FF: THE HIDDEN CINDERELLA ~ Part26 UPT pg151 mar19 - Page 26

Originally posted by: shareen

The update was superb.I really enjoyed reading it.Thanks 4 the surprise.

Originally posted by: angel 16

parth firstly thanks for d pm n for d beautiful surprise .....seriously u made my day n even my holidays also by updating this beautiful n lovely part............👏.........i luved it completey..............very nicely written part.......each n every dialouge is perfect n amazingly written..............👏.........simply awesome n lovely........really ur an awesome writer...................⭐️ aagin for ur writing n ⭐️ these stars for giving us this surprise................parth i hope we will witness the similar surprise very soon ...............😳.....i m despirately waiting for nxt part wat will dj do wid heer or wat wil prem do?????????

wid lov

heena😊

Originally posted by: mireen19

mindblowing....2 gud

really enjoyed

waiting for next part....

Originally posted by: lian

Hey PB😉i just love surprises hope we ll get this kind of surprises often😃

now about this part it was tooooooooooooooooo good!!awsome mindblowing!!!U know wht it had bring tears in my eyes👏

👏

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👏Thousand Claps for u,

i was wrong this DJ is as crule as the real 1,i just wish tht Prem take away Heer frm this hell.

Originally posted by: .xganga.x

Woow...fantastic part!

I loved the Premeer scene!

I hope Dj doesn't kill her!

looking forward to Saturday!

?xXx?

Sunayna

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Originally posted by: Ghia

it was awesome...👏👏 At first when I read the "SURPRISE" i wasnt sure whether to read it or not because I was scared that it will be something bad...but it was really good. 😃 thanks for making me happy because I was really sad after thursday's episode😊

Originally posted by: ravioli_11

Hey bhaiya. So sorry I haven't commented on the past updates

Here's how much I loved them:

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I can fill the whole page up with the smilies but I think you get the idea. Omg poor Heer. I feel so bad for. And Dj is just...urgh! Her and Vishaka make me want to swear in punjabi. I hope they pay for how they treated Heer. Poor Heer. Wonder whats going to happen to her now that Dj and Vishaka know everything and are waiting. I hope Prem comes and saves her. I loved how Prem made Heer feel that she is important to someone and that she is loved. It was written really well! I can't even describe how much I love your writing. Can't wait to read the next update😊

Originally posted by: anushka10

hey bhai u really rockedddddddd with ur surprise
premeer scenes are excellent, fabulous, marvellous, i forgot words to describe the scene.
u deserve this
👏
even this is not enough
omg wat will DJ do to Heer now
i am really afraid of thinking that.
i remembered one quotation
may be u are nothing to the world, but for smeone u are the world

i remembered this quotation when heer is thinking abt prem and his careness towards her.
i have three predictions for the next part

1 may be prem thinks that something bad is happening to heer and he rushes to her house to check her safety and sees DJ beating her, and prem comes and saves Heer or Prem while going to his home wants to tell Heer something and again goes to her home and sees DJ beating Heer badly and then we get to see his angry side

2 Heer's dad comes suddenly to surprise Heera and sees Dj beating Heer badly and he kicks DJ out and consoles his daughter

3 DJ beating Heer badly , noone comes to rescue her and Dj locks her in a room and does not allow her to meet Prem.

hope anyone of my prediction comes true or may not , that is in your hands 🤣

Originally posted by: Alina Zaidi

Hey PB ur surprise is really gud!!! i hope we often witness it!!!
u knw bhai whenever i read ur part so i find it better than the before!!!
n really hats off to ur creativity u knw bhai u really have a long way to go!!!
u rocks!!!

luv Alina