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Posted: 17 years ago
what a mindblowing finish... so much happened in one part that i am not able to comprehend it...

Fantastic work Kanta di
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Posted: 17 years ago
👏🏻Kanta..that deserves an applause....wonderful writing
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Posted: 17 years ago

Kya dhamakedaar ending tha! Absolutely entertaining read. Like Tazzo, I was glued to my screen too! Now that was a pretty quick wedding - perfect as far as Jai was concerned 😆 Will miss this different ff a lot.

👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻
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Posted: 17 years ago
Awww...A sweet and happy ending of Rudra and Uma... 🥰 Really enjoyed this long journey with the Black Diamond.

Well done on sucha unique storyline... 👏🏻 Now eagerly waiting for the other two ... 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
nice ending ... 👏🏻... but you ended it...Unhappy.... but I liked the FF alot really very different ... Thumbs%20Up... Rudra won .... and got his reward too in the form of Uma...🥰... liked the happy ending with JB together ... 👏🏻...
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Posted: 17 years ago
kanta i know i have lots to catch up on and i will i promise !!!!!
Sharan XXX
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Posted: 17 years ago

I don't know why i hate the word 'the end' nowadays 😆 jai was full of action and he destroyed the evil, very heroic......the last part was 😳 😳 .....yes, me too want an epilogue......pleeeeeeeeaaaaaase!!

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Posted: 17 years ago
Superb ending...beautifully written..and the last part was just tooo mushy..
Please write an epilogue...
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Posted: 17 years ago
For Nir and Niruba and msrk...an epilogue

Thanks for the comments guys...glad you enjoyed Indie Jai's adventure...
Hope we can all meet him again one day...actually saw SBS of RK on the sets
of KS...I think he being such funny person would actually play a role like this.



Black Diamond Epilogue


"Atharva Walia get down off the tree right now." Bani screamed at her five year old, who had been hiding up in the tree for hours. Atharva put his toy binoculars to his eyes and pretended to look around. Then he looked down at his mother who stood holding his baby sister Krishna. "Mom, I am hunting for dragons. You better take baby inside or the dragon will take her away."


"Atharva!" Bani shouted. 7 month old Krishna squirmed in Bani's arms, Krishna was getting restless.


Just then a pair of arms grabbed Krishna and threw her up in the air, "Hi Krishu. What is your brother up to that your mom is screaming?" Jai laughed as he tickled his daughter. He gave a look in Bani's direction, who was now directing her angry looks at him. "Jai Walia...get your son to come down right now. Look at him holed up there. Just like you...disappearing for hours and making me chase around. For all I know, he could have fallen down and hurt himself...hunting dragons indeed!"


Jai walked upto his wife, whose face was flushed red and eyes sparkling with anger. "Oh honey, let the boy have his fun. Nothing will happen...after all he is my beta. We Walias love hunting for endangered species." Jai arched his brows and gave her a lingering look, his eyes resting a tad bit longer on her heaving bosom, where a button of her blouse had popped open.


Bani noticed his roving eyes and slapped Jai lightly on the arm. "Stop ogling at me and get Atharva down. It's his dinner time."


Jai pulled Bani to him and said huskily, "How about we leave the kids with nanny and go off for a candlelight dinner? It's so long since we had time to ourselves."


"Jai Walia," Bani pulled Jai's ears, "We had romantic dinner last week. And as for time to ourselves...you always have make sure of that every night. Now get Atharva down and bring him back to the house. We will have dinner with the kids."


Bani took Krishna off his hands and went off towards the house. Jai arrived in the house few minutes later with trailing Atharva. In his room, he found Bani nursing Krishna. He took Atharva into the bathroom and got him washed up and then got changed for dinner. Krishna was still feeding when he came out. Atharva was sitting on the floor, playing with his toy dragons. Bani smiled at him, "Ok you two go down, I will be down shortly when Krisna is done."


Jai walked over and kissed Bani on her cheeks, "Take your time. We boys have some treasures to find. Right Atharva...we have to do some treasure hunting."


Atharva dropped his toy dragons on the floor and ran up to his father and said exicitedly, "Did you say treasure papa? I want to play pirate. I want one of those funny hats and a patch for my eyes."


Jai winked at Bani as she rolled her eyes and father and son left to go hunting for treasures.


THE END

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Posted: 17 years ago
Thanksssssss a lot for the epilogue...
Its was brilliant...hunting dragons..seriously atharava is too much..jai se bhi do kadam aage...
Poor bani is having her hands full with father son duo...
WOnderful story...awesome presentation..

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