakhti hoon………….aur haan………….baujii office ke liye nikal chuke hain…………….bas pahonchtey hii hongey…………….Bye……….apna khayaal rakhnaa Preet…………aur yaad se dopeher mein Heer se mill aana……….Abb main phone rakhti hoon…………Bye………….

And with that KD………..keeps the phone down and walks out of the door into the hall…………unaware…………that someone was overhearing her talk with Preet……………….closely monitoring each and every detail she had told Preet during her convo with him!..................

Any guesses as to who it was?

If not………….u will soon find out…………….

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Posted: 17 years ago
its awesomeeeeeeeee too god update soon plzzzzzzzzzzzzz asap.
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey this seems to be moving along pretty well, can u bring this to some end.... because maybe i cant think that creatively but would u kill prem while he is at odds with his father??? or get them together quick and then kill him.... but it is upto you ofcourse, the writer has the decision
looking forward to ur update :)
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Posted: 17 years ago
Hey!
awesome update!
who is it????
I wanna know...lol!
?xXx?
Sunayna
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Posted: 17 years ago
Thanx sweta............I'll be posting the next part very soon.............
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Thanx fj08...................Glad u liked this update too..............I may be the writer but at the end of the day its for u all that I write dear..............so ur suggestion does matter.............and yes I'll be winding up this track soon.............lekin Prem's B'day bash will take around two weekends............isliye sometimes middle next month the new track will begin.............
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Posted: 17 years ago
Thanx sunayna.................glad u liked this one too dear............Who was it u will soon know
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Alright all of u here's the next part...............Hope u all will enjoy this one too..............

Well it was DJchachi…………..and she stands giving her usual devilish smile………And making sure there was no one in vicinity she thinks to herself…………..Achcha toh kal Prem kaa janmdin manaaney kii taiyaariyaan ho rahi hain?................

Vishakha comes there and seeing her mom in deep thought with a devlish smile on her face………….Vishakha wonders what was on her mom's mind………….she walks upto her and asks her-- Mom?..........Aap kinn khayaalon mein khoi hain?

DJ replies in her usual flirtish manner-- Prem Juneja ke…………aur kiske khayaalon mein kho sakti hai yeh DJ………yeh pehla aadmi hai meri zindagi mein jissney meri raaton kii neend udaa dii hai…………aur din ka chain bhi loot liya hai……….usssi ke baarey mein soch rahi thi………..

Vishakha is taken aback and she says lowering her voice…………this time tapping her hand on DJ's shoulder-- Mom! Kuch soch to lo kehne se pehle…………..

DJ seems to come to her senses all of a sudden and fumbles at first and then says sternly-- Abb kehne kaa nahiin karne ka waqt hai meri laado rani………….uss Prem ka kal janmdin hai…………….Yeh DJ uss raanjhey ko ek aisa tofha degi………….jisske baad naa toh vo chaen se jii paayega………..aur naa hii marr paayega………………….aur yeh tohfa hoga………..uski apni Heer se hameshaa ke liye judaai…………….phir meri beti………………bejhijak apne pati ke saath iss ghar mein reh sakegi………..aur meri doosri jhallan doli mein baith………..iss ghar kii bahu banker aayegi……………..aur uss mayoos aashiq kii biwi………………

Vishakha is elated and she quips-- U r just tooooooooo good mom……………

DJ replies—Jaanti hoon…………bas abb tuu jaldi se jaakey manmeet ko sab kuch samjhaa aa…………..Kya kab aur kaise karma hai………..sab kuch……………

Vishakha says a yes and leaves from there……………..DJ chachi calls someone and is seen giving instructions…………….Samajh gaye naa?................Abb koi gadbad nahiin honi chahiye…………………..theek hai?.....................

With that she disconnects the phone and says to herself-- Taiyaar raho Prem……….apni Heer ko hameshaa ke liye khoney ke liye……………aur iss janmdin ka tumhaara sabse yaadgar janmdin bantey dekhne ke liye……………..aaj iss din k eek ek pal ko………..har ek lamhe ko usske saath bita lo……………kya pata?...............Kal ho na ho?.................

Teher Preet is seen sitting in the office………..busy attending phone calls and signing files……………..not realizing that it was already lunch time………………..

He takes a look at his mobile phone………………only to find ten missed calls frim KD's mobile…………..He wonders as to what must have happened………….and he hastily calls back to her………….wishing all the while that everything be well………….

Kaisa laga?

Jaldi batao..............

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