ArShi Aarav : Dil Se Bandhi Ek Dor - Last Chap,Pg5 - Page 2

Khushi is just the right person to help Aarav. The kid has not had anyone paying attention and listening to him for a long time.

What the huge deal with your son finding out you were stuck in a bathroom? He can't show his human side to his own child?

When aarav was having nightmare khushi trying to comfort him by saying that he is not alone..she is with him was touching.when khushi said to aarav about practicing football together I thought she was good at it.but khushi is so bad at football that aarav had to become her teacher and tease her.it was funny.khushi saying that maths is not stupid but misunderstood was a nice dialogue. Is khushi saying the truth about arnav getting stuck in the washroom and calling khushi for help?aarav aaking arnav about it was funny.arnav is so angry with khushi that she told aarav about the bathroom incident.he should take it as a joke.

Perfect pics.

Finally maine tera ek FF padhna start kiya .

Chap 1

Wow! The start was itself a blast . I love the way you write and your sentence formations are very good . The tentative bond forming between Aarav and Khushi was very sweet... enough that Arnav ki kami jyada mehsoos nahi hui.

Arnav ki ek jhalak bhi kaafi thi... to understand his position. He clearly loves Aarav, just doesn't know how to express it. His grief might be keeping him away from Aarav but this isolation is not helping either of them... hope he snaps out of it soon and realizes the damage this is causing to his son.

Looking forward to more of Khushi - Aarav's interactions (aur saath mein Arnav bhi ho to aur better... though it might be too soon for that )

Love,

Stuti

Chp 2

You set the scene so well, it's easy to imagine the rooms as you describe them .

I guess the first part of this chapter was in the past...? Perhaps when Arnav hired Khushi.

Honestly, Arnav seems very coldhearted.

He picks up the photo frame again, staring at Tara’s radiant face. "I’m trying, Tara," he whispers. "But I don’t know if it’s enough."

Kya trying?! Nanny hire karlena is trying? Isse jyada koi effort to dikha nahi abhi tak uski side se . Ek toh he forgot to inform Khushi about her duties properly, fir usko aadhi raat ko bulaya... and upar se daant raha hai ki you're late. Car to tumne hi bheji thi na... if she is late to fault kiska?

Missed Aarav in this update (even though I didn't really like his character in the show... that shows how much I love your characterizations here ). I hope wo Khushi ke aane tak itni der se akela nahi betha tha... bcz Arnav se to koi umeed hi nahi rakhi ja sakti... to console his son. Even HP has to go through Aman to inform him about his son... who lives in the same house .

Khushi deserves kudos for still putting up with this attitude... probably because she cares for Aarav. The little glimse into her backstory was also tantalizing . Off to the next chapter then...

Chp 3

Aah... finally all 3 together wala bhi koi scene aaya. But before that, I will reiterate that I'm really fond of how Khushi and Aarav's bond is developing... and the little joke about his father... Khushi knows how much Aarav is secretly craving to be closer to his dad .

But nahi... Arnav ko isme bhi problem hai. He wants to see Aarav laughing... but not at his expense (so opposite to how dad jokes work usually).

I like your format of including pictures in between the update... I'm sure it must take a lot of time to find the exact scenes... 💯 for your efforts .

Waiting for next chapter... ab bol sakti hun

Love,

Stuti

Surprisingly here just like khushi,aarav is also a salman khan fan.guess they both are alike in having popcorn too.khushi aarav enjoying together is explained well through a song sequence.loved the rain scene too.sadly aarav has fever now.actually rain is very dangerous for children.i really liked khushi not affected by arnav's anger and making fun of him with aarav.it was so funny.I am surprised that khushi contacted a child psychologist and decided to bring father and son closer.HP and Aman remind me of the characters in the movie.there was an old servant and best friend of the ML who were very important in the movie.HP explaining khushi about arnav's grief and how Aman plays a role in his life was emotional. Arnav is punishing himself for not able to save Tara confuses me.how did Tara die?I am surprised that HP requested khushi to change arnav also.eager to know what khushi is going to do to remove arnav's pain and bring aarav arnav closer to each other.perfect pics and songs.