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Posted: 1 months ago
#21

can somebody please write a full FF about the Abhira holding Armaans sleeve instread of his hand

It would be poignant if Armaan realizes she does that because she doesnt feel she has haq to hold his hand or arm when she seeks his comfort. thats because he has made her feel that way. 

It can be angsty FF where Armaan misses the way she holds his sleeve after she leaves or recalls her everytime someone tugs his sleeve

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Posted: 1 months ago
#22

The contrast in Abhira and Ruhi as people is SO stark. 

One is petty, entitled, rude , and spiteful. 

The other is righteous, straightforward, yet always just, kind, giving and forgiving. 

Abhira has always spoken up for whats right no matter if the person is Ruhi who only behaves horribly with her. And spoken up fiercely too. 

She's only wished well for everyone. Prayed for her to be happy dilseh. 

And on the other hand we have shameless, pathetic Ruhi. 

She does not deserve the consideration Abhira shows her but Abhira won't ever stoop to Ruhi's level. 

Can one of the talented writers here focus on a FF whete this difference is highlighted and publicly spoken out by someone - maybe Kaveri herself or coudins or Vidya so that Armaan also has a realization of the difference between the 2 women in his life. 

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Posted: 1 months ago
#23

Armaan himself christened Abhira as ms Problem solver but he never trusts her with his problems. He can even give her a hypothetical situation and ask her what she thinks if he doesn't want to reveal his own issue  

This can be another FF prompt I think. How Abhira tells him how to solve his own situation when he is pretending to have a friend stuck in his situation and asking Abhira what she'd do. 

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Posted: 1 months ago
#24

Its heartbreaking that Abhiras treasure hunt is gonna be ruined. Its such a sweet, thoughtful yet fun and playful way of confessing. 

Can someone please write an AU ff where Armaan actually enjoys the treasure hunt and reaches the final clue which is her ILU and feels overwhelmed. 

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Posted: 28 days ago
#25

Seeing all the BTS, really need a FF where Abhira gets over the guilt tripping  everyone is doing and snaps out of her sadness and self blame to drop some major truth bombs and exposes the hypocrisy and 2 facedness of the Poddars. 

Its so infuriating that everyone is ganging up on her. 

She made one error-  asking  people to understand that Charu Dev love each other so they should at least listen to Charu. But is it worth this degree of rubbish where she's held accountable for someone else's choices. At least listen before rejecting the rishta citing valid concerns 

The fact that she's being shamed for sanjay and kajal's parvarish where their kids are stifled and  feel the need to lie/hide, that is a joke. The fact that Armaan is giving pravachan on appropriateness of pyaar is a joke. He thought he is "sacrificing" by watching his brother marry a woman he knows loves him and not Rohit. Tying him to a loveless marriage with a pathetic  woman based on a foundation of lies is his idea of "appropriateness" of pyaar. Having emotional infidelity with SIL is his idea of appropriate behavior. The woman accusing Charu of affair and Abhira of hiding is sabotaging lives deliberately due to her obsession but thats all fine. The girl claiming she really loves Dev is not speaking up but letting Abhira take the fall. 

And Vidya- instead of trying to understand the circumstances of deal and how things have changed, is accusing and character assassinating a young girl who said something impulsive in the grief of losing her mom and being forcibly tied to a man. If she really wanted to be selfish and trap a man , she'd find a better guy and family than Armaan and Poddars 🙄 she has done so much selflessly, inspired them to have a voice instead of being meek, spoken up for Vidya too in front of dadi very early on just  to stand by the right thing while this family does not even let her eat at the table. These guys will now give pravachan on morality and righteousness. Wow! 

I really would love to read an angsty FF where Abhira gets over the guilt tripping  and manipulation they are trying and is on 🔥🔥🔥🔥 and rips these people to shreds for their hypocrisy and BS and then walks out with her head high. 

I am unable to wrap my head around why the heck she will choose to stay for 3 months in a hell hole where everyone hates her. She needs soms strength, some inspiration because i see her crumbling under the weight of all these baseless allegations and pointless hate. 

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Posted: 23 days ago
#26

Would love to read a FF around Abhira genuinely moving on, finding good friends, enjoying life like a youngster should in her hostel. And Armaan watching her be happy with only regret about how he pushed her away and she's spreading her sunshine in others lives and he loses her for good. 

Dear forum writers, please give us something like this. Thanks in advance. 

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Posted: 21 days ago
#27

Saw a bts of Ruhi ordering coffee for Armaan the way he likes it as a demo of how well she supposedly knows him. 

I would love to read a FF where Armaan has a realization of how little Ruhi actually knows about him and  the family whereas Abhira knows many more important details that are purely observational that have accumulated over time simply be genuinely paying attention to small things. I want her to demonstrate how she knows his allergies, his medical history, hid blood group etc 

I want him to realize that when she is even in just a deal relationship she invests her full sincerity into it. But he's guilty of not reciprocating it. 

I recently watched the hospital scene where Armaan had a realization of how little he knew about Abhira. But sadly not much came of it. 

He didn't even let her in as a friend for all this time, but he intermittently has very high expectations of her as bahu and wife. Kyun bhai?! 

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Posted: 20 days ago
#28

was rewatching early episode when Abhira fixed the car and the bulb etc

But its sad that Armaan says she doesnt know to "adjust" with peope in his house.

I'd love to read a FF where this theme is explored more. How she is well versed in basic life skills and things which the privileged kids of PH dont know. and she is a social butterfly who is upbeat in life irrespective of situation. she knows how to get things done. she doesnt focus on problems but on solutions. 

I want Armaan and maybe even cousins to have a realization of how they have had a privileged upbringing and they are "weaker" for it. they are the ones that can adjust anywhere except in their own house. they dont know how to be friendly in a jiffy, they dont know how to fix a fuse, manage simple things related to their car, open a jammed door, come up with a meal if there are only a few ingredients, how to light a fire in the open, how to stand in a line to pay a bill, fill water and carry a bucket, carry a gas cylinder, how to handle a power cut. how to get the most out of limited money, how to enjoy without spending any money, how to not waste anything and reuse,recycle etc

It would be nice if they realize that Abhira is resilient and emotionally stronger because of har choti badi challenge she has faced with a smile and they have a lot to learn from her. 

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Posted: 19 days ago
#29

Another idea/prompt- 

Can someone write a FF based on Armaans realization of the core difference between the type of person Ruhi is vs Abhira after getting locked in the office.

Ruhi is the type who expects him to give her his coat because she is cold whereas Abhira is the type that will offer him her dupatta because she is confident of being able to handle the cold herself.

she is the one who will be there for the people in her life in every little way she can whereas Ruhi only has expectations but nothing to actually give. The few times she has bought khaana and all- its been with the expectation that he should stop his work and eat with her, etc. not a simple gesture of care.

abhira wants a companion, not a protector. she doesnt want to be a burden but she does shares everything with him making him feel important in her life. she doesnt appear aloof or uncaring just because she is independent.

Ruhi wants someone who is obsessed with her. Even Armaan acknowledged in Manav track that she wants a man who will make her the center of everything in his life and thats not really feasible for anyone. but somehow he thinks she deserves a guy like that- not sure why. its impractical and stupid and a person like Ruhi who is so needy and clingy will only become more insufferable with a man who revolves around her 24x7

Would like to see some admiration and respect from Armaan for Abhira instead of indifference or brushing her away as immature.

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Posted: 17 days ago
#30

Since Abhira is from Mussourie and a pahadi ladki, I'd love to read a yeh jawani movie style FF on her going on a trek with Armaan or maybe even cousins and showing them how to enjoy such activities.