Davia's FF: Krishna part 52 + note Pg 70 - Page 28

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Posted: 17 years ago
Great part
I really love it
Can't wait for the next part
Please continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
note :thanks to all of the people who commented and keep commenting here is the next part
mein pinky new in bachha party!

31.jai was sitting in his room he was not allowed to drink due to ganpathi festival so he was in fumes.. adi comes to talk to him jai says adi jai: how could u do this to me adi sab jante hue bhi tum ne muje doka diya. How could you do this to me? I thought that you are my best friend, how could you hide the fact that I have fathered 3 kids which I didn't know of their existence

ye kehta raha kii ye tumahre dosti kii grankids hain jab kii. ye Bache mere hain(u always told me this kids are ur friends' grandkid when actually they were my kids )' how could u adi? muje tumse to aise umeed nahi thi.. tumne aaj muje sabse jyada hurt kiya.. sab jante huye bhi bhii why adi.. manta hoon I did a worng but that doesn't mean I should know that they are my kids. and break down and sit back in the sofa.. .

Adi: What if I ask you back the same question? How could you do this?

Jai: What are you talking about?

Adi: How could you ra*e Bani just like that and now you want to claim rights on the kids? How could you Jai? I didn't expect this from you.

Jai: I admit that I r*ped her but at that moment I was very angry that I lost my cool. I wanted to apologize but it was late

Adi: Do you know in what condition that she was when you left her like that? Thank God at that time I was at home, if not you won't be seeing those kids also.

Jai: What are you talking about?

Adi: When you left, she was so devastated that she almost commited suicide. It was lucky that I came to your room to tell her something that I saw what she was about to do. When I stopped her, she fainted so I called the doctor. She told me that she was raped and wanted to inform the police about this. I told the doctor not to do this as I was worried what is going to happen to you. I also know that she will be questioned by the police and this will effect her even more so I pleaded with the doctor not to tell the police and she agreed.socha jai what u have done .

jai says I don't tell I don't feel guilty on things I did.i feel guilty and bad and learning what u said I feel more guilty for psuhing bani to kill her self but I had the right to know about the kids.. afterall I am their father

aditya says jai mein janta hoon u are very angry.. and I know it is a justified anger as I hided something most important of ur life . but think of the situation which I was in.. if I said u.. what would have happen?just think.. kyunki jo gusse mein tum te us waqt I was scad that if u come to know about ur kids u may force bani to anything waise bhi wo bahut dari huyi thi.. woo is halat mein nahi thi jai that she could face against anyone upar se uski pregnancy mein uski tabiyat bahut karab thi.. she needed bed rest.. aur todi bhi stress uski zindagi ki katra hosakta ta.. too agar mein sahcyahi batane keliye use maj bhi kardeta tooo problem hojata ' kyun jab mein us baare mein baat karane keliye bani ke paas gaya ..

flashback 'in nainital ,bell rings.. pia open and says uncle aap.. haan woo bani se she says andar ayiye woo didi puskar aur rano hospital gaye hain for scanning as doctor ne kaha kuch complication hain isliye.. she murmur sab us mr walia ki bachhe ki wajese.. adi says mein unse hospital mein hi milta hooon pata to chale bani kaise hain and goes.. pia says ok .

in hospital adi ask mrs walia wo miss agarwal ke patient hain wahin milenge he goes saying thank u and goes and searching goes and sees bani going with nurse and he comes and was about o call when hear doctor saying 'dekiye mr sukla as my shak sahi ta.. she is carrying triplet and don't forget it her first pregnancy soo be careful toda sa pressure bhi I mean mental ya physical stress bhi inki jaan ki katra hain don't make any talk infront of her which may cause stress r not even any person which will disturb her sense.. make sure she is in completely in rest.. ye lijiye unki songraphy ki cd . make sure woo ache cheeezon ki deken aur kahein .. (she sees and eat good things )aur bed se jayda na hele .. adi walks back and sit in the outside bench of hospital and think it is not the time'

flashback ends

adi says isliye jai I cdnt say anything.. woo is halt mein nahi tii jai.. kyunki mein kuch bhi karta .. it would have affected bani and the kids inside her.. totally it was 4 life and how can I put 4 lfie in danger? tell me jai .. whenever i w anted to say I was also scad that thinking what if she take worn and leave all with kids too kay karte hum.. if I don't say I wd at least have the satisfaction that they are in s age.. samjakro jai' he ask kay smajooon aditya.. kya.. kaise samjavoon aapne aapko kii meir bachhe mere samne te.. par mein unse anjaan bankar ta.. aur mein yahi sochta raha kii and cries' adi says I am sorry jai muje.. he says please leave me alone I need time .. he says jai please don't take any wrong decision in ur anger..

