SU FF(ACHPM):Ek Mohalle Ki Dastaan..pg 34(30/3/09) - Page 17

Originally posted by: Fazila~

do conti surbhi......it was soothing for my poor heart

that was my aim...to soothe all of u from ur tension........hope i am successful in doing so

Chapter 13-Plan of action by Mushtaq

Next day at the mehta's house..... sapna and sujata are busy seeing some sarees when urmi comes from her bedroom.She is abt to leave the house when sapna calls her:
Sa-urmi!!!!Urmi turns
U-ji,maasi??
Sa-idhar to aa...Urmi smiles and goes to her.
Sa-kaha jaa rahi hai itni subah subah??
U-ji..wo..main..zoya ke ghar jaa rahi thi.......kuch zaroori kaam tha....
Su-zoya se tujhe kaun sa zaroori kaam hai??
U-are mummy...uska koi project hai college ka,to use meri help chahiye thi
Sujata smiled..
Su-acha,ja.....lekin dopahar tak aa jana...
U-ji..She smiles and leaves..

As soon as she leaves,our next sipahi..Shri Mushtaq Ali peeks in the room....He sees sapna and sujata checking the sarees and chatting...
Su-didi..ye blue waali aap pe bahut achi lagegi...
Sa-hmm.......theek hai...kuch khaas nahi.......lekin ye red waali to bahut hi sundar hai......dekh na kitna acha zardosi work kiya hua hai iske pallu par...(for those who dont know,zardosi means the embrodiery which is done in gold on sarees)
Su-ha...bahut acha hai
Sa-pata hai,sujhi....mujhe sarees pehne ka kitna shauk hai.....america mein to ye mujhe pehne hi nahi dete..(smiling)kehte hai tum salwaar kameez mein zyaada achi lagti hoon.....
Su-theek hi to kehte hai...ab america mein aap kya sariyan pehnegi.....
Sa-lekin phir bhi mujhe bahut mann hota hai ki main saree pehnu.....
Mushatq hears all this and thinks.......beta,mushtaq tera kaam to ho gaya....ab main khud sapna maasi ke liye ek sundar si saree taiyaar karonga aur unhe de doonga......phir wo mujhse bahut khush ho jaayegi.......He likes the sound of this and is very happy and just leaves from there.....

Here our urmi is going to zoya's house as she was was talking to moua di and playing with millie......She is walking when our sandeep babu is coming in CG driving his bike and he doesnt see urmi as he is in his thoughts and urmi gets scared seeing sandeep's bike coming straight towards her and she screams.....sandeepji......
Sandeep comes back out of his thoughts and due to the speed he cant stop the bike....as soon as the bike was abt to dash with her....she moves sideways and as a result falls down......
Sandeep is shocked and immediately stops the bike....
U-ahhhhhhhhhhhh........ouch.....ou...........She gets angry at sandeep
Sandeep comes to her and gives his hand to her.......She doesnt take it as she is angry with him and shoots him a deadly look......and gets up by herself with great difficulty.....
S-urmi...i am sorry.....maine tumhe aate hue nahi dekha...really sorry......
U(cleaning the dirt from her hands)-kaise dekhte...aap to pata nahi kaha khoye hue the......
Sandeep is abt to clean her elbow:
U-haath mat lagaye mujhe.......
S(surprised)-kyun??
U(very angry)-kyun!!!!!!!!!!ek to mujhe neeche gira diya aur phir humdardi jhaatne ki koshish kar rahe hai......mujhe koi zarorat nahi hai aapki humdardi ki.......
S-urmi..tum aise kyun keh rahi ho......maine kaha na i am sorry.....aur itni choti si baat......Urmi cuts him...
U-choti si baat??aapke ke liye hogi sandeep babu.....mere liye nahi.....ahh......her knee hurts......
S-kya hua??He is abt to touch her knee.......
Urmi just moves his hand away.......
U-maine kaha na mujhe haath mat lagaye......She just massages her knee and groans in pain.......
S-waise tum jaa kaha rahi thi??
U(doesnt look at him)-zoya ke ghar.....
S-kyun??
U-kuch kaam tha.....
S-aao main tumhe chod do!!
U-koi zarorat nahi hai......main khud jaa sakti hoon.......She walks a bit with pain but suddenly trips and is abt to fall when sandeep comes and catches her by her waist......They stare at each other and go into their dreamland not knowing where they r standing.....From a distance,zoya is watching this and smiling....
Urmi realises that they are in the middle of CG and frees herself......sandeep also realises and is embaarssed......Urmi smiles but doesnt show it to sandeep as she is angry with him.....
S-dekha urmi.....gir gayi na.......isliye keh raha ho..main tumhe chod dunga zoya ke ghar tak.....
U-mujhe aapke saath nahi jaana....
S(loosing his temper)-urmi...zidd mat karo.......
Urmi gets even more angry......
U-mujhe aapse baat hi nahi karni....She is abt to leave when sandeep catches her dupatta
S-urmi.....
Urmi gets shocked,surprised,happy,nervous as they were in the middle of CG........all emotions playing in her mind.......By her dupatta,sandeep brings her close...
U-sandeepji....kya kar rahe hai aap??koi dekh lega....plzz chodiye mera dupatta....
S-pehle meri baat suno......i am sorry...maine ye jaan booch ke nahi kiya........(sweetly)main kya tumhe kabhi jaan booch ke takleef de sakta hoon?
Urmi blushes and all her anger melts.......She turns and looks at him......They look at each other....sandeep smiles.......
U(in a very low voice while looking down)-nahi...
Sandeep smiles sweetly....
S-to chale??
U(looking sideways)-hmm......
Sandeep walks next to urmi and they leave for zoya's house.......

