One Shot: A Timeless Love Story - Page 2

Has she been neglecting Maan and their relationship while she was busy finding the cure?

Now we know why she has been trying desperately for the cure. She needs to cure him. He doesn't remember her.

This story breaks your heart and fills you with hope at the same time. Such a bittersweet tale.

Brilliantly written and aptly named OS. Being in love, all lovers wanted to grow old together with their memories. You have depicted those things very beautifully. Wish all true love gets to have such wonderful timeless love. Love the character of maaneet to support eachother in happy and sadness.

Wow! That was such a beautifully written OS that had me sad(close to tears) and smiling throughout. You have expressed everything so well, that I could just visualise their faces with their emotions and feelings. Maan and Geet had that perfect start where they met at university, love blossomed and the journey went onto being married and having kids. Their love for each other is so evident and so strong and pure. A love and life we would all want. Challenges and heartache comes in every family and at a time when you least expect it and it makes one realise that life should never be taken for granted. I love how you have addressed this heartbreaking illness and the challenges the loved ones and the individual goes through. The pain when the love of your life, your everything forgets who you are must be so so hard. I love Geet’s positivity and it’s so true, he is still there with her and she should be grateful for that. I would love to see a cure for both Alzheimer and Dementia, so that families don’t have to go through such heartbreak, especially as many are 60 or over, a time when they should be enjoying their retirement with their partners and families after working hard throughout their life.

Thank you again for a beautiful piece.