FF: Jeevan Saathi (Ending) Pg 56 - Page 4

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Posted: 17 years ago
#31
helloo guli jaani
awesome ff..
awww so cute..

once ranbir accepts kanya as his wife, honeymoon everyday.. what is this.. guli jaani.
i am an innocent little child..
hehe

continue soon please
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Posted: 17 years ago
#32
first off babe...i miss you...😭😭😭...no real talk time yesterday ...ahem ahem...call me...😉...

haila...shanaya not a cry baby...good to see that...👏👏...and ranbir is still khadoos...koi reaction hi nahin hota usse...😡😡...he will see...soon he has to see that kanya is his soulmate...😉😉...

looks like ranbir is hate guru here...sort of....lekin question is...hate guru kaab love guru banega 😉😉
JAZ
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Posted: 17 years ago
#33
wow your story is so different and good 👏 too
i love it 😛
plz continue 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
#34
nice update. please update soon.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#35
Part 4

Ranbir takes his phone and just leaves!!!

Ranbir doesn't say anything about the whole honeymoon thing

Few days later

Aayan and Shanaya go on their honeymoon

Malika asked Kanya why doesn't she go w/ Ranbir

Kanya doesn't want to lie to Malika so she tells her the truth

And she tells her not to say anything to Ranbir

Malika is impressed and Kanya didn't lie to her

Kanya tries to help Ranbir w/ anything

But Ranbir says he doesn't need any help

She tries and tries

But he doesn't want it

She is sad

Ranbir does need the help but he wont ask for it

Kanya; Ranbir…. I am just trying to help

Ranbir: I don't need any help!!

Kanya: But..

Ranbir: Kanya.. no buts!!!!

Kanya is like okay whatever!!

Kanya cooks dinner and has everything set up

Ranbir comes home

The three of them eat

There is no connection what so ever

Malika can see that

Everyone finishes eating

Kanya cleans up

Malika tells her to leave it

But Kanya says its okay and she will do it

Ranbir goes into his room

He is massaging his leg

Doc says to put some cream on it

(Yes he's in shorts so I don't know for u if it's a good thing or bad)

Kanya comes in

She sees

She wants to ask Ranbir

But she doesn't say anything

This is how their relationship is

No one says anything to the other one

Kanya doesn't mind helping but Ranbir doesn't want it

Next day:

Malika asks Kanya to go w/ Ranbir to work

Kanya is like but she will be alone

Malika is telling her not to worry about and go

She tells Ranbir to take her

Ranbir is like fine whatever!!

They both arrive

Everyone smiles at her and telling her hello Madam!!!

Kanya just smiles at them

She goes into Ranbir's cabin

Its all big and nice

Kanya; Wow what a nice cabin!!!

She is getting all excited and what not

Ranbir has a whole bunch of work

Kanya; U need help?

Ranbir gives that look to her thinking what did I say?

Ranbir: I am fine!!

Kanya is like fine!!

People keep coming into his office and giving him files and what not

Ranbir is like when I am gonna go home!!

He barely got there and he wants to leave but he cant leave his work behind

Kanya; Ranbir.., I don't want to hear it… anymore come on tell me

Ranbir is like leave me alone already

Ranbir gives her something to do

She does it

Kanya is having fun!!

She helps him out

Ranbir stands up

And he hurts his leg

Kanya is shocked!!!

She runs to him

Kanya: Are you okay?

RANBIR: Yes I am fine!!!

He is paining!

Kanya tells him to sit

Ranbir can see that look in Kanya's face but doesn't say anything

She ends up finishing his work

Ranbir: Kanya stop it!!

Kanya; NO!!!! U have to get this done right? I will finish it for you!!!

She does

She steps outside

People are talking about Ranbir

Kanya is shocked!!!!

They are talking about him being such a big man yet… he is still weak

All are laughing

Kanya is there

Kanya: Are you guys here to work?? Or talk about gossip all day long?

They are shocked!!!!

Kanya: Get back to work!!!! Now!!!! Talking about someone like this! Arent you ashmed of yourself!!!! I am married to him.. I don't see him crippled…. If I don't see it then how do you guys see it??? Huh?? Answer me!!!!! You think that he is weak!! Go talk about someone else….. if I hear anyone talking my husband like this again….. then you will be sorry!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

(GO Kanya!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!)