jai enter his room and start to watch the video and pictures of his kids and remember the incidents and the laughter with them.. and suddenly it strikes how come bani allowed the kids to stay here and why? he gets up and goes to adi and pull him and ask it telling how bani allowed the kids and adi ends up saying he lied.. as after seeing jai and kids he cdnt have the heart to keep them away kuch hi time sahi let u people be together.. thank to rano chicken box varna.. shayd.. jai was like oh.. she agreed after knowing I was not there and goes.. adi was like jai woo and goes he was lost and walk in the street .. unknowingly he goes to one of the ganpati pandaal there and goes to pray to give his kids back and make bani mind change'

sinduur laal chadaayo achchhaa gajamukha ko
dondil laal biraaje sut gauriihar ko
haath liye guDa laDDuu saanii sukhar ko
mahimaa kahe na jaay laagat huun pad ko jay dev jay dev

jay jay jay jay jay
jay jay jii gaNaraaj vidyaasukhadaataa
dhany tumhaaro darshan meraa mat ramataa jay dev jay dev
jay jay jay ...

bhaavabhagat se koii sharaNaagat aave
santati sampatti sabahii bharapuur paave
aise tum mahaaraaj moko ati bhaave
gosaaviinandan nishidin guN gaave jay dev jay dev
jay jay jay ...

ghaalin loTaangaN vandiin charaN DoLyaanNii paahin ruup tujhe
preme aalingin aananden puujin bhaaven ovaaLin mhaNe naamaa
tvamev maataa pitaa tvamev tvamev bandhushch sakhaa tvamev
tvamev vidyaa draviNm tvamev tvamev sarvam mam dev dev
kaayen vaach manasendriyairvaa buddhyaatmanaa vaa prakRitisvabhaavaa
karomi yadyat sakalam parasmai naaraayaNaayeti samarpayaami
achyut keshavm raamanaaraayaNam kRiShNadaamodaram vaasudevam hari
shriidharam maadhavam gopikaavallabham jaanakiinaayakam raamachandram bhaje
hare raam hare raam raam raam hare hare
hare kRiShNa hare kRiShNa kRiShNa kRiShNa hare hare

Krishna says maa mein nahi javoongi school wahan bahut saare log hote hain.. she says tuje jane hi padega.. wais e bhi sirf admission keliye too jana hain baad mein hii to school jana hain.. wahan ajvoogi nahi nahi friends mileage apni bhiayon ke saat bhi rahe pavogi she says muje nahi jaaana.. and ghus bani..she says beta aise nahi kehte.. bell rings rano open and get shocked it was pia massi with pushkar and pinky and says hiii everyone.. bani was like piaaa and smiles comes and Krishna was still upset pushkar ask are meri sweety ko aaj kay hua.. meri boys to hamesaa ki taraf mast hain.. rano says kuch nahi teir biwi par gayi hain isliye school nahi jana hain aur kuuch h hi dinon mein iski admission ka interview hain.. isliye .. pia smiles ohh isliye meir Krishna ki chera uthara hua hain.. don't worry I will tell u but it is secret between us ok.. and goes to her ears and says very simple interview mein sab galat jawab dedena so no admission and syas now give me a sweet krishu wali muskan and hi-fi.. bani and ranos same time piaaaa hmm ye kabhi nahi sudregi.. krishu says massi it is our secret and smile and hugs saying thank u massi.. pia says it my pleasure pushkar says ohh noo ek kay kam thi dusri bhi and thinks kay hoga mera.. papa finsh.. says pinky and smiles shocking pushky ' who says maa par gayi hian.. pinky shows the finshed chocolate

preview:jai talk to his lawyer ..

promo: Krishna krishna' shouts bani

enjoy eid and navarathri

Edited by lovelyreddyrose - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
so gud of adi
true frd to jai
krishna school nahin jaan chhathi hehehe
vaise yeh hota hain par muje school bahut pasand tha
gr8t part
contsoon
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Posted: 17 years ago
awesome part....
jai is sooo mean.....he should give bani some time....
plzz cont.soon
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: lovelyreddyrose

so gud of adi

true frd to jai
krishna school nahin jaan chhathi hehehe
vaise yeh hota hain par muje school bahut pasand tha
gr8t part
contsoon

not fair yaar.....u post the update and u post the first comment also😡😆😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
Jai has no right to claim the kids after giving so much pain to Bani......nice updates Davia.....please continue.....
jeevikagurl88 thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
Great update
Liked the convo between Jai and Adi
The preview sounds interesting
Please continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey Davia ... nice part ... I'm liking the way JW is feeling guilty .... want to see him crying more.... so plz do make him cry more.... 😆 ... anyways do cont soon ....
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Posted: 17 years ago
g8r part davia
loved the convo btw jai and adi
krishna is cute
even i used to hate goin to school
but now i miss it very much
ayways contin ue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago

i read few parts n m addicted..hahha

gr8 ff ... loving it ..
m still behind ..but post soon....

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