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Posted: 1 months ago

Originally posted by: taahir004

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Maan moved towards her, she sat there rigid like a stone, oddly her head was bent down and he could see few of her front hair strands flying in air. 

Maan heart beat quickened sensing the change in the atmosphere. He was just a step to reach Geet, when he was choked out of his breath by a soft but powerful grip on his throat, and it increased as the seconds passed.... And the dreadful sight infront of him left him wide eyed as he fought to get out of the deadly grip around his throat..... 

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  Part 17:



Jessie who thought that as soon as Maan will get to know about who he is, what and all he did from Geet, will make Maan to disown her if not out of hate but at least out of fear.. 

But the exact opposite happened as Maan comforted and assured Geet saying that he would be by her side and he will look after the things himself. He just couldn't take the unconditional love Maan had for Geet. So, he entered into her body over shadowing her senses and soul, snapping his fingers he gesturing Maan to come near him, where Maan moved towards him thinking its Geet.. 

The moment Maan was just a step behind him. Jessie within in a blink of an eye turns around and grips Maan's throat chocking Maan. 

Maan was terrified by this sudden attack and his heart sank as he looked at Geet's face. The body was of his Geet, but it was haunted by Jessie. So literally the person who was standing infront of him was his life as well as his revival.. 

Geet's fair skin turned to an intermediate color of grey and black...her soft pink lips had also turned black, her soft silky hair flying in the air and her eyes clearly gave away that it was her eyes for name sake but she was not Geet anymore.... 

Cruelty, anger, hate and destruction oozed out of them.. 

Maan tried his best to free himself from the grip, when he heard 

"GEET, meri hai....SIRF MERI..." even the voice was not of Geet's!! It was Jessie.. 

An enraged Jessie shouted as he remembered Geet saying that she wanted to be a good wife of Maan. He picked Maan up holding him through his throat and threw on the glass tepoy that was placed in front of the sofa. Maan landed on it and the tepoy shattered into pieces. 

While on the other side of the town, Dr. Khan who was praying sensed the arrival of evil, as he murmured opening his eyes 

"Shaithan aagaya"

Maan crawled backwards onto the sofa panting and looking for a way to escape from Jessie's clutches. He was terrified beyond words as he saw Jessie walking towards him with a threatening look in his eyes. Maan found himself stuck very badly as Jessie placed his right leg (Geet's) on Maan's thigh and he continued to glare at him and before Maan knew, he was again subjected to that deadly grip on his throat, he felt himself out of breath and being raised from the sofa, being movedntowards the stairs. Next he felt was being pushed away with such a force towards the stairs, that he stumbled down the stairs. 

Though Maan tried but he couldn't keep his balance at the last few steps and fell on the ground. 

Maan wasn't badly hurt for he held on to the staircase railing tightly but smooth enough for him to slide down, it so that he wouldn't fall and hurt himself as he had to fight their battle all by himself now, as Geet was under Jessie's control. 

He slowly got up holding onto the wall beside him, as he looked up the stair case to find it all dead silent as though no one was there. Maan unconsciously kept his hand on his heart only to find it thumping hard against his palms. 

Finding no sound from the room upstairs, he turned only to gasp out of shock as he found Jessie standing silently right beside him. Maan was so creeped up by what he saw that he stepped back as Jessie lunged forward cornering Maan against the wall holding his throat again. 

This was thrice in a row that Jessie did this to Maan, almost knocking the life out of Maan and giving him space so that he regains his breath back only to be chocked again. It was as of a warning that Maan still had chance to back off. 

He pressed onto Maan's throat very hardly this time, and Maan felt that this would be the last and he wouldn't survive. Coloured dots started to appear infront of his eyes, as he thought that the next second he would loose his conscious, he felt the grip loosening and Jessie screaming in pain as he heard faint chants coming from beside him which he couldn't understand. 

He blinked his eyes coughing badly in need of air, after a few seconds he could visualize Jessie standing still wide eyed, letting out painful screams, as Maan saw his rescuer Dr Khan standing infront of Jessie with a pen like thing in his hand being placed in between Geet's eyebrows.. 

Jessie's strength started deteriorating and the body fell down with a thud. 

Maan when he had came in the evening to confront Geet about Jessie had just closed the main door and he hadn't locked it as his mind was else where. And when Dr. Khan arrived sensing the danger, he luckily found the door not locked so he without wasting any time just entered opening the door himself, only to see Jessie had taken over a female's body, whom he guessed was Maan's wife and Maan being strangled to death. He without wasting time went to rescue Maan. 

After a couple of minutes Jessie found himself tied up on the chair. His hands were tied to his back as he very badly tried to free himself... He angrily glared at both of them standing infront of him. 

As soon as Jessie fell down weakly, Dr. Khan pulled out one of the dining chair asking Maan to lift and place Geet on it. He asked Maan to hold her hands at back as he came forward to tie Geet's hands with a rope. Maan tried protesting against it but one look for the Dr and he silently watched Geet being tied up. 

