Mister Greek Gods Miss Angry Eyes Ch15 PG120 21/04 - Page 18

Originally posted by: star_fan

Very nice part....very interesting....gud....

Will be waiting 4 da next part so plz do cont it very soon.....do let me know...


Thnx 4 da PM....

Glad you enjoyed it.. and did you manage to listen to the song as well?? i hope you did.. Lemme know if you think this part was boring okay??

Thanks.. Mic

Originally posted by: twinkle94

hey sry 4 tha late comment but thnx 4 tha PM n tha update! Awwwwwwwwww! tha songz were cute n tha last prt waz so romantic "because i missed you!" lolz Ridz is probobly in anotha wrld! do cont soon!

❤️twinkle!

Glad you liked it twinkle.. aand i hope the next part doesn't disappoint... Thanks so much for commenting Twinkle.. Let me know what you think of the chapter once you've read part 2 as well please..

Mic

Originally posted by: aravi

hey mic😊!!!!!!!!!!!!! i noe m comments delayed as hell ya !!!!!! cho chorrryyy😭 but luved dis one like nething it's getting better n better!!!!! da song was sooooo apt😳 happens to b KSG's fav number too!!!!!!! i c u handle every minute detail vry carefullllly👏!!!!!!!! n noe ridzy meets "her prince charming " again😉!!!!!!!!! god 's just tooo cute to her😃!!!!!!!!!!!!! by d way i hope prt 2 on it's way😆!!!!!!!!! i 'm luvinf dis FF like nething gurl!!!!!! u r just splendid😉😆😆 luv ya loads 😳 aravi

I hope you've gotten your PM!! because I'm waiting to read what you have to say about the whole chapter.. so please lemme know okay.. and thanks so much for liking the song.. and no re Aravi, your comments are not delayed.. i'm just glad i got em 😊

so thanks a ton.. and enjoy the next part.. Mic

Originally posted by: magicgirlankita

hey mic

well nice hindi try hon

amazing part

and sorry for the late comments baby

was actually out of town

well coming back to the part it was awesome

so different and cute than the others

i think this was the best part u gave hon

luved it to the core

i can imagine them dancing

they wud look so good together

luved it hon

thanks for the pm

cont super soon

luv ya

@nkit@

Ankitaaaa, firstly.. thank you for your comments.. they might be late.. but their worth their weight in gold.. anything you don't like about it babe? lemme know please.. and also the next part is out.. hopefully you'll enjoy it as much as you did the last one..

And yes just imagining them dancing together brings back memories from their first lonavala trip together..

Beautiful right?

Mic

Gosh wasnt it a killer ,such a funny potshot ,xactly vat v thought ,well sum1 really lyk d booty talk,n yup d object is pretty comfy 2,but icin was d Greek God wid d bear belly,Gosh i soooo wanted 2 b in Ridz's shoes n say all d stuff,u know her witty remarks r such a huge turn on!! well d temp was soarin way beyond 10000000 C

Originally posted by: ashluvdmg

hey!i jst read de ff nw..... n i shud sy tat u hav gt so much of brains mann!!dis ff is so damn cherishable n funny n in a wy romantic too

i m a person hu reli njys readin romantic parts bt aftr readin thru ur ff i evn luvd de parts wich r nt romantic at all

wid evry wrd u hav provd tat u r de one hus reli de ff writr of ma heart..........

especially those words n expressions wich hs sarcasm in it n AR thots ,oh ma god thy r so damn hillarious mann!!

i havnt njyd readin ny ff this much as ur ff...its way 2 gud n nt at all predictable mann!!n de ff is so damn capturin......i m in luv wid ur FF

i jst dnt hav wrds 2 sy

u hav lft me speechless...ther r no wrds 2 praise u...superb!stupendous!!awsum!!

gr8 wrk dear

pls add me in ur pm list plssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss

plssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss

i m reli despo 4 ur ff n cravin 4 ur nxt part

wen r u updatin...

plsss update asap

plssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss

pls pm kkkkplsssssss

luv u lts

ashu

Ashu, you're so kind.. and the way you've described my FF.. really doesn't feel like it's mine.. so thank you, for being so nice enough to post it.. there are many who probabbly read it, but don't bother making a comment.. but you did, and i thanks you for it..

I've posted the next part and PM'd you as well.. I hope you enjoy it, and it doesn't turn out boring.. i feel really pressurized with all the things people say about the FF so far, and I can't disappoint them by writing a boring part.. so please once you're done reading it.. let me know okay..

R's
Mic

Originally posted by: rhama2

the thoughts are xcellent!!!

keep going!!!

Glad you liked it.. i hope they continue to excite.. and ypu the next part is out... and this one's kinda an important one for my writing style, because it will probably change henceforth.. so lemme know what you think okay??

R's
Mic

Originally posted by: dmgfan19

hey mic, when's the next part yaar, i m waiting

It's here, it's here.. hope you got my PM!!

Mic

Originally posted by: charminggenie

Mic

Gosh wasnt it a killer ,such a funny potshot ,xactly vat v thought ,well sum1 really lyk d booty talk,n yup d object is pretty comfy 2,but icin was d Greek God wid d bear belly,Gosh i soooo wanted 2 b in Ridz's shoes n say all d stuff,u know her witty remarks r such a huge turn on!! well d temp was soarin way beyond 10000000 C

it was heat n pure intensity whn Armi lifted his shirt n let Ridz feel d abz,i cud really feel my handz movin ovr his abz,yummmmy,n d skin was really soft,imagine how high their nerves wud b 1st wid d sexy killer convo n then d little passion game on d dance floor,

u know vat i tried swayin 2 music wid my eyes closed sumtym back ,it was fun but not 4 odrs on d dance floor,i luv d spirit of Ridz,how hard she is resisitn fallin 4 him,or has she fallen 4 him already n is busy hidin it?

Armi ,well respect how he still cares about Sim inspite of bein totally hooked 2 RIdz,wud he b abl 2 undrstand y he is attracted 2 her,well this one is 2 watch out 4

u had me imaginin him wisperin that in my ear,his cheek rubbin again mine n he sayin thanks 4 my song,wow that was 10000000000000000000000000watt intensity,wanna know how she faced this bomb,

as 4 d writer Mic is concerned grl,u hav me as ur patient 4 sure,i adore d way u shine ur charactrs,i luv d way u add d witty one-ons,i drool ov ur intense moments n i smirk at ur booty n belly references ,all i can add is u r my supernova

Mic just one little complain d part was short ,cumon u know how hard it is 2 surviv a cliffhangr

PS this patient complainin about this doc,d doc's late wid it's dose

Okay, so you won't believe how stressed out i was about this part.. I mean.. stressed out is an understatement.. I'm not much of a mush writer.. i believe in verbal chemistry being more stimulating than a physical one.. so to bring them close as in proximity wise is extremely hard for me.. So i thank you - for what you ask - for just being the first one to read this part - it was as important as Soni being the first one to read the first chapter.. the response to this chapter can either make it or brreak it for me i was thinking.. but after reading what you had to day, and having you comment on the aspects that i particularly highlighted as fan-talk.. i'm thrilled... i hope others enjoy it as well..

once again.. it's late.. and here i am.. posting stuff online when my eyes are almost shutting.. and i'm left with nothing to say but thanks. for giving me sweet dreams.. because the night mare would have started otherwise the minute i closed my eyes imagining a damp response to this particularly important part in my FF.. but you've made it, easy for me to sleep in peace now.. and your doc promises longer parts/ chapters and more frequent updates for the next time on my dear genie...


Good night and Thank YOU!! Mic