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Posted: 17 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: goodkashish

that was an interstring part......i hope it is not kashish's dream........bcoz i really want sk togather....ple ple continue fast......and i hope sujal can see kashish's love.......i cant wait to read next part.....thanks

love

kashish


Thanx 4 liking 😃 nopz tht waz nt her dream lol prt updated😊 keep comm.😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: cute_samrah

awesome part con't soon


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Posted: 17 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: jyothi_cool

amazing story till now cont soon


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Posted: 17 years ago
#84
it was superb part.........i love kashish's commitment to sujal that she loves him and he has no rights to harm her feelings......love the emotion......i just hate it when sujal slappes kashish.......bcoz this is not our sujal....he cant harm our kashish....ple ple continue soon.cant wait for next part......thanks

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kashish
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Posted: 17 years ago
#85
very nice part 👏
plz continue soon...............
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Posted: 17 years ago
#86
interesting dear..going good.... 👏 do continue soon... 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part 13

S:"muma!Hum log honeymoon ky liye london jana chahty hain"

s ne subah breakfast table ky waqt sab ko sath mei daikh kar bat cheedhi,s ki bat pe k ky hath sy chaye ka cup gerty gerty bacha tha,us ne ghabra kar s ko daikha tha magar wahan gehri sanjidgi ky elawa kuch na tha.

Muma ky kuch kehny se pehle he papa bol padhy.

Papa:"ye tou bohot acha faisla kiya hai beta tum ne,kashish ki tabiyat b aj kal kuch ache nai hai zara mahol change ho jaye ga tou sehat pe acha asar padhy ga"

s:"muma ap ko khushi nai hui?"

muma:"muje tumhary faisly par koi atiraz nai hai magar mai khush b nahi hun kyun ky kashish ko le kar mai tumhari la-parwahi daikh chuki hun aur es ka natija bi samnay hi hai aur ab mai aur koi la-parwahi nahi daikhna chahti"

k ne khmushi sy breakfast karty hoty un ki batain soun rahe thi aur kripa kabi k aur kabi s ko daikh rahe thi aur halat ko samajny ki koshish kar rahe thi.

S:"oh ho muma!Ap bi bina wajah naraz ho rahe hain,ab mai agar baher ja kar kam mei busy raha tu iss mei meri kya galti hai aur waise b bimari puch kar nahe ati magar agar mai yahan hota b tu kya kar leta,ap ne jab call ki tu mai sab chodh kar furan aa b tu gaya magar pher b ap muje galat samjh rahe hain."

s ne lambi wazahat di aur muma esy bas ghor kar reh gain.

Kripa:"Muma!Kashish sy tu puch len kahin us ki padhai ka harj na ho."

kripa ne s aur k ko 1 dusry se bilkul la-taluk banay daikh kar furan kaha.

Papa:"han beta!Tum kyun khamush baithe ho,agar tumy koi problem ho tu btau?"

papa ne us ky sar par hath rakhty hoye pucha.

K:"nai papa muje koi problem nai hai mai thek hun."

k ne muskura kar eny mutmin kiya magar khud dil he dil mei s ko konsny lagi wo janti the ky s jan bhoj kar london ja raha hai ta ky khul kar k sy badhla le saky magar agar wo khamush rehti tu aur zayada tension bhadhti kyun ky s ne k se wada kiya tha apni bei-gunahi sabit karny ka wo jan gai the magar s apne faisly se pichy nai haty ga aur apni bei-gunahi sabit karny ky liye wo kuch bi kar sakta tha.

Papa:"thek hai sujal pher tum jald se jald jany ki taaiyari karo aur apni muma ki fikr mat karo ye zayada dair tak tum se naraz nai reh saktin."


papa ne s ko pareshani se muma ki ki taraf daikhty paa kar s ko tasali di.



1 week badh sk ki seats confirm hoi the donu ki,k es dauran apny maa papa se 2 dafa mil kar a chuki the,jany se pehle wo bohot udar aur fikr-mand the,usy nai malum tha ky ab agay kya hony wala hai,us ne apna sara mamla uper waly par chodh diya tha aur khud ko mutamin rakhny ki koshish kar rahe the,wo nai chahti the ky s kisi b tarah usy majbor aur bei-baas daikh kar us ky sath koi na-insafi karay.Us ne pury week sab ky samny bohot khushi ka izhar karty rahy magar akely mei 1 dusry sy anjan ban jaty thy na tu k s se bat karny ko taiyar the aur na he s k ko bulata tha.

