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Posted: 2 months ago

Originally posted by: taahir004

Chapter 8

A Fighting Spirit Chapter

Finally Geet spoke her heart and mind

and now Maan fears that she will walk away one day

he truly was very confident that her love will keep her by his side

in his penthouse but now the fear is slowly leaking into him

hopefully slowly Maan can change his behavior towards Geet

acknowledge her and also make her feel important

Thanks a lot for your detailed feedback on the chapter.

It is always a pleasure to read your analysis on the same.

And it gives me motivation to continue as well.

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Posted: 2 months ago

Originally posted by: taahir004

Thanks for the note

but please don't be discouraged

readers will come slow though

but I truly enjoy reading your stories

Thanks a lot for your constant support every time I post a story.

It means a lot.

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Posted: 2 months ago


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Posted: 2 months ago

Chapter 9

A Dynamic Chapter

Oh I'm glad that Maan is slowly realizing that Geet can slip

through his fingers

she loves him but her self respect is much higher now

she has carved her own life out without his permission

and that fact irritates him

now I'm certainly waiting to see Maan feeling jealous

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Posted: 2 months ago

Originally posted by: taahir004

Chapter 9

A Dynamic Chapter

Oh I'm glad that Maan is slowly realizing that Geet can slip

through his fingers

she loves him but her self respect is much higher now

she has carved her own life out without his permission

and that fact irritates him

now I'm certainly waiting to see Maan feeling jealous

Thanks a lot for sharing your feedback & analysis of the chapter.

It was really interesting to read about.

Yes, even I am feeling so good writing about this strong Geet. Thanks for appreciating.

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Posted: 2 months ago

So finally Maan started realizing that she can slip. He started noticing post she started working even though there was no monetary gain.

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Posted: 2 months ago

Originally posted by: MA1970

So finally Maan started realizing that she can slip. He started noticing post she started working even though there was no monetary gain.

Yes, he is now going to realise the value & truth.

Thanks for your input.

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Posted: 2 months ago

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great update

geet taking good step in her relation n love for maan

maan force to think about his stand in their relation as he find tightening in his heart n nerves

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Posted: 2 months ago

Originally posted by: aparna3011

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great update

geet taking good step in her relation n love for maan

maan force to think about his stand in their relation as he find tightening in his heart n nerves

Thanks a lot for loving the update…

And sharing your thoughts on the same.

It means a lot.

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Posted: 2 months ago

Chapter 9

glad seeing Geet keep her distance

cannot blame her

great that Geet decided to go out

of cos Maan was shocked

she was correct that she cannot keep waiting

liked that she knows she exists outside of him

pleased that Geet is volunteering to teach English

nice seeing Maan's concern for Geet

upset with Maan's reaction

why would she need his permission?

good that she was direct with him

Maan was taken aback

he was clearly angry that she messaged Sunita and not him

their convo was necessary

now he realised what she went through with his behavior

agree with Geet that they are adjusting

loved that he started noticing her absence

he did take her for granted

Geet now has a new purpose with this teaching

this indeed unsettles Maan

Maan's fears were justified

he may lose her

will he act on this?


update soon

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