And you know what the shocking part about that was…. Ranbir heard everything!!!!!!

Kanya comes back in…..

Kanya; Here I finished everything!!!

Ranbir is like whoa!!!! She finished it that quick!!!

Meanwhile Aayan and Shanaya are enjoying their honeymoon!

They feel bad that Ranbir and Kanya couldn't go on one!!!!

Later

Ranbir and Kanya arrive home

Malika faces lights up everytime she sees Kanya

Kanya goes and cooks

She is cooking

Malika: Kanya??

Kanya; Yes mummyji

Malika: What are you doing?

Kanya: Cooking!!!

Malika: U just got back..

Kanya: Mummyji…. Don't worry! You sit and rest!!!

Malika: I have been doing that all day!!! Let me help you!

Kanya; NO.. u go!! Come on!!!

Malika smiles!!

She cooks

Malika goes to Ranbir's room

Ranbir is lying on his bed

Malika: Munna!!!!!

Ranbir: Yes..

She comes in

Malika: Munna… we have to talk!!!!

Ranbir: About??

Malika: U know about what??

Ranbir: Kanya??

Malika: No!!!

Ranbir; Then!!

Malika: Ur leg!!

Ranbir: Ma.. how many times… do we have to talk about it??

Malika: Munna u know you get have the operation done!!!!

Ranbir: Yeah but I don't want to!!!

Malika: I understood why u didn't want it before…. But now you have Kanya…. She will take care of you!!

Ranbir: I don't want anyone taking care of me!!!!

Malika: Why?

Ranbir: Becuz!!!

Malika: Becuz why???

Ranbir: Becuz then I will feel that I am weak!!!!!

Malika: But ur not!!!

Ranbir: All my life.. I never got any help!!! And plus.. I don't want Kanya helping me!!!!

Malika: Why?? Becuz you think that it will be burden for her!!!

Ranbir: Yes!!!

Malika: But she isn't like that!!!!!

Ranbir: Ma.. please!!!

Malika: Munna… please do it!!!!!

Ranbir: I will think about it!!!!!



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Posted: 17 years ago
#36
awww kanya is so sweet
continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#37

nice part jaanu👏

go kanya u so rock...😆ranvir better get dat operation,😃

waiting for next part😳

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Posted: 17 years ago
#38
aww gud update...nice 2 see kanya sweet here...and rannu with watever attitude .....cont soon 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#39
love love love ur story. pls udates sooon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#40
Part 5

Malika: How many times will you say that to me???

Ranbir: Ma please!!!!

Malika: No.. I want you to go ahead and do it!!!! Tujhe meri Kasam!!!!

Ranbir: Ma…

Malika: No I wont listen to anything!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Kanya is calling Malika and Ranbir to come and eat!!!!

Ranbir has no choice….now!!

They come and eat!!!

Malika: Kanya… u will take Ranbir to the doctor tomorrow!!!

Kanya: Why did something happen???

Malika: NO but it will!!!

Kanya: What?

Ranbir: Nothing!!! Just a check up!!

Malika; Munna????

Kanya is like whats going on?

Malika tells her!!

Kanya is shocked!!!!

Ranbir is like ma.. u just have to ruin everything!!!!

After dinner

Ranbir is in his room

He is walking towards the bed

He takes one step down

Kanya walks in….

Sees him

Ranbir is about to take another step….. but he fumbles and is about to fall

Kanya yells Ranbir's name and she runs before he hits the floor

Kanya is like thank god!!!!!

Ranbir and Kanya are staring at each other!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Kanya is sad!!!

Ranbir just looks at her

Kanya helps him to the bed

Ranbir has to bend his leg…(like an exercise doc told him to do)

He is paining!!!

Kanya cant stand to see it!!!

Ranbir just stops!!

Kanya comes and sits next to him

Ranbir: I cant do this anymore!!

Kanya: Why not?

Ranbir looks at her

Kanya; Ur suppose to be strong aren't you???

Ranbir is shocked!!!

Kanya: Come on!!!!

She helps him

Ranbir is paining so bad

Kanya isn't looking at him

But her eyes are getting watery!!!

She cant stand Ranbir's pain!!!

He has to do that for 10 mins everyday!!!!

Kanya walks out!!!!

She is crying

Malika walks by

Malika: Kanya?? What happened?