Jis din flight the k usy din subah se kai dafa rou chuki the magar jaisy jaisy jany ka waqt karib aa raha tha k ki ghabrahat bhadhti ja rahe the.

Airport par wo sab se galay mil kar un ki tarf aisy daikh rahe the jaisy ab yahan wapis anay ka yaqeen na ho.


Kripa:"kashish!Zindagi bohot choti hai aus es mei khushiyun ki umar us sy b choti hai,koshish karna ky choti sy choti khushi apni muthi mei bandh kar lo aur muhabat sy sab jeet lo."

kripa ne k ko galay lagaty ho samjaya aur k un ki bat ka matlab samjh kar sar jhoka gai.


Wo pehli dafa plane mei baithe the,dil dhadak raha tha aur k ko bohot dar lag raha tha magar wo s ko keh kar apna mazak nai banwana chahti the,plane ne jaisy he fly kiya k ne khauf ki waja sy s ka bazo pakad liya aur ankhain bandh kar ky jaldi jaldi kuch padhny lage k ki es harkt par s muskurany laga phir s ne ahesta sy apna dusra hath k ky hath par rakh kar usy mukamal tahafuz ka ehsas dilaya,pury safar mei k bohot dari aur sehmi rahe s us pe nazar dalata raha,aj donu ne bohot dino badh 1 dusry ko qarib sy daikha tha warna us din ky jhagday ky badh se donu he 1 dusry ko nazar andaz kar rahy thy.!



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End of Part 13,waiting for ur comments.
Anam
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Posted: 17 years ago
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goodkashish,jyothi_cool,angel 16,sun_423 Thanks alottt to all of u for the comments 😃 😊 Am glad u liked the part 😊 😃 😊 keep commenting 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
#89
very nice part 👏 honeymoon london interesting 😳 👏
bt plz continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#90

bahot bahot sukhriya aapne phirse kuch likha to sahi........kya hai padhne ki aadat si ho gayi hai.........waise bahot hi achcha part tha.... 👏 ......honeymoon....😍 ...aur woh bhi do aise logo ka jo ek dusre se baat bhi nahi kar rahe.......aisa honeymoon to pehli bar dekhne ko milega.... 😍 ........sujal ne to hadd hi kar di........bina Kashish ki izzazat honeymoon..........sujal to do kadam aage nikla.... 😉 ....kya kare jab biwi itni haseen ho to... 😳 ......bechari kashish aaj chai ka cup girte girte bach gaya..... 😲 ......achcha hua woh cup mere sujal pe nahi gira............ab veena ne kaha hai to sujal kashish ka khayal to rakhega hi......ab sujal itne pyaar se kashish ki jimedari lene ko taiyaar hai to kashish mana kaise kar sakti hai.. 😳 ...waise kripa ne sahi kaha.........jitni yaadein bana sako bana lo sujal ke saath kahi phir se yeh waqt aaye ya nahi... 😊 .....kashish ab gussa chodo......tum apne pati aur pyaar ke saath honeymoon pe ja rahi ho...........yaar yeh jo plane wala scene tha woh bahot hi achcha tha......... 👏 .......sujal ka haath hi pakad liya......ab kashish zindagi bahr woh haath ko chodna mat..........warna woh chudel phir se tumhare sujal ko le jayegi.... 😈 .....kashish ka aisa chehra dekhke kisi ko bhi pyaar to aayega hi..... 😳 ....ab sujal bhi kitni dair tak apne dil ko sambhalta..........achcha hua dono hi aur se kuch kadam to uthe..........aaj upperwale ki daya se zagda khatam hoke pyaar ki pehli shurauaat to huyi...... ❤️ .....yaar muje ek gaana yaad aa raha hai...........KUCH TO HUA HAI>>>>>>KYA HO GAYA HAI>>>>>>>>>>ab jaldi se dusra aisa hi achcha wala part likh dalo......mujse ab aur intzaar nahi hota...... 👏 ....bahot bahot sukhriya is part ke liye........

Love

Kashish


Edited by goodkashish - 17 years ago

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