FANAA(Hiten, Gauri, Shweta) Part2 pg3 - Page 2

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Sunrise Institute of Management Studies:

The class of B.Com students was going on. The faculty was writing something on board. She was wearing the same yellow salwar suit , and it was evident that she was the same lady who had the encounter with Vishal sometime ago.She was busy in writing something on board, whereas the boys of her class were busy in looking at her beauty and the girls were busy in getting jealous from her.

L: So everyone is clear.

Students in one voice: Yes maam.

L(with a smile on her lips): Great.

Student1(Rajat , whispering): She looks killing.

S2(Vaibhav): Yes, she is.

Rajat: Do u know if she takes private tuitions or not?

Vaibhav: Why?

Rajat: Yaar, i love her.

Vaibhav: Huh? Look at u. Do u think she will be interested in u?

Rajat: Yes, why not? I don't think she is too older than anyone of us. I am 21 and she must be around 23-24.

Vaibhav: I am not talking about that. Just look at her, she is like a fairy, and u, hah. Uske liye to koi uski hi takkar ka chahiye. Tu to uske paoon ki jooti bhi nahi hai.

Rajat: man, i am the hottest dude of our college. I can convince any girl to come with me.

Vaibhav: U have a dirty mind. And i am sure she is not that type of girl. She looks so mature. And u...

At the same time, the ring announced the end of the lecture and the lady leaved the classroom the whole classroom restless.

The lady entered into the staffroom where her friend was Anita was waiting.

Anita: Hi Shweta. How r u?

Shweta(picking up the glass of water and replying): Not well.

Saying this, she drank it.

Anita: Why, what happened?

Shweta narrated the whole incident to her and she burst out laughing.

Shweta:Tu hans rahi hai. pata hai uski wajah se main late ho gayi.

Anita: Lekin galti to teri hi thi na. Phir uspe kyun gussa ho rahi hai.

Shweta: Ya ya i know. Lekin kya woh pehle nahi bata sakta tha.

Anita: He must be trying to give you respect. Lekin tu bhi na. Ek baar shuru ho jaati hai to.

Shweta: I know. Main kuch jyada hi bol jaati hoon na.

Anita: Tu jyada to bol jaati hai. Lekin tu dil ke buri nahi hai. I think u shud say sorry to him.

Shweta: par kaise? Main to use jaanti bhi nahi.

Anita: It's ok dear. Kabhi dobara mile to bol dena ok. Ab chal doosre lecture ka time ho raha hai.

Shweta smiled and nodded her head. It was true. She had to learn controlling her tongue, but she was not bad of heart and now she was realizng her mistake? But will she be able to meet him again to say sorry?

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Posted: 17 years ago
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wowwwwwwwww good work good intro of diva's character & vishal & shweta's char r also amazing or i like da college stories 😳 cond plzz
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Posted: 17 years ago
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i will soon.Thanks for the comments 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey Yug-Deepika(sorry dunno your name), your story seems really different, I've read your stories before, the one with Kanan and Nishant, this one looks just as good.
I loved Gauri(Diva Reheja)'s introduction that you gave.
Am looking forward to the rest.
Just have one request, could you please make the font size a little bigger next time? Thanks for this fan-fic. 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
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u knw sandali told exactly wt i was gonna 2 ask 4m u,including da problem wth da font size😆n i also jst luved da intro f Diva..t was jst so nice n sort f real lyk..anywa im specially waiting 2 read more abt her n Vishal..😳

bt i'll add my bit too..da plot s awsome..i realy enjoyed reading t..so pls pls continue soon..cz im sure i'll totally fall n luv wth dis too js lyk ur earlier FCs..😳

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: sandali_

Hey Yug-Deepika(sorry dunno your name), your story seems really different, I've read your stories before, the one with Kanan and Nishant, this one looks just as good.
I loved Gauri(Diva Reheja)'s introduction that you gave.
Am looking forward to the rest.
Just have one request, could you please make the font size a little bigger next time? Thanks for this fan-fic. 😛

I am so sorry for the font size Sandali. But don't worry, from next time, i will definitely take care of it. Thanks a lot for ur appreciation. Yes, i am trying to write something different this time as i am bored of just HGT's soft romantic roles. But as u noticed Diva's char is really different this time and for the first time i am trying to highlight the roles of leading ladies than the male lead. I mean to say, Diva and Shweta have much more important role in my ff than Vishal. Hope u will enjoy the next part. Thanks once again and tc😊 And yes name is Gaurav

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: princessunara

u knw sandali told exactly wt i was gonna 2 ask 4m u,including da problem wth da font size😆n i also jst luved da intro f Diva..t was jst so nice n sort f real lyk..anywa im specially waiting 2 read more abt her n Vishal..😳

bt i'll add my bit too..da plot s awsome..i realy enjoyed reading t..so pls pls continue soon..cz im sure i'll totally fall n luv wth dis too js lyk ur earlier FCs..😳

thanks a lot princessunara😛 for all your comments and appreciation about my previous and present ff's. I am really glad.Don't worry, next time i will take care of the fontsize. And yes Diva's character is different in my ff. Plus i think u will be shocked after knowing about His and Vishal's relations in the upcoming parts.The three main leads of my ff are totally different from the characters they have portrayed till now on TV.Just wait and watch. I will post the next part soon😊

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: Yug-Deepika

thanks a lot princessunara😛 for all your comments and appreciation about my previous and present ff's. I am really glad.Don't worry, next time i will take care of the fontsize. And yes Diva's character is different in my ff. Plus i think u will be shocked after knowing about His and Vishal's relations in the upcoming parts.The three main leads of my ff are totally different from the characters they have portrayed till now on TV.Just wait and watch. I will post the next part soon😊

Hi Gaurav im Sunara😳well i thnk i can trust u n ur wrd dat da characters f these 3 wud turn out 2 be totally different 4m wt any1'd be thnking them 2 be😆da simple reason s dat every tm i thot dat a twist lyk dis s gonna 2 happen n 1 f ur previous FFs wt actually happend was totally unexpected..so im waiting eagerly 2 read da rest😳

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: Yug-Deepika

I am so sorry for the font size Sandali. But don't worry, from next time, i will definitely take care of it. Thanks a lot for ur appreciation. Yes, i am trying to write something different this time as i am bored of just HGT's soft romantic roles. But as u noticed Diva's char is really different this time and for the first time i am trying to highlight the roles of leading ladies than the male lead. I mean to say, Diva and Shweta have much more important role in my ff than Vishal. Hope u will enjoy the next part. Thanks once again and tc😊 And yes name is Gaurav



Thanks for the reply Gaurav. Well that's great that it'll be different, change is good I guess. Can't wait to see how their characters shape up.
I'm really enjoying it, keep it up! 👍🏼
Take care.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thanks to all my friends who have commented. Here is the next part 😊

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