MG FF-Enchanted #2 - Chapter 60 Pg 144, Feb 26 - Page 102

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Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: samreen2011

Beautiful shwing tge intensity of their love

Keep it up






Thank-You all smiley1

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Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: WaveTeal

Wow, that's a lovely start. Such a sweet song and a nice selection of scenes. That episode 112 and 115 are my absolute fave. I think I have put them in every single of my creations a gazillion times and I will keep doing so smiley36 I just love the intensity of their eyes there. Ufff! Glad you included those. Special mention timestamp 1:45 : Baat dill ki... This portion is lovely! smiley42 Maaneet looks so adorable hayee. Cute VM.

Anu well done 😘🌸
Keep up the good work. 💜🤗


Thank-You so much. smiley31

Means a lot. smiley42


Ohh nice it came out sensible. As Youtube made me do so much rework for copy-write stuff that by the end of it, I was like... just get done with it.smiley36

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Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: Maaneet-Cia

Thanks for the DM Anu...

Must say you did a great job with your very first VM..

It was not simply lyrical but Maaneet scenes totally matched with the current scenario Maaneet are sailing into..

I could see Geet's berukhi in her expressions in the complete song and Maan's puppy face look convincing his Rani-sa...smiley42


Why can't we get continuous updates on this FF of yours? Doesn't it work for your schedule or mindspace? Just a curious question I wish to ask...


Love, Cia..smiley27

Ohh thank-you so much Cia smiley31 for letting me know that it matched the situation. As that is what I wanted to cater.


Continuous update.. hmmm... it takes me 2-3 days to finish an update from the time I start working on it. Continuously typing one story takes makes it monotonous for me. Other, people do not have time to comment so I feel may be I am giving more than they could absorb thus take turns in stories so that people have time to place their review. smiley1

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Posted: 2 years ago

TYPING................


The update is half way done. It is expected to complete by tomorrow. I can post it by Saturday. But only if I know that you people have time to comment. I place lots of effort and motivation on pulling each single update and less comments shows me that you people are busy for a new update.


So, I will place this update on Saturday if followings are fulfilled

  • 2 more pages of meaningful comments on the latest update of 'The Burnt'
  • 1 more page of meaningful comments on the latest update of 'PHCS'
  • 1 more page of meaningful comments on the latest update of 'Poles Apart'

Just asking for update and filling the page by that won't count.


If the above are not fulfilled, I will know that you all are busy and thus wait for slated date for this update to post it, i.e - Jan 8th.

smiley31


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Posted: 2 years ago

I enjoy all your stories of maaneet

I am always waiting for your all story update

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Posted: 2 years ago


Thanks Dear.smiley27 Missing your comments on update these days

Sorry dear I will be back with my comments, Really love your Stories

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Posted: 2 years ago

pls share me the pwd for this upcoming part. i will read and comment and will try to come up to speed . i don't remember till what part i read last smiley5smiley29 missed reading it so much !

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Posted: 2 years ago

Hi Anu, thanks for the note

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Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: Maaneet-Cia

Thanks Anu for the password..

That's a really big blow on Dadima and Geet. I feel sad for Dadima and Vicky. How is Dadima going to make it up for her behaviour with Geet?? Doesn't her beloved grandson receive a punishment for such fooling around with his life and their emotions?? Why should Vicky take all tye brunt of this??

Huhhh... I'm so helpless reading the first 2 paras...

I feel heartbroken the way Geet is dealing with all this pain. Of course she shouldn't give in this easily. Haq hai usska gussa karne ka. And I want Maan to manaofy her with the depth of his and make her understand why what he did was needed at that moment and also simultaneously show how important Geet's existence, her feelings, her pain is important for him..

Anu, I'm having very high expectations from you in tye next update. As I could totally observe Maaneet distancing and wanting each other together when Maan visited the Handa home to meet Geet..

Also it was lovely to see Raja Saheb getting himself accustomed to a commoner routine. Watching movie in a small living room with family is a totally different family experience. He must have thoroughly enjoyed it and felt touched by this activity..

Loved the way he gave Rano an idea of the situation without giving the details about the real situation..

Precap seems like a desperate effort to express his emotions to Geet with a song sequence... Damn!!! Can't wait..!!!

Loving it!!!

Thanks Anu...


Love, Cia!!!

Thanks Cia. Really Thanks for such wonderful review. I so much enjoy such comments which shows what readers felt and what they are expecting. Such comments make my efforts worth it.

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OH MY GOD .. you are scaring me with your high expectations. I have completed the update but will have to review again so that it's worth it.

smiley27

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Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: Alamelu

Beautifully written as always

Maan can see how Much he has hurt geet his love. His innocent wife a commoner

he knows she has lost the connection with him and feels Like a commoner he is trying to talk to her but she is not willing to even look at him. She has closed herself off

she has even left for college before he could Wake up

He is willing to hide her space and is glad she went to her parents place

here dadi is partial fir sure. Sad she has not apologized to geet or even made an attempt to talk to her. She still wants her grandsons in front of her. Vicky feeling equally guilty

But the person most hurt is geet


like she said the soldiers families knew the truth so they sent them bravely unlike her. She has no idea what he will do to be the king. If only he had told her But then he could not have been successful


so loved him coming and staying like her Enjoying being a normal person with no tensions of taking care of all his people


Hope she sees what all he has to shoulder but still he gives her what she needs his full love


feel bad for both. Her family can sense something wrong but don’t want to interfere


Maan is trying. To get his smiling and loving wify back


Thank- you.smiley31


I thoroughly enjoy your review. Let's see how he manofy her.

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