To Err is Human # 4 EPILOGUE pg 45 - Page 39

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Posted: 17 years ago
really a nice one⭐️ di so sweet😊😉 AR & AK r best di😊😉 awesome😊 ur superb di👏😊 plz make a new one😳

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Edited by kvn1983 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
san di what to say.....its awesome........i loved it...........
i have nothing to say..........u left me speechless..........
thanx di for this wonderful FF......
this was one of my fav FF & it came to end........
i will miss this FF di.......
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey amazin epilogue..JAI-ADITI..really a surprise..will definately miss ur ff...bt waitin fr new one aswell..
luv ya..tk cr..😊
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: bheegi

[quote=rima791]wonderful epi di

awwww it was too sweet and cute
i love jai, he is chooo cute
i love the part where he throws away ridz's make up and then armaan says make up ke bina he soni lagti ho tum
it was one of my fav scene from this epi
aawww i love the bracelet scene too
aww jai's first word was aditi so sweet
armaan is seriously too good with his funny lines, he rocks!!!!!!!!
angad and armaan were smarter than kripa and ridz, they were able to recognize jai's feelings
its kinda wierd though about jai and aditi but i guess its okay since they both love each other
i love the last song, it truly one of the best song, its amazing
can't wait for your next ff
will be seeing you at shall we dance

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Thanks rima...yes i can so imagine Armaan's son being naughty like jai😆😆 AA are still the same and naughty as before...of course they know how men think😉 and look at women😳
Jai and aditi are really not related by blood...so it's OK for them to fall in love
I love the songs too....esp the last one. Well looks like ur still only an AK fan...well i will see u there then
Thanks again for all ur siggies👏👏ur are truely talented

no probs!!! well like you said its okay since they are not blood related but its just wierd you know since armaan always calls kripa behna and jai calling her bua and etc.
i don't know di, as much as i enjoy reading AK i don't know i don't enjoy that much for any other couple that much (no offense to any1😃)
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey sangeetha di😊
firstly awesome surprise 😆 jai n aditi naa😳
it was a very cute epilogue😳😆
n then the best part was that one where tiny jai named aditi😆 it was soo mesmerizing
the whole event at sanjeevani the reunion was fab👏
n then the proposal wow😳
loved it all
keep writing di
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: abhilashasharma

7 months...??? was this ff going that long... well takng into the account the number of pages... this is the longest ff in IF... but... 7 monts... i cant believe...

jai and aditi.... so sweet... jai has in fact changed armaan's life... he had made him a great father... krishnagarh... cool... as is well that ends well...

Thanks abhilasha....i don't know if this is the longest ff on IF, but it is certainly my longest😆- atleast duration wise because i have written ffs with 66 parts before😕
Yes, all's well that ends well....happy endings are always welcome😊
Thanks for all ur support and hope to see u soon😊
[quote=deeya123]very sweet ending di
jai and aditi as their childrens was good.
luved it
waitin for ur next fic!!!!
i will def miss ur this fic.
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Thanks deeya....i am glad u liked the kids part. Hope to see u soon with AK ff (i don't know if ur an AR fan yet)....thanks 4 all ur support😊
Edited by bheegi - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: missypatel


awwww!! tht was soooo predictalbe..bt cme off late..dt hed utter his 1st word seein Adi!!! it struck me wen A said..tey want jai 2 c her!!!

thanks missy...yes the first word was a give away😆

luved every bit of it!! was wonderin hw tey cud form relationz as tey r bua/mama bt ten ..nt blood reln soo works!! :D
yes, that's what i figured...they really don't have a blood relation...so it's kosher😳
its always gud 2 c wen thinz r so convenient....u koe!!

luved AR/AK every bit!!i of yur best!! cudnt hve been ne better thn d way u put it..every minute detail!! ...cheerz!! hats off to u!! thanks again...

yup!! will be catchin on wit yur other two..without doubts!!

hopin for another long 1 soon!!.. no the new ones are short ffs....i need a break from long ones😆

[quote=sweet_honey]hey....dat was an brilliant part...awwww little jai triubling his mom to no ends lol......n akz bby girl.....lovd it hw jai wud grow a plant each time aditiz brokeup wid her b-f....so sad the story finishd....cnt waitn4 ur other to stories.....👏👏👏
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Thanks sweet honey....i am glad u liked the Jai and Aditi part...hope to see u soon😊
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soo cute and lovely epilogue. 👏this is the cutest one i ever read⭐️. Jai and Aditi are soo cute. I loved the way you ended the story with the welcome of new batch of interns in sanjeevani. i loved ur long epilogue. u covered everyone in it.😊😊 i will miss this FF. this is the best FF i have ever read.

waiting for ur new FFs. [/quote]
Thanks sonia.....UR compliments make me blush now...thanks again for all ur wonderful words and support through this ff. Hope to see u soon😊
Edited by bheegi - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
wooooooow ok amazing ff
its beeeen so wundrfuk to read luved readin
it al sorry i cnt cmment on al da parts
i didnt comment on but seriosuly ur wrk is fab as usual
n luved readin dem al n cnt wait
2read ur nxt ffs lkin 4wrd to it
luv niz x
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Posted: 17 years ago
awwwwww dii
u wrote a wondeful epilogue!!!
awsome story..
esp d jai n aditi prt!!
mwahh!!
lovley!!
tc
*sorry tht i couldnt comnt 4 lyk ages...i was bz wid ma finals!!but to tell d truth i was lyk a silent reader
Edited by me_iq - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: nimrah

OMG Bheegi Di! The epilogue was soooooo awesome!!!! Man I loved it sooooo much!!!!
Armaan's chunnu munnu!! That was soo cute.. Lol I liked that flushing the comestics part!

thanks Nimrah....yes armaan's chunnu munnu was just like him...poor ridz😆

🤣 Yea I understand Riddhima's worry.. she suffered so much during her delivery! Ahh Aditii!! Jai and Aditi the awesome couple!! 😍 AR had twins..how cute.. 😳 I was soo hoping they hav twins and they did! 😛 Woow abhimanyu surely changed! Jai is the musical kid and Aditi the photography lover.. how cute!! Wow Jai developed a crush on her at the age of 15.. Thats what happened in Tumhari Amanat of yours too right? though Angad was too rotten to accept that he loved Kripa in that FF!
yes, i did borrow that scene from my old ff...i guess i love childhood love stories😳
OMG Jai is soo cute.. he listens to her talks about the guys and then celebrates when she gets over them! how cute! 🤣 I would soo love to see Armaan when he's old! 😍 aww sho cute..karan loves anita! But ur wrong Aditi.. Karan loves Shraddha!
u know i just made up those name as i wrote the part...it's later i realized oops...Karan! Let's just say he is not KSG😆
😭 😛 I liked that u wrote about all the characters! 😃 Loved reading about them even if its a single line! Nice song... describes AR and AK's journey! Jai's confession was soo cute in the end!! Jaane tu yaa jaane na! lol u fitted it very well!!
tried my best to bring everyone back where they started except Prithvi of course😕 I like those songs too
Fantastic work Bheegi Di!! Just loooooooooved the epilogue as I am a die-hard fan of JTYJN! Fabulous job!!! 👏 And ofcourse ur FF has been the best FF I have ever read or will ever read! I personally feel To Err is Human is better than Tumhari Amanat of urs.. u hav outdone urself.. Faantastic!!!
I think this has indeed become my favorite ff now. TA is # 2 now😆 Thanks again for reading, commmenting and appreciating my ffs
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Please do remember to inform me whenever u strt ur new FFs.. its a sincere request..wud love to read ur ffs.. i will😊

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