To Err is Human #3 (AK/AR) Parts 41-56, n

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@bhanu_rekhag

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Posted: 17 years ago

#341

this part is very nice!!

AR romance is simply cool,
ridz's ipod shayari is very funny. I can't help laughing!!!

D.C trip nd nautaki baz of AR is superb!!!

nd lastly angad calling ammy is very nice

now ammy also will help AK ......

so we can c back all 4 together once again after long time!!
wow

can't wait 4 nxt part!!!

make it soon!!

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bheegi

@bheegi

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Posted: 17 years ago

#342

Originally posted by: sony_123
amazing one.👏👏 i am soo happy to see AR fighting (ofcourse romantic fights) i loved armaan, ankad conversation. especially ankad saying " Need to? Ya want to? Need to ka matlab'ehem 'ehem? " so AR are comming to meet kripa. i am soo happy that all of them are going to meet. i want kripa to tell armaan how much ridz missed armaan when he left her. i guess either armaan's or ridhima's kidney matches with kripa's. i am more afraid about AR after 42nd part. i hope they get married soon.

Thanks sonia...yes AR will get married soon....they need to😆😆 Let's see who is going to be the donor for Kripa😊

[quote=deeya123]great part di

armaan was really naughty but i liked armaan's caring nature towards kripa

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Well that's armaan for u- naughty and caring at the same time😊

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@spln

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Posted: 17 years ago

#343

hey bheegi di....that was a great part so sorry for the late comment...love armaan's character more than anyone else in here.....but thats not surprising really it usually is so!!!

n now he troubled ridzi so cutely...the other couple meanwile all grave n stuck...n now thankfully angad told armaan....more than just the love stories i cant wait to see the gang reunite!!!

awsome part...update soon!!

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Rabia

@SuhanaSafar

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Posted: 17 years ago

#344

Originally posted by: bheegi
Yes, Miami is indeed one of the prettiest and fun cities in the world. Thanks for taking the time to read and write ur wonderful reviews. I gather u will resume ur old ff too?

Eh, let's hope...I'm having a major "lack of inspiration" + laziness problem right now. I'm also not happy with the way HKA is going. Will have to give it some thought. I'll try to update TMAS within a few days.

Part 44

Uff, besharam Armaan...hospital mein bhi shuru ho gaya! Love his overly dramatic antics though. 😆 "Tho is gori ke saath maujja shaujja kyun nahin maanate jee?" <----Lol! That was so funny coming from Riddhima. Since when is she so clever? Looks like she didn't mean it though, since she's so adamently against the date. She shouldn't have tried to mess with Armaan...he'll always win! Awww, Rahul and Muskaan were only there for a few seconds! I want to know more about how things are going with them. And Riddhima shows a different side of herself once again with the phone call to Laura! I guess Armaan's return in her life has some dramatic consequences. 😉 The "nude portrait" conversation was hilarious! Armaan kabhi nahin sudhrega...Hehe, I was wondering how and when Ridz became a poet, but she was just repeating the lyrics to a long, lol. Oh well, I'm sure it's still from the heart. Finally Armaan and Angad talked! I was waiting for the two couples to get connected with each other again. It's so sad to see Angad break down like that...but I guess it's important for him not to bottle up his feelings. I hope Armaan and Riddhima will both return to India to be by Kripa and Angad's side. They really need their best friends to give them the strength to face their situation.

Wonderful!!! Looking forward to the next one. 😃

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swetha

@bary

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Posted: 17 years ago

#345

omg where is darpok ridhz,i really like her becoz of that many scenes like mango tree,sanjeevgarh after she drank,when she danced in armaan's party etc look,i mean feels like awesome,ya new avatar of ridhz is also nice.
tumne pukara aur hum chle aayi,i still remember the last episode of shilpa,it is the charm,raat ka nasha,if shilpa is in it,i can feel the nasha,ok
can i say one thing?i think u r so romantic,so ur ff's r also romantic.
thanks 4 pm,desperately waiting 4 next part.

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bheegi

@bheegi

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Posted: 17 years ago

#346

Originally posted by: kvn1983

great part bheegi di😳😳 ur too gud such a touching one😳 please continue it soon di and thanks for making it specially for AR 👏di its really a touching one

thanks Nidha....yes this last chapter was dedicated to all AR fanatics😊

"Uski Batein To Phool Hon Jaise
Baki Batein Babool Hon Jaise
Choti Choti Si Uski Do Ankhen
Do Chameli Ke Phool Hon Jese
Uska Hass Kar Nazar Jhuka Lena
Sari Shartein Kabool Hon Jaise.
Kitni Dilkash Hai Uski Khamoshi
Sari Batein Fezool Hon Jaise.
Uski Batein To Phool Hon Jaise
Baki Batein Babool Hon Jaise .."

"Kaun kehta hai dil pagal hai
Pagalpan to sirf aik bahana hai
Aik bar hans kar muskura kar to dekho
Yeh pagal tumhara deewana hai!"

lovely sher👏👏👏

[quote=monikaseth]Its aweosme armaan is realy naughty but he love ridh soooo much.

I love when he says meri behan ko kuch nahi hoga angad mein aaraha hu . mindblowing sangeeta . thx for pm me .[/quote]

Thanks Monu....Armaan is both naughty and caring and yes he will help his sister feel better....aakhir Armaan ka kaam hi logon ko khush karna hai😊

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Preet

@prabhi

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Posted: 17 years ago

#347

hey, when r u gonna update again.. i can't wait!