Dr. Khan stood a feet away from where Jessie was tied, he also made Maan to stand behind him as of a shielding him, he calmly asked 

"Kon ho tum?"

To which Jessie answered turning his face to the side before replying with attitude  

"Huhh, Jessie. Geet ki lover."

"Geet aab Maan ki patni hai." Khan said as a matter of fact, but it only enraged Jessie. As he started screaming horribly looking at Maan, and it seemed like if he was not tied down he would have attacked Maan right away. 

"YEEEE...."

"Geet didn't accept your love, issliye suicide karliya.. Aur aab ek aatma banke isko parishan kar rahiho...kya ye sahi hai?"

Khan was not sure of what exactly had happened so tried guessing what mostly happens. But that thing only enraged Jessie more as he screamed again 

"OYEeee, BLOOD CANCER ki wajhe se marhu, Kudhkushi karke nahi!!"

Jessie got lost in the past as he continued telling.. 


Jessie lay on the hospital bed coughing very badly while his mother sat beside him tightly holding onto his hand patting on his back, trying to calm him down. She kept calling his name not able to see her son going through this pain of slow death, she cleaned his lips, chin and his hands that were covered with his blood that he had vomited. 

"Jessie...Jessie...*he continued to cough, his mother got up placing her palm softly against his heart" ruko beta mai..mai doctor ko bulati hu...SISTER...DOCTOR."


Maan and Khan looked on as Jessie poured out his pain. 

"Meri maa ko kush rakne keliye, maine wo sab kuch kiya jo mujhe karna tha.... jeevan mai aur kuch karne ka ichchha (desire or dream) nahi ti....kuch hi der mai mujhe marna tha... Tab... The desire to live started budding in me.......That desire took birth after seeing Geet.Aur wo Geet ko dekhne ke badh janam hua."

Jessie lay on the bed coughing and his mother returned after calling the doctor. As she held on to his hand he saw her eyes pouring out, that was one thing he couldn't see. His mother crying be it for any reason. 

By the time Jessie was diagnosed with blood cancer, he was in his final stage. Nothing could be done except awaiting his death. He had taken promise from his mother to not cry for him. And he did all in his capacity to look after her and keep her happy.

But as he neared to his death his health started deteriorating drastically. 

Now seeing the tears in his mother's eyes pained him a lot, she was a single mother who had worked hard and brought him up with a lot of love and care, it was the same in case of Jessie too. All in all they both were each others world. 

"Maa, please, roye mat.. Aaapne wadha kiya tha ki you will send me with a happy face. Please maa, mere liye *cough* please don't cry." for Jessie's sake his mother wipped her tears and forced a smile to make him happy. She didn't want to disappoint him as she knew how much it affects Jessie to see her crying. To see her always smiling was his last wish. And she should full fill that, though it was the most difficult job for any mother to do but still her child's wish is everything for her. 

Jessie smiled keeping aside the physical pain he was going through as he saw his mother smiling and moved his eyes from her face to the door, casually, only for him to freeze his eyes on the enchanting beauty wearing a green colored chutidar came into his vision. 

Geet who was still a student was passing by after her class but stopped when she saw a cute little boy waving at her. She was fond of kids and couldn't contain herself from moving towards the kid. She bent down towards the small boy as she cutely talked with him.. 

This was visible from Jessie's room as he lovingly looked at Geet..he kept starring at her smiling, glowing face while on his death bed. He didn't realize his breath was getting shallow as he continued watching with a sweet smile on his face, without blinking his eyes. Geet waved bye to the kid as she made a move from there towards his room and  was out of his site as she took a turn towards the corridor. As soon as she was out from Jessie's site, Jessie breaths his last.. While Jessie's mother worriedly patts his cheek seeing him still..  

Geet didn't have an ounce of an idea of what was happening with the patient in the room, infront of her. She didn't even see him for that matter, she happily moved from there not knowing what was in store for her.. 


"Love at first sight. Aakri saas lerahi ti....*he faces them* when the desire to love Geet started raising in me..the desire to live my life with Geet rose in me...kuch bi karke mujhe zinda reha hai ki zidd shuru hui " 

Maan and Khan watched with a really disturbed faces. 

"Meri saase ruk gayi, lekin mai Geet ko bhool nahi paayi. Isliye pyaar kiya, aab bi pyaar kar rahi hu, aage be pyaar karta rahunga..AHhH."

Maan did feel bad for what happened to Jessie, but a strange kind of fear started settling in his heart after hearing him.. 

"Jo bi meri raste mai aaye gi, mai usko choodungi nahi...

Tum log sooch rahe hongi na, ki mai aab mar chuki hu aur Geet meri sath kise reh sakti hai, hai na!? Isliye mai Geet ko aapne sath le kar jaungi...ha...meri sath LEJAUNGI."

