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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: er.Sheetal

Hey Fren... first of all a Loads of thanx for d PM... 😊 np😃

Now answers to d questions u asked -

"What did you think of this part?"
D part was very interesting to read... surely as d truth is not yet revealed, so i m still a lil confused about d Woman-in-d-hostel's response... but i m sure u will explain dat in d next part as u hv already mentioned in d Precap... 😊
yeh, next part wud clear some confusion, as 2 the woman's response, lipstick mark, change of clothing, etc in the flashback

Did Riddhima do the right thing accusing Armaan?
Well... i dont think i can say she was either "Wrong" or she was "right" in accusing Armaan... She is a simple middle class girl... d situation & d circumstances forced her already-confused mind to Jump to a conclusion... i mean she has been so very misinformed about Armaan's character, which is of course an outcome of his image-for-d-world... So she wasnt wrong... & she wasnt right too... 😊
yeh, ridz believed wht she saw (tanya's incident), nd how she saw armi.. (muski's description of armi )... so she doesn't knw the 'real' him and was led 2 believe wht she did

Do you like the storyline of the fic so far?
Of, course, i like d story-line very much... it is very interesting... Love stories r alwayz interesting 😆 ... lol thanks... i also love love/romantic stories😳

Love

- Sheetal



Thanks Sheetal

Love,
Irsa
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: princess_rulz

Finally..this FF is updated !

I loved this part...especially this particular scene..
[quote]Seriously, today's generation! Everyday couples changed, and this girl was the limit. She couldn't even remember her husband, let alone his name as if that matters![/quote]

I can imagine the expression on the lady's face..hahaha !!

I told you abt the part and episode so that answered your one question.

Second..
Well..I would say..before jumping to conclusions always get to know both sides !..
Wether your a girl from a middle-class family or a rich guy from rajput gharana or whatever !
Getting to know both sides is very important before jumling to conclusions and blaming some-one for something which infact doesn't exist..


Third..
I love the storyline of fic so far..so no worries from my side.


PM me when you update it.



Thanks

lol, the lady did act a little weird😆

true... ridz jumped 2 a conclusion str8 away, bcoz the lady mentioned abt armi being with her through the night😕.. though she did ask him, but his teasing nd playing along with the joke led her 2 her sudden outburst.. armi was himself quite shocked at her angry sid, as he didn't knw wht she had gone through nd y she was questioning him alot😕

sure i'll pm😉

Love,
Irsa
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet=me

Oh My Gosssssh!!! I dunno what 2 say...I'm speechless....Gosh I can barely frame 1 coherent sentence...U r becoming a complete pro at this!!! I looooved it!!! lol thanks mishti😉
The intro...OMG Mrs.M!!! Ahhhhh!!! Haha...don't blame the woman for thinking that Riddhima's deranged....Imagine forgetting your "hubby"!!! 😆
lol, true.. she did seem quite shocked when ridz asked 'her' hubby's name😆

You started off with a bang!!! Hmmm...surprisingly at the begining Riddhima trusted Armaan...too bad our little mischievous prankster(Armaan) didn't guage the seriousness of the situation and decided to tease her...
yeh.. he didn't knw abt anything😕, he just liked teasing her nd watching her make weird/cute faces (1st step 2wards love😳😆).. so played along, not knowing the consequences

Riddhima must've been awfully freaked out and frazzled and unfortunately,Armaan picked this moment to annoy her....
lol, he's alwayz saying something wrong at the wrong tym😆

Wow yaar that was quite a speech u wrote for Riddhima...Kinda funny if u're the third person.. 😆
hehe...lol... my hindi's not tht good so i kinda thought of all the possible long 'hindi' words i cud remembr 4m films/ serials nd phrased some sentences😕😆😆
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Loved this part...10 on 10 for u hun...Do update asap and thanks alooot for the pm... thanks😃... np...
Love,
Ananya



Thanks Ananya

Love,
Irsa
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: tanya666

hiii.hey..just stumbled upon ur fan fic nd read all the 10 parts together..nd i luved it!!!!!! Wow!! all 10 parts, aat 1 tym?? 👏...lol

this fic is sooo gud..ur style of writing nd the storyline is so fresh and appealing.lol thanks

as i was nearing the last parts i was like..no i want more parts to read literallyyy!!! hope u update soon on this fic
awww how sweet!!...lol... i'll try 2 update on sundy/ mondy😉
...i luv the chemistry between armaan nd rids nd can totally relate to all of riddhima's thoughts nd feelings esp wen they get so closee!!
amaxing really thanks
update soon
luking frward to it