Kanya; Nothing!!!!

Malika: Please tell me.. did Munna say something?

Kanya; NO!!!

She tells her why she's crying!!!!

Kanya; I cant see Ranbir like this!!!!

The door is open a little bit and Ranbir can hear!!!!

Kanya; Seeing Ranbir's pain..i just wish God gave me his pain!!!!!

Ranbir is shocked!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Malika: Don't worry everything will be fine!!!

She wipes her tears

And comes back inside

Ranbir looks at Kanya

Ranbir goes to sleep

So does Kanya

Kanya is facing the other way….

Ranbir isn't sleeping!!!

Next Morning

They are facing each other while sleeping

And they are really really really really close!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Malika is praying and has a bell in her hand

Ranbir wakes up

When he opens his eyes he sees Kanya so close to him

He stares at her for a chunk of time!!!

But then she moves a little bit so Ranbir quickly closes his eyes

Kanya sees him

She looks at him

She smiles a little bit

She gets up and gets ready

Ranbir opens his eyes!!!

Kanya gets out of the shower

She wakes Ranbir up…..

Cuz it's the big day!!

Operation!!!!

Ranbir wakes up

He gets up…

He cant find his cane

He looks for it

It fell so its under the bed

He cant see cuz he cant bend

He tries to get up…

Kanya; Ranbir no!!

Ranbir stops!!!

Kanya looks she bends on the floor….

And finds it

She gets it

Gives it to him

Ranbir; Thank you!!

So Ranbir gets ready and they head for the hospital

Aayan calls up Kanya to see how everything is!!!!

Kanya tells him about the operation

Aayan is shocked!!!

He says they will come back

Kanya says no!!!!!

She tells them she is here so don't worry!!

And plus they only have 4 more days!!!

Aayan insists but Kanya says no!!

Aayan is like okay!

They start on his leg….

Kanya is sitting there the whole time

She is praying that everything goes well

The operation takes about 10 hours!!!!!!

Kanya prays for the whole 10 hours!!!!!!!!!

Doc comes out…..

Doc calls Kanya

Kanya comes

Kanya; How is he??

Doc: He is fine!!!!!

Kanya: Any problems???

Doc: Come with me!!!

Doc: The operation was successful….. and he will walk normally in no time!!!!! But…

Kanya; But what….

Doc: He has to take complete bed rest.. for 6 months!!!!!!!! He will not be able to walk on it.. for 6 months then little by little then he can start getting use to it!!!! And you will have to stay with him all day and all night!!

Kanya; That's no problem!!!

She goes in and sees Ranbir

She is smiling

Kanya touches his hands!!

Ranbir opens his eyes slowly

Kanya sees

Ranbir sees Kanya

Doc comes in

Kanya leaves the room

Doc tells Ranbir wat he told Kanya

Ranbir is shocked!!!!!!!!!!!

Ranbir: But I have to work…

Doc: No!!!! Ur wife will be by ur side!!!

They take care of the arrangements in the house

Ranbir is brought home

He is in bed!!!

Kanya takes care of him 24/7

Kanya does double duty!!!

She takes food to him!!!!!

And then when he rests… she goes to Nanda Group Of Industries.. and make sure everything is okay!!

She finishes and comes home

Malika: Kanya where did you go?

Kanya: I went to Nanda Group Of Industries…

Malika: Why?

Kanya; Just to make sure everything is okay!!!

Malika: But how much will you do?

Kanya; Its okay!!!!

Kanya cooks

Malika goes and checks on Ranbir

Ranbir is sitting in bed

Malika: U must have done something good that u have a wife like Kanya!!!!

Ranbir: Why?

Malika: She looks after you takes care of you goes to Nanda Group Of Industries for you!!!

Ranbir: What??

He is shocked!!!!

Malika: yes she just went to see everything is okay!!!

Ranbir is shocked!!!!!!!

Kanya comes with food

Malika leaves

Kanya; Here you go!!

Ranbir is looking at her!!!!

Kanya; What are you looking at?

Ranbir: U went to Nanda Group Of Industries???

Kanya is shocked!!!!

Kanya; Yes!!!

Ranbir: Why?

Kanya; Becuz so wen u go you don't have to do much!!!

Ranbir: Yeah but..

Kanya: come on no talking and eat!!!!

Ranbir is like okay okay! !!



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