Jodha Akkineni & Jalal Ahmed of Pale Blue Dot : A Story in Verse 💙 - Page 2

Replies in bold red

Originally posted by: hemakeerti

Anushka...

>> Jahnavi Dii

I'd have pressed heart button 100 times if it'd allow me to. It's so so so beautiful....

>> Arey bas 🙈 Now 'm feeling embarrassed

'Laughter echoes, villains we play'

I read villains as violins... not sure if you meant laughter is playing villain here. I so loved this line

>> Violins? No no, 'villians we play' refers to the scene where Jo was getting teased by her friends...First night in Goa?

Martini cold, but mind still burning,

That truly summed up his dilemma state.

These lines are masterpiece

In stolen moments, silence spoke

In midnight hours, the past awoke

>> You know, when I wrote those lines, I knew you’d pick up on them..I expected you to...thank you for noticing it So many moments, so many incidents, led me to pen them down. Jo-Ja’s silence...it always said more than words ever could. and then 'midnight hours past awoke' refers to all the confessions which happened around midnight thus the words 'past awoke' for example Think about it - like that moment on the flight back from Delhi when Jo opened up about her dreams to Jalal during midnight, or their late-night talks ... And then there’s Jalal’s birthday...how could we forget that midnight fiasco where Jo laid bare her past confessing her insecurities? It was almost like midnight became their safe space for honesty And even the latest chapter (what a co incidence).. that adventurous midnight meeting in the car where Jo and Jalal shared yet another deep-confession-types convo ... saare past ke confessions midnight mein hi huye hai looks like you are obsessed with midnight as well

And this is such a toe curling line

One touch, one pull...God, she tastes like relief.

The entire Sari gifting episode was a soothing balm... you reserved many words for it... looks like it is very dear to you

>> Yes it is. a little more favorite than others ... especially that line 'Ecstasy of a returned family'

What an Ode to PBD Anushka... thank you from the bottom of my heart I got emotional reading it. It felt like a reel of flashback

>> And I thank YOU for writing it .. for bringing this to us

I guess the midnight hour had become a sanctuary where their hearts bared their pasts Ummm like - when the world slept.. their souls woke

Reading gives so much joy to me.. and its sone pe suhagaa when the FFs I read are PBD, or HBAS or NJAPA

Thank you for your reply. I'm glad you liked it..

Started this on 13, Dec 2023 took me so much time...totally bheja fried Thanks to google who helped me with synonyms and meanings

Originally posted by: heavenlybliss

I have no idea what this is about....but should I still read it since its by you?

Hinna

This is the tale of Jodha and Jalal, from the fanfiction "Pale Blue Dot" told in verse.

You'll have to read the FF first to understand

Phir bhi ... Padhna hai tho padh lo

Originally posted by: nushhkiee

Arey kaha? I skipped so many chapters because of that reason Nahi ho raha tha mujhse bhi ... I took the simpler ones then

Thank youu so much

By akkha I meant the gist of it. Its like you took the Rooh of PBD and laid it on paper for all of us. Your love for the story is so profound it brought tears to my eyes

Originally posted by: nushhkiee

Hinna

This is the tale of Jodha and Jalal, from the fanfiction "Pale Blue Dot" told in verse.

You'll have to read the FF first to understand

Phir bhi ... Padhna hai tho padh lo

Ok, FF ka link do, I dont remember if I bookmarked it or not

Originally posted by: heavenlybliss

Ok, FF ka link do, I dont remember if I bookmarked it or not

Maine nahi likha hai ... the author is Jahnavi Dii (hemakeerti)

Pale Blue Dot

Originally posted by: manu_ak

By akkha I meant the gist of it. Its like you took the Rooh of PBD and laid it on paper for all of us. Your love for the story is so profound it brought tears to my eyes

Omg, thanks so much Dii means a lott story hi aisi hai , kaise pyaar na ho

You put a lot of effort into this I can see....even though I didnt understand much...but I must appreciate your effort and hard work into this. So creative!

What an idea to describe PBD in verse ! I can feel your love for this story. You put a lot of heart and soul and even more time into it! Great, Choti

Originally posted by: heavenlybliss

You put a lot of effort into this I can see....even though I didnt understand much...but I must appreciate your effort and hard work into this. So creative!

Thank you so much

Padh lo na FF if time permits

Originally posted by: So-So

What an idea to describe PBD in verse ! I can feel your love for this story. You put a lot of heart and soul and even more time into it! Great, Choti

Thank you so much PBD is Jaan