FF: Pale Blue Dot Thread 6/19/2025 Chapter 44 Part2 - Page 8

Originally posted by: hemakeerti

Waiting for comments

I'm so sorry Di , I'm not that good with words 🫣🫣

Originally posted by: Priyaadarshini

In your defence, novels are rarely that long especially in the genre of romance.

>> yeah.. true...I too need to practice how to keep it short and simple. PBD has grown itself out of proportion... much more than I originally conceived.

And like anushka said we would like it if you published this one!!

>> It needs lot of rework even to put up on Kindle. I'm not sure if its worth the effort or spend it on a new story.

Indian romance stories are sometimes too cliche and stereotypical or at least some of them are. You are so good and such a natural at this. Like in this era where people have low attention span, your story continues to hold it effortlessly. I hope you will consider it

>> Thank you for such kind words...

Lot of people these days have written on website first and then after the response, published the story later

>> True... I see fan fictions on Kindle published with name changes... with barely any editing done.

Thank you Priya I luv the pre-confession and early phases of confession in any love story... it's such a tingling phase

Oh yeah that too!! The will they won't they phase

>> I attribute it to the epic texts - Mahabharat and Bhagavata Purana - where we get to see all kinds of shady characters and get to know their twisted thought processes

I haven't read bhagwat purana but I really love mahabharata too. Like this one story has it all!! You get everything that you want and of course there's kanha

>> Yes... Mahabharat is the teachings of the Vedas in story form ... everyone has to study this one text at least

>> Which person would agree that he was innately bad... everyone thinks he has been manipulated by others otherwise he'd have been of pristine character

It's possible that I'm biased then and there's lot of information that is missing as of yet

>> yeah.. in the upcoming chapters we will know more of Rao's side

>> lol... yeah... dulhan, dulha both are ready... shehnai bhajana hi baki hain

Dulha Dulhan taiyaar hai but pandit ji ki kami hai ab jab woh aayengi tab kuch ho

Dulha Dulhan taiyaar hai but pandit ji ki kami hai ab jab woh aayengi tab kuch ho

>> this pandit ji is busy with marriage season.. dheere dheere se ayegi

Originally posted by: Mahi108

I'm so sorry Di , I'm not that good with words 🫣🫣

Say in Hindi if you're comfortable

Originally posted by: nushhkiee

sanga sanga tumhi ch kaytari

Te aikat nahi ami mhatlo tar PBD lokpriyatela patra aahe .. mhanun mi insta account pan banavla .. 🤪

I would love to read PBD as a novel ..

That is ofcourse if she updates soon

Inpe chodha toh she will never update

Alright Jahnu dii, from now on we..the readers.. will be giving you the deadlines. You’ll need to post updates on or before those dates. And if you can’t make it..the reason better be a solid one. Got it?

Imagine us as ur boss in office

yes madam.... so july 13 it is for part2

Originally posted by: Priyaadarshini

Apan ekach team madhye aahe

Also on the team for more one shots please

On that note though I checked the insta account and it made me want to read PBD again. Waiting for scenes from this chapter

hmm... I don't have one shot plots... but if you have some I can take inspiration and expand on it

Originally posted by: hemakeerti

Dulha Dulhan taiyaar hai but pandit ji ki kami hai ab jab woh aayengi tab kuch ho

>> this pandit ji is busy with marriage season.. dheere dheere se ayegi

>> It needs lot of rework even to put up on Kindle. I'm not sure if its worth the effort or spend it on a new story.

You are underestimating yourself and this story

What happened to Manu and Muskan? They were uncannily silent?

Originally posted by: hemakeerti

yes madam.... so july 13 it is for part2

sun lo gaav walo sun lo

Originally posted by: hemakeerti

What happened to Manu and Muskan? They were uncannily silent?

Manu Dii busy with her office work

Don't know about Muskan Dii .. she hasn't seen msgs on insta too

Originally posted by: hemakeerti

hmm... I don't have one shot plots... but if you have some I can take inspiration and expand on it

YOU are saying this?

Who came up with such a unique plot ?? (Interview with vampire)

Agar plots nahi soojh rahe toh pls expand Vampire wala ...that is my really really favorite one!