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Posted: 17 years ago

Part 11

Milind had scoured the empty corridor in search for her but in vain no one seemed to be around,he stood stumped the hospital sprawled on an extensive piece of land,the place was massive how was he going to find her.Just then a nurse clad in starched white walked past him and he stopped her to ask "Dr Krishna kahaan hongi?" Where would Dr Krishna be? "Apney cabin main" In her cabin came the prompt reply. Asking her for directions he had followed her to the heart of the building the clicking of her heels resonating in the shiny corridor,pointing to a room she had gestured him to knock and had walked back the way they had come.


Knocking raptly on the white ash door he had heard a disgruntled "Come in",stepping inside he found the doctor poring over X-ray results gauging by her apprehension he realized the conversation should be a brief one. She had looked up to see him standing there dissapppointedly trying to pacify a very restless Preeti in his arms.


"Mujhey Prachi key baarey main puuchna tha... woh kahaan hai?" "I wanted to ask about Prachi where is she?" he had enquired without any preliminaries. "Prachi kon? .....oh inki mummy?" Prachi who? .. oh her mother" she had clarified "Woh to chali gayeen, mujhey laga aap bhi saath hii hongey" She's left I thought you'd be with her. A sudden wave of panic washed over him,where could she go in such a battered condition, maybe she went home. He stood musing on her whereabouts when he saw the doctor hand out something to him, it was her purse she had forgotten it in her haste, Damn he had thought taking it from her. As he turned the door knob to leave he heard the doctor call out to him
"Mr Mishra next time you send your family out see to it that they have enough cash to get around."


"Kiya matlab?" What do you mean? he had asked confused , he soon received his asnswer when she handed him a gold ring and plain gold chain. "What's this?" he had asked flustered why was she giving him jewellery and whose was it anyways. "This is your wife's she didn't have anything to pay for your daughter's medical treatment so she gave these to the receptionist.Since you've paid all the bills I think you can return these to her." Taking them from her hand he had looked at the objects perplexed. Had she really done it? Given up her valuable posessions for his daughter's treatment. He knew how deplorable her financial conditions were and these trinkets would've meant a lot, yet she had parted with them for Preeti.


He had turned to leave when on a sudden impulse he had turned around halfway through the doorway "Kiya Prachi ney aapsey kaha tha keh woh Mrs Mishra hai?" Did Prachi tell you she's Mrs Mishra? Dr Krishna had stared at him strangely "Nahin" No she had replied "Jo couple unhain yahaan chor gaya tha unhon ney bataya tha" The couple who left her here had informed me. and she had noticed his face lose colour as he shut the door behind him. Preeti had been highly amused to see Prachi's gold ring she recognised it immediately trying to pull it from Milind's firm grasp. He had to find her he just had to and with that sole thought running wild in his mind his pace had quickened towards the parking lot.


Prachi had no idea of her next course of action she was far from home and that too penniless, she watched as people slowly started leaving the park she realised it would soon be empty. She had to walk her way home whether she liked it or not. Her mind understood the gravity of the situation but her body refused to comply, she just couldn't make herself move.She felt like screaming at the top of her lungs if only she could just go home ......somehow. Tightening her grip on the hand rail of the bench she had managed to get up ignoring the sharp pain that arose every time she moved a muscle she trudged forward.


She had been about to cross the park gates when she heard a voice call her from behind turning around she was surprised to see Krithika her neighbour stand there."Prachi tum yahaan?" Prachi how come you'r here? she had inquired pleasantly, she obviously was there for her own kids who scampered around her. She had two of them six year old Karan and three year old Tina the kids had immediately come to Prachi extremely pleased to see her there. They were very fond of their Prachi aunty who baby sat them sometimes when their mother was busy with work. "Aunty chaliye na ghar humarey saath" Aunty come home with us Tina had pleaded circling her small arms around Prachi's leg, joined by Karan "Haan na aunty aap ney humain Jungle Book bhi parh ker sunani hai, aap ney vaada kiya tha yaad haina aapko" Yes Aunty you have to read Jungle Book to us you promised remember he had smiled cheekily at her.