4 of them are gonna meet. finally!👏

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bheegi

@bheegi

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Posted: 17 years ago

#348

Originally posted by: prabhi
hey, when r u gonna update again.. i can't wait!
4 of them are gonna meet. finally!👏

hi Prabhi....i won't be able to update before sunday. Just catching up with the replies right now. Thanks 4 asking😊

[quote=juicylove6]omiifghosshh...AR are soo cute...i love how they play around with jokes and flirtatious comment.s...armaan is a darling and so funny wen he said ke tun ladkiyan yessi hoti ho...lolxz..i was krakin up....and i have a feeling that kripa will be cured and i think armaan's kidney will match and ab to bhai-behen ka naata nibhana padega...i dont know buh itz just a guess....cont soon..will be waitin di...<3

r3ya <3 ; ]
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Thanks juicylove.....yes armaan is pakka badmaash. Well, let's see if Armaan and Kripa's kidney's would match or not😕..

[quote=rima791]wonderful part

armaan is too naughty

it was really cute part

omg!! was he serious about he portrait thing?? or was he just pulling ridz leg???

anyways very gr8 part

i love the way how they both tease each other

omg!! the two friends finally talked!! can't wait for their reunion

do cont soon di

thanks for the PM

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thanks Rima. I am sure he was serious about the portrait thing😆😳 like he is about everything else😉 and i see u have the raat ka nasha avi already...😊

[quote=gidha]Great update Bheegi D

Loved the nauk jhook

Im guessing the next parts gona be emotional :(

Plz do update soon 😉[/quote]

thanks Gidha....good guess😊 but i will try to sprinkle romance and nok jhonk between the friends😊

[quote=kdrs]

Lovely!!!! Now 4 be back together!!! Continue soon!!!

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Thanks kdrs....yes they will😃

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bheegi

@bheegi

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Posted: 17 years ago

#349

Originally posted by: mahi4u
hey di

omg omg omg 😆

dat 😆was juz nautanki full but sweeeeeeeettttttt n cueeeeeeettttttttttt

juz luved it👏

cont super soooooooonnnnnnnn
luv ya n tak care
mahru

[color=red] thanks mahru....i am glad u liked it😊

[quote=aspatel2]Hey Bheegi di

This part was awesome our Armaan is back with his naughtyness i still cant believe that Ridhima has changed completely.. she is so daring now and so possesive abt Armaan.... haha needs to get married asap i agreee

Angad is such a sweet guy cant hold his emotion infornt of his best friend..... its really nice thinking of Angad to bring portable machine so kripa doesnt have to go to hospital for that painful treatment.... hopefully she will find a donor soon

pls cont. soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon

-Axita
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Thanks axita...people change when they become secure and develop confidence. Riddhima is very secure and confident about what she wants from life and that she loves Armaan a lot....no woder she has become daring. Yes, angad does not want Kripa to go to the hospital every week for the painful dialysis....wo ghar ko hi hospital banaa raha hai😊

[quote=inuyasharocks]hi di, first of all soo sorry i didn't comment before on AK. i totally forgot. well it's better late than never, rite. seriously di, itna romance kaafi hai. dil aur pet, dono bhar gaye. amazing di, absolutely fabulous 👏both chapters. armaan and ridz r too cute and hilarious. 😆 but cliffhanger. plzzzzzz don't let anything happen to kripa. and continue soon and thnx for the pm😃 [/quote]

Thanks inuyasha...please don't be sorry. I am glad i could satiate both ur wishes😊...don't worry Kripa ko kuch nahin hoga😊

[quote=meow23]oh gosh dat chap hasn't stopped his nautanki itz gettng worse day b day....lolz!!!!!!!! bt stil i luvd it.
it was gud 2 c i luv me 2 again.. i actually luvd it wen said it.... he gt no other way 2 make ridz j xcept d blonde... bad idea... he shld now ridz as grown up.... n d nude potrait i jus freaked out.............. he is soo naughty..i neva knew he also is planng 2 wrk wid ridz in d same hospital
and at last d reunion of angad n armi.... hope, armi gtz 2 meet his sister sooooonnn.
luvd, d prt..btwn howz shanky panky dng...
thnxx, 4 d pm.. update soon

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Thanks meow...yes now both AR are experts at nautanki😆 Armaan just came to visit Ridz at the hospital. he still works in India but don't worry they will all be back at Sanjeevani soon😊 Shanky panky bhi aayenge kuch der baad😆

[quote=armaanridz]

thanks for da pm di

wow dat was very sweet, cute n funny

ridz throws him out from her bedroom hahaha

gr8 now angad n armaan will gona meet huh

very gud di,

chandni[/quote]

Thanks Chandni....yes Ridz is as naughty as Armaan now😆 all 4 will meet soon😊

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bheegi

@bheegi

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Posted: 17 years ago

#350

Originally posted by: abhilashasharma
nice update bheegi... armaan and riddhima are back again... so now the friends are gonna meet... great

thanks abhilasha....yes, they will and soon😊

[quote=sweet-niz]woooooooooow i luved it

ar scenes wer sooo gd

da lool ridz mde me laugh wen she

was reciting dem lines

luved dis updte luvin ur ff n work

as usual wot mre can i say bt updte sooon

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Thanks Niz...i am glad u liked the AR nok jhonk😊

[quote=pwincess kwanzi]

really romantic and cute prt! loved it! it ws funny how riddhima ws foolin armaan by sayin song lyrics! lol! it ws a ne nok jok and cute n romantic scenes! i loved it! i m glad armaan noes about kripa's illness n i m sure ridz is gona noe soon 2! i wnder wat is gona happen nxt! plz do cntd sn! thank u so much 4 d pm! cntd asap!

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Thanks pwincess...this AR part was for all AR fans😊 Love ur avi and siggy👏

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