Maan who felt sympathy for Jessie some time before, now after hearing Jessie felt like the ground beneath him slipping. He stepped towards Dr 

"Sssi...sir.. Ye mardale gi sir...do something sir... Please sir...please."

Dr. raised his hand asking Maan to stop, as he looked at Jessie and tugged hardly at the taabze he wore.

He held onto it and stepped towards Jessie. While Jessie sensed his next move and starting screaming as of he was scared. But the very next second he challenged the Dr to come towards him. 

Khan walked towards him unaffected and placed it right on Geet's forehead. Jessie's scream started decreasing and finally stopped. Geet's body dangerously rose and fell on the chair continuously as Jessie's soul made its way out of her body. As soon as he was out, Geet's body fell back unconsciously onto the chair. 

Maan held onto the railing for support as he sighed in relief. 

Dr. turns around 

"Thank you Sir." Maan was very grateful to this person who walked in at the right time and he not only saved had saved him but also his life, Geet. 

"Maan.. This isn't over yet... In my entire service this is something that I'm experiencing for the first time... Jaan jaane ki samay mai pyaar hui hai, aur uski badh bi Geet ko chooda nahi. Ye Utni aasani de nahi jaayegi.." 

Maan lost the little bit of confidence that he had as he listened to Dr. Khan.

He dejectedly walked towards the Dr. as he whispered "Sirr!!!"

Khan put his comforting hand on Maan's shoulder 

"Aap aapne dil ko mazaboot banaye...and make yourself ready for everything."

Maan looked confused as well as worried, he looked at Geet who was there as they had left her. 

"Mathlab?"

"Aap Geet ko hamesha keliye bhool janeki haalat aasakti hai.."

Maan felt his heart stop beating as soon as he heard that. He stumbled back as he was trying to digest the words that came out of Dr.'s mouth. His eyes filled up and his legs couldn't take up his weight anymore as he sank down on the floor. He cried not caring if he was showing his helplessness infront of an outsider. 

Maan glanced at Geet then looked up at the Khan infront of him, who was also standing feeling sad. 

"Sir..bohat pyaar kar chuki hu sir.. Humari sath ka bohat sare saapne dekh chuki hu...."

Maan started crying hysterically at the thought of loosing Geet forever, he would do anything for saving her life, even if it was to beg. He at last even joined both of his hands together infront of Khan with his tears rolling out of his eyes. 

"Sir.. Pleasee sir. Please.... Kuch kijiye... Please."

Dr. bent down and held Maan from his shoulders as he made him get up. Maan got with his hands still folded. 

"Maan relax..calm down. I will try my best..be strong." seeing Maan break down like that Khan himself felt bad, but he couldn't assure Maan when he himself was not sure. 

Making up his mind, he warned Maan. 

"Kuch bi hojay, make sure that you don't untie Geet's hands...*Maan nods in affirmation* I will be back." saying so Dr. Khan left.


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No Precap, for I will be updating the next part by tomorrow.. 


Thank you all❤❤ for showing your unconditional love and support to this story. 


Apologies for the grammatical errors 


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                             Part 18

Edited by ShashtiJMG - 9 days ago
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Posted: 1 months ago

Updated part 17 in the above post 



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Posted: 1 months ago

Part 17


Horrific yet an Awesome Update 


Please let Dr Khan help Maan and Geet this Jessie needs

to leave them alone

though I think it's going to be a very tough road ahead 

but Dr Khan and Maan needs to find a solution so perhaps the fight against Jessie 

will be dangerous 

so it was Jessie seeing Geet in hospital and he fell in love with her 

and that is the reason that he always sat near the temple with Geet went to pray 

hell I was so scared that this time Maan should not be injured 

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Posted: 1 months ago

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jassie was killing maan but dr. khan come in time n save maan n geet

jassie share his past with both

hope d. khan will find permanent solution for freedom from jassie 



thanks for update

waiting to read more 

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Posted: 1 months ago

Omg, very nice! Feeling so bad for both. Feeling like watching a thriller movie right in front of eyes. Loving it. Almost cried at the end seeing Maan so helpless.. he wouldn’t let her go even after all this, true love. 

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The doctor arrived just in time to help save Maan from Jessie. Jessie's story is sad but he still needs to understand that love is given, not taken.

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Posted: 1 months ago

The ultimate choice should come from Geet. That would be love. What Jessie is doing is stalking, manipulation, and obsession.

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Posted: 1 months ago

Nice update feeling bad for Maan and Geet.. hopefully Dr khan Helps them to get rid of Jessie for ever for good 

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Posted: 1 months ago

Geet ko bhul jaane ki 

Means

Her chance of survival is less kya 

Jessie going win

No 

Nice part

Hope maan emotional hoke Geet ke hath na kholde