Meri Jaan Ho Tum (AR)Prt 14/pge 123-*Note pge 140* - Page 24

that was amazinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz do continue sooon n plezz pm me wen u continue only if u don't mind
thanx

Originally posted by: saira_1

gr8 part 👏 !
update soon 😳

thnxx Saira

Originally posted by: meow23

wow!!!! armaan can't hav enuf of ragging........ wot wil b is plan.n wen is d patiala trip cmng..................... thanx 4 d pm....... update soonnn 😊

thnxx meow23...
hmm... armi's over ragging... he just can't get enough of ridz😳
the patiala camp won't b until a while.😕.. sorry... 1st thr differences need 2 b sorted..

Originally posted by: prernawaghray

hey thanks a lot for the pm 😉
thi part was nice

thnxx

it was kinda short n didnt have much confrontation or romance but i can understand it was a bridging part for the next part which will have armi's pranks naa??? 😉

hmm... yeh ur rite.. thr wasn't much happening in this part as its to build up 4 the nxt😉... nd thr fall😳... so a little chup- chup romance wud start wihtin in the 2 by nxt part...

it was very well written
but im not happy at only one thing ie a short update 😡
next part should be super long to compensate this one

yeh sorry yaar it was a RELI short update... but its all i could squeeze with revision at the mo... plus i was busy writing part 1 of my othr ff... nd got involved with tht... sorry😳... nxt update will b longer... pakka😆

cant wait for the next part
coz of the super cute precap
👏

thnxx Prerna 4 the sweet comment as usual
xx

Originally posted by: sweet-niz

woooow amazin updte
as usual very nce
wundr owt armi got planed
n da lil prcap souunds great lol 😳
cnt wait 4 da nxt part updte sooon

thnxx sweet-niz...

Originally posted by: perfectpiscean

Very well written! 👏

Armaan is being so obnoxious! Hope he changes soon! 😳 N our Riddhima is soo sweet! 😳 Hope Armaan doesnt trouble her much! 😆

The precap sounds yummy! 😳 (Pardon me 4 selection of word....its just that im very hungry rite nw! 😆 😳 )

Please cont. soon....cant wait 4 ur next part! 😳

Thanx 4 da PM bdw! 😳


Marisha 😳

thnxx Marisha..
hmm... yummy... nice selection of words😉
armi wud cahnge soon... pehle pyaar ka jaado to chalne do..lol😆

Originally posted by: saridena

hey 😊
thks for the pm
nice part but waiting for the next part more eagerly so updae asap ok
👏

thnxx saridena

OK Guyzz...

i hve been requested 2 change the camp 4m patiala 2 some place else...

so which place would u suggest???... ooty (i think its how its spelt😉) or Shimla
actually i'm not 4m India... so dunno any places😕.. nd chose patiala coz its also mentioned in dmg... it doesn't have much landscape/ mountanous areas does it???... so plz suggest ooty or Shimla... nd i'll change it if u want!!!

hey Ravishing_gal(sorry dont know ur name)
i just read all da parts ofur FF and i just loved it
all da parts r just mindblowing
but Armaan ridz r fighting too much yaar
plz jaldise koi love scenes likho between AR
and ya i suggest the camp in Nainital or Dehradhun
plz plz update soon and pm me when u'll update
eagerly waiting for da next part


love
rimli

loved the part 👏
especially liked the way he can't ignore her evn though he supposedly "hates" 😉 her 😆
gr8 promo 👏 is this the beginning of luv 😳
how bout shimla 4 the camp
do update soon