Here mushtaq is ready with the saree and his mother comes and says:
Z-mushtaq...kabse dekh rahi ho....tu ye saree taiyaar kar raha hai.......ye kiske liye??
Mushtaq thinks....mar gaya...ab ammi se kya kaho....
M-ammi...wo...wo...darsal....ye...wo....mere ek dost ki behen ki shaadi ke liye hai......
Z-acha.....main chalti hoon.....mujhe bahut saara kaam hai.....
M-ji.....Zeenat leaves.....Mushtaq takes a sigh of relief.....
M-aaj to bach gaye mushtaq miya.....ab jaldi se ye saree urmi ki mausi ko de kar aata hoon.......

At zoya's house,sandeep-urmi enter the house.......zoya sees them....
Z-are urmi tu aa gayi.....main kabse tera wait kar rahi thi.......She notices sandeep giving her support by her shoulder....
Z-tujhe kya hua?
U-matlab?
Z-nahi,ye bhaijaan ka haath tere kandhe par......Sandeep immediately releases his hand and urmi smiles.....
S-umm....main chalta hoon......(to urmi)aapna khayal rakhna.......Urmi smiles.
Z(teasing tone)-ha ha... bhaijaan...aap chinta mat kijiye...main urmi ka bilkul theek se dhyaan rakhungi......bharosa rakhiye mujhpe......
U-zoya!!!!!!!!!Sandeep smiles.....and leaves
Urmi comes in and helps zoya with her project...In between they chat abt sandeep.....and the time just passes by.......

