***Bheege Pal*** COMPLETED! - Page 43

Originally posted by: kvn1983

just awwsome superb as ususal ur a genious mujhe shock laga hai shock!!! 😲 i love it its so touching aww.. u r touched!! woow.. the biggest compliment..thanks hun! i relly feel that everthing is happening in front to my eyes aww.. m happy atleast u r nt imagining ur self as ridzi there 😆😆 jst kiddin..thnxx👏please continue it asap and thanks for the pm

"Friends"
are
like
balloons
once u let them go
u cant ever get them
back
dats y i ll tie u
tight tu my heart
u r precious to lose😊.

woooowww 👏 kyaa baat hai..

"When it rains, you dont see the sun, but its there.
Hope we can be like that.
We dont always see each other,
but we will always be there for one another."

hmm.. dats even more than that... when its rain sun is there.. n wen u wil be in trouble, i will always be with you although u dont see me there 😉😉

"Doctor's prescription 4 u.
A cute little smile 4 breakfast.
More laughs 4 lunch.
Lots of happiness for dinner.
Doctor's fee? An update and love from u😳"

awww.. my love is always there for you....n ab toh update bhi deni padegi 😉😉

woooooow..nidha.. wonderful 👏👏👏
luvd dem
and thanks for liking the part
luv ya
tiya

Originally posted by: im_dibest

hey its to cute ..really n thnx for the PM ..n cont vryy vryy vryy soon ill b waiting 😊

heyy thanksss sweetheart..
luv ya
tiya

Originally posted by: perfectpiscean

Awesum part Tiya!! 👏
Really lieked it!...Especially the ending 😉 😆
hmm.. "I LOVE YOU"
dont worry m jst repeating the dialogue 😆 dont think m ...hehe..😉

Now this is some cliffhanger! 😳 😆
awww..sorry sweetheart.. bach thola sha intedal...
Continue soonand thanx 4 ur PM...Really appreciate it! 😳


*~*Marisha*~

thanks marisha.. m sooo glad u liked it
luv ya
tiya

hey tiya

awwwwwwwwwwwww..............

dat was cho cho sweeeeeettttttttttt n cuteeeeeeeeeee 😳

lagta hai kertiji achi sasuma ki tarha ridz say abhi hi haq jamanay lagi 😉

n da staircase was juz AMAZING 😍

juz luved it 👏

cont super soooonnnnnnnnnn
luv ya n tak care
mahru

hey tiya jaan,
ki part likh dita tussi, asi te mar gaye
awesome part hon
ahhhhhhhhhhhhh m so eagerly w8ing for the next part 2 be updated soon yaar
jaldi update karne
n m so sorry for the late comment thnx for the pm
luv ya
@nkit@

tht was really good. and no, we r not goin to kill u for endi it thr. lol 😆
continue soon! 😊 😊

OMG!!!! I love you???? Now update soon, I wanna see what happens!!!!

hey di very nice i loved it.plz pm me when u will update the next pary plzzzzzzzzzz pm me. 😳

hey, gr888 prt.. i really hope creatives read dis... it amznggg... specially rodz de way she took care of her gng 2 b saas (keerthi)
B>N ATUL OMG...... HE DEF NOES HOW 2 LIGHTEN EACH MOMENT... SPECIALLY WID IS JOKES... JUS WONDERNG WOTZ GONA HAPPEN WID rm. n armi he was emotional... n d last datz a cliffhanger.. waitngg 2 noe her reaction
THNXXX 4 D PM.. UPDATE SOONN 😊 😊 😊

Hey Tiya!!
Ughhh i'm soo mad 😡 I had written out my whole comment and i was like almost done and then the computer messed up and it got erased 😕 So i'm re typing it now...hopefully i won't forget anything!
Aww no seriously tiya..dont worry abt the long wait...it was totally worth it after reading this part!
And omg...rahul muski wedding got moved up a month?!?! So like are all the interns gonna be there at there wedding or are they gonna try to get out of it? 😉
Poor Muski..she cried all night..but dont worry she'll soon figure out that Rahul is the true love of her life..and Rahul will figure it out soon too!
Hehe nice...first armaan and ridz are paired together..and now keerti and ridz...i think its saas-bahu bonding time! Aww i like that armaan smiled a the thought of his mom and ridz working together...how cute!
Haha poor armaan he's having a hard time proposing to ridz! The flirty Dr. Armaan Malik is having a hard time forming a sentence to propose to the true love of his life..Ridz!
Armaan shaked his hair thinking "ohh nooo.. ab yeh sab phir se kehna padega?? ...i liked that line....poor Armaan..you'll figure it out soon enough on how to propose to her!
OMG Keerti fainted!?!?! I knew that was coming..but thank god ridz was there to take care of her! Nice job ridz..i think your saas is very impressed with her future bahus caring nature!...but really tiya that was a cute scene...it was nice how ridz cared for keerti!
And awww shubs is such a sweet and loving husband...its soo cute how much in love him and keerti are!
Armaan...nooooo don't cry yaar! Your moms okay...and I guess your even happier now that she's accepted ridz as her bahu! Ya kno wat would be really cute...is if like later on in the story somewhere armaan was really sick or something..and they showed ridz caring for him...!Hehe you made keerti very smart in this fan fic..good thing she sent ridz after armaan!
That was a nice emotional scene..and I'm glad he hugged her!! Hehe of course she's you world armaan..you guys are a pair...Armaan and Riddhima..doesnt that sound good?!?!
And wat an ending Tiya!?!?! "I LOVE YOU..." and then its the end!! nice cliffhanger! 😆
I'm guessing the next part is gonna be a nice romantic one...hehe i like it when you write romantic parts..your amazingly good at it..and it always makes me get butterflies in my stomach 😳

Thanks for the pm!

I'll be waiting for the next part!

Luv ya,
Mira 😳