Prachi couldn't have felt more relieved she thought she could hitch a ride home with them. It was then that Krithika had realized that Prachi was silent moving closer she was horrified to see her wounds. "Prachi kiya hua tumko?" Prachi what happened to you? she had asked alarmed gently placing a hand on her sagging shoulder. Prachi had found it hard to keep her tears at bay but she braved a weak smile telling her that she had had a simple accident and would be extremely grateful if Krithika could take her home.The other woman had immediately assented, stopping a passing auto rickshaw she had quickly explained the driver their destination cramming in it they had headed for the chawl.As they rounded the bend Prachi had noticed a black Kompressor follow their rickshaw, she recognised it as Milind's had he seen her she had wondered fearfully.


Milind had floored the engine trying to keep calm, his eyes scanned the roads furtively hoping to find her walking down one of them. He had been extremely taken aback with Prachi's gestures for Preeti, she had risked her own life, received injuries, bore his wrath and had left without a word that too without any cash on hand. "Sab meri ghalati hai" It's all my fault he had thought angrily why couldn't he have just let her explain atleast she wouldn't have fled in that state.Keeping a sharp lookout for her he had driven around the corner away from the bus stop when he had noticed her talking to some other woman at the park gates, slowing down his car he watched as the two kids smiled up at her pulling her hand towards the doorway. He saw her smile half heartedly and walk with the trio to an auto rickshaw and then they had gone.


He had been assuaged to see her head for home and had decided to leave for his own when he saw her purse adorning his dash board.Aw crap he had thought now he'd have to return it to her but why, the question had arisen on his mind's surface countless times throughout the drive to her house. Why was he fretting for her discomfort after all she was just an employee. Just an employee, just an employee the words kept echoing in his mind till his head had started swimming. He followed the rickshaw to the chawl, he saw the other woman pay the fare and help her out but before they could advance further he had gotten out of his car and called out to her.

He could see the dread her eyes held for him yet she stayed put telling her friend she would be fine as Krithika dragged Karan and Tina up the stairs. Gingerly sprinting up to her he had held out her purse "Tuu wahiin bhuul gayi thi" You'd forgotten it there. he had stated, he noticed she was terrified of him her hand shook slightly as she took the bag from him. He saw her clutch it to her heart turning away in an attempt to flee, feeling encumbered with guilt and extremely ashamed of himself he had caught her wrist in an attempt to stall her.



She felt every pore of her skin break into an icy sweat as his hand touched hers the bag fell from her hand her face strained "Mainey jaan bujh ker nahin kiya kuch" I didn't do anything on purpose she had said frightened by his sudden move "Main...main ney kuch nahin kaha tha doctor sey app...aap yaqeen karein...please" I.. I didn't say anything to the doctor... trust me please she had whimpered and his heart had stopped beating for a fraction of a second.Taking her hands in his he had gently turned her so that she stood facing him, her eyes were down cast and he noticed the fresh tears that stained her cheeks. "Mujhey malum hai" I know he had told her looking at her tenderly, he saw her face lift up to him her eyes mirroring her disbelief "Main eik haftey kii chutti dey sakta huun iss sey zyaada nahin" I can just grant a week's leave not more than that. he had said somberly before he turned around leaving her stare after him, pulling away from the place he watched her still standing on the spot in the car's side view mirror till her image faded in the distance.
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Edited by blind horizon - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

she has hun...

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Posted: 17 years ago
thanx for the update, poor prachi, she seemed so frightened of milsi my heart went out to her fragile state, milsi 😡 it was sweet of prachi to give her jewellery to pay for preeti's medical bill, it got milsi thinking and im glad the doc cleared the issue about whether prachi said she was mrs mishra. it was nice to see milsi worry about prachi,and it seems like he is thinking of her as more than an employee 😳 but i feel it was too little too late, im so dissapointed with milsi, he didnt even apologise 😡 lets see how he makes it up to her. did he give her back her jewellery?

loved the update, cant wait for the next installment 😊

p.s. i loved how preeti recognised the jewellery and tried taking it off her dad, she is sooooo cute 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago

oh i didn't see, thanks, have been going crazy by reading one ff after another.