Here in mehta's residence.....sapna is sitting alone reading a magazine when mushtaq enters.....
Sa-are mushtaq...aao andar aao......
Mushtaq smiles......
M-ji..aadab
Sa-baitho...kaho kuch kaam tha......
M-ji..wo..urmi.......
Sa-urmi??...wo tu ghar pe nahi hai....
M-nahi mujhe aapse kuch baat karni thi......
Sapna thinks......oh,to ab ye aaya hai mujhe impress karne ke liye....koi baat nahi...dikhati ho maza...
Sa- ha bolo.....
M(thinks)-kaise kaho.....kahi mujhe joote na mare....nahi mushtaq...himaat se kaam le.......khuda ka naam lekar de de saree....
M-ji wo...aapke liye ye saree laya tha.......
Sa(shocked...in her thougths)-acha......to ye baat hai.....abhi chakhati hoon maza......
Sa(smiles)- are mushtaq beta...iski kya zarorat thi......so sweet...thank u so much..bahut achi hai.....ruko main tumhare liye sharbat leke aati hoon.....
M(all happy)-kya baat hai mushtaq miya.....aapka kaam to ho gaya........maza aa gaya........
Sapna goes in her room...and meanwhile,urmi enters the house and sees mushtaq......
U(thinks)-ye yaha kya kar raha hai.......Mushtaq smiles at her very lovingly.......Urmi smiles fakely......
She goes in her maasi's room and sees her maasi cutting a small strip of a saree......
U-maasi...aap ye kya kar rahi hai??
Sa-shhh.......tu aa gayi...aaja jaldi........
Urmi goes to her......and sapna tells abt mushtaq....
Sa-ab dekhna kamal..chal mere saath.They both leave.....and urmi is with the sharbat,and gives it to mushtaq......
Sapna shows him fake anger and throws the saree at him.......
Sa-besharam.......mujhe phatti hui saree dete ho...sharam nahi aati tumhe.......
Mushtaq shocked.........Urmi is giggling but says:
U-huh.......mushtaq......tumne meri maasi ko phatti hui saree gift di.......tum samjhate kya ho aapne aap ko.......
M-urmi.....main.......mera yakeen karo......maine koi phatti hui saree nahi di sapna maasi ko........
Sa-main tumhari maasi nahi ho,samjhe.......ab uthao ye saree......aur niklo yaha se.....She comes close to him and with a killer look says......warna main tumhe joote maar-maarke laal kar dungi.........chalo niklo.......Urmi cant control her laughter.....
Mushtaq gets sad and leaves the house.......Sapna and urmi burst out laughing....urmi feels a bit bad for him......
U-maasi zyaada nahi ho gaya.........
Sa-are nahi...in logon ko aise hi sabak sikhana chahiye.....tabhi ye log sudrenge.......tu tension mat le.......inke liye to main hi kafi ho......teri shaadi agar hogi to sirf sandeep se........
Urmi blushes......
U-kya maasi,aap bhi!!!!!!!!And runs to her room.......Sapna starts laughing....................

hope u guyz liked it...plzz post ur comments and suggestions😊

Aww...poor Mushtaq, all his efforts ....I feel sorry for the poor dude! 😆 😆

Good stuff Surbhi, cant wait for the next instalment....something to look forward to!

awww...felt sorry for mushi...poor guy. sapna mausi was quiet mean. but s/u romance beech mohalla was so 😍
sandy catching her waist...oooo...btw one blooper i dont have the heart to point out. sandy and urmi had an accident in the middle of the mohalla and no one else saw?

Originally posted by: Nisha_07

Aww...poor Mushtaq, all his efforts ....I feel sorry for the poor dude! 😆 😆

Good stuff Surbhi, cant wait for the next instalment....something to look forward to!

thanks nisha.....even i felt sorry for mushi when i was writing it...thats why i added the end part between sapna and urmi......😆😆

glad u liked it😊

Originally posted by: kshreya2002

awww...felt sorry for mushi...poor guy. sapna mausi was quiet mean. but s/u romance beech mohalla was so 😍
sandy catching her waist...oooo...btw one blooper i dont have the heart to point out. sandy and urmi had an accident in the middle of the mohalla and no one else saw?

i know ksh......but normally serial mein....hero-heroine romance kar rahe ho...koi nahi dekhta....and waise bhi it was subah-subah...to samjh lo koi khaas insaan aas paas nahi tha......hehehe😉

thanks for ur comments...glad u liked it😊

but u know what...ur FF made me want to get back chabhi even more. 😭

Originally posted by: kshreya2002

but u know what...ur FF made me want to get back chabhi even more. 😭

aww...ksh....sorry to make u more sad,yaar.....not at all my intentions....dont worry...chabhi will definitely come back......atleast i hope so😊

Originally posted by: kshreya2002

definitely!

😊

come on friends.........no one else to comment😭😭😕

Originally posted by: kshreya2002

but u know what...ur FF made me want to get back chabhi even more. 😭

same here.

and that is exactly why I am avoiding reading FFs.. 😭

but it was very sweet surabhi!!