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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: anitamalik

Another Great update Irsa..I absolutely loved the part..
thanks😳

I actually love the way you write..you are a natural writer 😊 . You captivate all the emotions in a scene so easily and enable us to visualize the scene as if it was happening right in front of our eyes...hands off to you 👏 You are doing a fabulous job with your fanfic.. I love it to bits..
aww thanks tons... ur commentz reli encourage me 2 continue... i'm glad u lykd it Anita😳

As for Riddhima accusing Armaan, I think it was right.. Any women in her place would've done the same thing, if she had found herself in the same situation as Riddhima. However, Riddhima should have let Armaan spoken before ranting off, jumping to conclusions, and accusing him because sometimes 'things are not as they appear to be.'
True... but riddhima shudn't have accused him bcause of wht the woman sad, nd muski's description of armi's character😕...
But I completely understand that Riddhima was angry and disgusted with thoughts of what could have happened while she was drunk that she let all her emotions flow and didn't give Armaan a chance to speak..
she shud have gave the poor guy a chance 2 speak..lol... i myself was getting annoyed at how ridz' character was turning out.. i din't want it 2 b like the dmg ridz😆, who doesn't give armi a chance 2 speak😕.. so in nxt part, i'll 'make' her listen 2 wht he has 2 say in his deffence😆..lolz, so thtz y she's pinned under him so she can't run away😆😆..lmao

I love the storyline of your fanfic..Its amazing..you are one great great writer..I love your writing style a lot..I admire you for writing so well.. awww, thanks😊

Kash I could write as well as you..I hope your exams went well! 😃 I have cousins in England, so I know how drastic these exams are...lol..but I hope you did well! lol, yeh exmas went gr8... thanks 4 asking😊

Continue soon and can you please pm next time you update... will try nd update ASAP after getting such a good response😳.. i was scared i'll get no comments as i hadn't continued it in a while😕😆...lol... sure i'll pm😊

-Anita



Thanks Anita
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Posted: 17 years ago

LOL..yeah don't make this ridz like the DMG one..Poor Armaan in DMG doesn't get a chance to say anything at all...lmao😆..and you don't need to be scared about getting comments--your FF is too good and you will continue gaining more readers and getting more comments no matter how long you take to update😉

Anita

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: anitamalik

LOL..yeah don't make this ridz like the DMG one..Poor Armaan in DMG doesn't get a chance to say anything at all...lmao😆..and you don't need to be scared about getting comments--your FF is too good and you will continue gaining more readers and getting more comments no matter how long you take to update😉

Anita



Thanks Anita

yeh, poor armaan, kitne papar bhelne parte hai 2 get ridz' attention, nd she ends up taking it the wrong way nd accusing him again😕😆

lol thanks... i'll try 2 update after every 3/4 dayz now, as my exams r over

Love,
Irsa


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Posted: 17 years ago

hey irsa,

very well written,dear 👏 👏 👏 ........i must say ur a fantastic writer.....it was superb......plzz continue soon and if u could plzz pm me when ur done with ur next part.....😊


continue soon 😊

-surbhi

Edited by arvanu - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: arvanu

hey irsa,

very well written,dear 👏 👏 👏 ........i must say ur a fantastic writer.....it was superb......plzz continue soon and if u could plzz pm me when ur done with ur next part.....😊


continue soon 😊

-surbhi



Thanks surbhi... glad u liked it😉

sure i'll pm


Irsa
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Posted: 17 years ago
now irsa for ur questions.......as i forgot to answer them...so here goes:

What did you think of this part?

It was very good....especially last part and the part where riddhima has the faith that armaan wouldnt do anything like this with her....ur a fantastic writer..and i loved ur writing from the first part itself... 😛

Did Riddhima do the right thing accusing Armaan?

I think she did the right thing...as any girl would react the same way as she did....but the best part was that somewhere down in her heart she knew that armaan couldnt do something like this 😳

Do you like the storyline of the fic so far?

As i said,i loved ur writing from the first part...the characters of armaan-riddhima resemble that of DMG...and whenever i read ur fanfic,i can imagine the scenes and all......so its lovely.The storyline is good and i think u can make it even better 😊

so irsa....here are my answers
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