FF-Laaga Chunari Mein Daag-PT17/Pg131-25/10 updt - Page 44

Originally posted by: michifanreal

I felt very very sad for Prachi... and am very angry with Milind. I am not convinced with his alcohol and anger excuse. - Shubz...you have the rite to disagree and i will also accept that these are not excuses for rape..how much ever you get drunk or get angry this no way to take it out on your wife......but for the sake of the story let us consider it so....😃
Why did Milind do this to Prachi? He will never be able to undo it. She was pushed to commit suicide. He better not do anything in his life to hurt her even the slightest. - I don't think he will ever do that.....but in reality marital rape happens and women do live through it and accept their husbands....
How will Prachi ever be able forgive him? Something miraculous needs to happen for Milind to get her back.
I wonder if she Prachi hadn't got pregnant that day, was there still any chance for Milind to be back in her life? - I don't there would have been a chance...but i am sure that if they were fated to be together then they would have found each other somehow in some way...

Originally posted by: KillSerpent

Aww i got time to read the FF.Pan wondefull update felt sorry for both milind and prachi.

Ayeesha amma on detective work hope she helps michi to get closer .

atlast Ritwick in his papa hands.

continue soon plueez....

Originally posted by: tweety_me14

Great to see an update after sooo long sangs!

I loved it...Ofcourse this is one of my favourite FFs....!

I loved the portion in which Milind was remembering that night when he raped Prachi...His reaction to what he did and Prachi's behaviour after that was beautifully put down.... I feel terrible for Prachi...Wonder what her reaction will be to Milind playing with Rithwik... Waiting for the next bit to know more about that....

Thanks for the update....It was amazing!

Originally posted by: optimist

Sangs, there is something else I forgot to mention. I loved the way you narrated in the incidents from her flashback and his. In hers, the concentration was from the point she escaped from his house whereas his was on the immediate aftermath of the heinous act. For her the act was something she wished to forget. That is why she seems have blocked out Milsi's reaction at the end of it. For Milsi, though the effect on her was something he cannot wipe out from his memory. That is why his recollection of the aftermath of the incident is more vivid.

Originally posted by: kubare

God Sangs darling🤗.......it looks like I am damn late....and only god knows how I missed this FF of yours after the 2 wonderfuly brilliant FF that I was treated to by you.🤗 - How could you miss it !!!😡😆 But i am happy that you finally caught up!!!😃 Phir bhi maaf karte hoon...because of the hugs...😛

Sangs darling....and what a subject to write about too...Martial Rape👏......something thats happens alot....but is all hushed up about....or women go through it without raising their voices about being subjected to it...or take it as a part of being married or their lot in life. Exactly my sentiments...i just wanted to write this FF after i watched a movie where this was the concept...i just made it around marital rape...but it is definitely a difficult subject to write about though...

Martial rape and domestic violence.....is something,.......that so many of us....ppl ignore....and very few find the courage to help that person to get out of such relationships....or help them coup afterwards.....without making them feel....unwanted or being in the wrong. - I personally know of people who are in abusive relationships but find it difficult to break free to lead an independent life...and i think that sometimes carries over in my writing too...i feel sad for those people 'cos we can't help them when they don't want to be helped...

Read the FF in one go....from beginning to the last chapter 10 that you posted as a treat on Shabbo baby's B'day.😃😆 Got hooked from the start and with you being the writer is there any doubt why.😆 - Awwwww.....Hun....you make me blush!!!😆

Loved the way you started off....to their confrontation....and liked the way....the past.......is shown.....from both their POV.👏 - Thanks..love...it was a difficult FF to begin with and it takes a lot of my energy to think through before i write the chapters..i agonized over the last chapter forever...😆...

As Shali said....the Rape scene....was quiet mildly described and I take it it was for the young crowd here...but it still did protray the emotional, physical and mental turmoil that she went through and the gruesomeness of the act it self to any woman.👏 - The only reason i made it mild was b'cos i don't think youngsters should be subjected to that kind of writing..but i did sent the original piece that i wrote to shali....😆

Your handling of this sensitive subject is indeed commendable dear.....👏

The remorse that Milland is feeling.....for the gruesome and henious act that he committed is fantastic dear...and very well and beautifully protrayed👏 - Thanks...he is still filled with guilt...until prachi forgives him and accepts it is never going to leave him alone..

Prachi reactions, feelings...turmoil, emotions, thoughts too are so beautifuly protrayed.👏 Especially loved the confrontation of her's with God.....👏👏👏that was brilliant indeed. - Thank you...thank you!!

Its good to see...that Prachi too is seeing Milland in a different light again....after what happened to her. Can't wait to see....how....they both over come this dark phase in both their lives adn move on...by healing each other in the process. As Prachi does need to get all of it out of her system...and who best to do it with then the person who was responsible for doing the deed...the person that she was married too her husband....her would be protector. - Yes..you got it rite....both of them need to heal...and the only way that is going to happen is for them to be together...let's see how the FF unfolds..

Milland to needs to....be confronted with what his act did to her....its consequences etc. - He will be....soon..

Can't wait to see what you have in store for us dear.....😉😃

Waiting (im)patiently as always.😆 - Will post the next part in a few days...😆

Love

Krishna

Originally posted by: panache

Originally posted by: michifanreal

Sangs, you have given yourself a challenge of solving this seriously difficult discomfort between Milsi and Prachi unlike most of the other Michi FFs where the problem is some misunderstanding or some imaginary trouble. I am eagerly looking forward to witness how things go ahead.

Originally posted by: michifanreal

@ Sangs,
that can't be your excuse for delayed updates.... I am sure you already have the plot in mind..
But on a serious note, thanks a ton to you for all your FFs.. I loved all of them-each different from the other and very interesting...
Wedded by blackmail is still my favourite among the four.. but this might change that..