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Awesome !
2 Gud for wards..keep it up Dilbagh !
thanks for da pm 😳

WOW....SUPERB... 👏

DO CONT IT SOON...& WID A LONG PART....

OMG DB thats amazing
sorry for a late reply and coming late in here
you know how it is with GCSE on ur head
buh o well i can go on about sad saga of the exams 🤢 🤢
let me not bore u then 😆 😆

love the stroy line
gosh onli AR good luck with it ( i know u will be fine)
Cant wait for more
come on DB hurry up i know u can give us more 😳 😳
I love the first bit Armaan has weird nightmares hmm sumthing fishy in there
Ok do pm me
and dont get angry if i am late with replies ok
will surely comment when i get time
Love
Natty

Awesome work DB! Def do continuee 👏

that was sooo intriguing!! plz continue soon! i can't wait to read more!

hey
not fair, u made us wait 4 so long
and thn gave us such a short part 😭
but too, too intriguing yaar,
i mean u seem to have revealed a totally diff. side of armaan
it sounded like a typical anxiety dream
definitely not somethng u would usually associate with Mr.laidback coolguy if u knw wht i mean
do continue soon
u've got our curiosity to a fever-pitch now
don't take it to the nxt level
or u might just be responsible 4 a heart-attack 😆

ps thanx 4 the pm

Hey DB!

Firstly... Thanks for the PM.
Secondly... OH MY! What a start! You know one thing... I really don't know what to say... so all I'll say is that... You do realise that you could get A* if you submit this for your GCSE English don't you? 😆

Yaaar seriously I loved the new avatar of Armaan you're now indtroducing. 👏 👏 👏

Oh and next time, it'd betta be a longer part k!? 😆 😆 😆

Once again, great work! 👏

Very Nice Update
Really Amazing 👏
Can't wait for nxt part...
Do continue soon
Thanks for pm.

reallya nice one please update it soon

wow db the dream was reallly coooooooool when he reaches the light he wakes up poor boy
continue sooonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn
and kaira very nice work
i m eagrly to read more and please do write an extra long part as a punishment 😆 for this short part