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Posted: 17 years ago
Muneeza...loved it....!!
Milind's guilt after knowing prachi's sacrifice and the whole truth was just so beautifully written...! I fell in love with Milind once again... U made it happen for me...!
I loved the last bit...! Milind very sweetly telling her to take a week off and Prachi looking at him in amazement...! I can visualize everything...! It was simply awesome...!
Waiting for you to continue soon...! I'm loving it..! 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
o.k now my anlaysis.

i felt so sorry for prachi in this update, i could sense her fear of miland. Was she scared of him due to the rumors that she had heard of him OR due to the way he had reacted towards her? i guess it must have been a mix of both na?

loved preeti so much, when i was reading the part of her noticing prachi's jewerally i was like aawwwwwwww! why can't miland just see this interaction 😡 and for the sake of his daughter get married to prachi as he does say that he can do anything for his daughter than why not this???

now miland i feeling a bit angry on him 😡, sorry munees but didn't really like him on this update. Firstly he is soooo confused and can not really see her pain but i guess he did relise his mistake but didn't even say sorr to her 😡 . please munees don't make me hate him more and let him do something which makes my opionin change again. i don't really want to hate him and hope he does something really great for prachi to be happy again. i don't think he wil be able to sleep at night due to what his actions towards prachi

this surely does not mean about your writing o.k, i have loved each and every part of your ff so much so far!!! i hope you are open to bad feedback! 😆 😆 😆

i did not understand the last part very much, i know he did not say sorry but what did he say at the end before he left. i do know hindi and sometimes don't know the meaning of some words, so plz translate in english! thanks.

i don't really know what to expect next anymore, i just hope miland does something goof for prachi.

totally an awesome part! thanks for that part!! when is the next update??? can't wait to read more....
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Posted: 17 years ago
Muneeza, this is to say I am following your FF, although I am a late starter. I simply love it. Although the plot reminds me of old English classics, you have brought in a breath of fresh air and have made it fairly emotional and desi. I was a little disappointed in your Milsi. After all that he had put her through he didn't utter a word of apology but bruskly granted her a week's leave (as though that itself was big enough compensation for her risking her life to save his daughter). Did he remember to return her chain and ring? Or would he have to come back to return them? If he does, I would prefer that he atleast thanks her for what she has done.

In an earlier chapter you had mentioned about Milsi getting scared seeing Prachi's dupatta catch fire and how he hastened to put it out. I have a feeling that he lost his first wife to fire and the needle of suspicion is on him maybe because he was there when it happened and couldn't save her. The fire coud have been an accident but I am inclined to think that his wife went into post partem depression after the birth of Preethi and committed suicide. It is too early to be making such sweeping statements but I tend to live on the edge, shooting my mouth off without a thought. Keep up the good work!
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Posted: 17 years ago

thanx for the update, poor prachi, she seemed so frightened of milsi my heart went out to her fragile state, milsi 😡 Thank u hun Prachi ofcourse is damn frightened of him oh the fragile state will pass hun.it was sweet of prachi to give her jewellery to pay for preeti's medical bill, it got milsi thinking and im glad the doc cleared the issue about whether prachi said she was mrs mishra.Well it was the only thing Prachi could do to have her treated the doctor had to clear the issue sweetheart thats what doctors are for 😆 it was nice to see milsi worry about prachi,and it seems like he is thinking of her as more than an employee 😳 but i feel it was too little too late, im so dissapointed with milsi, he didnt even apologise 😡 lets see how he makes it up to her. did he give her back her jewellery?

Hun you must understand Milsi is not the type who'r easy on others and on themselves he's had a rough life sorry just doesn't come easy. You'll get to know about the jewellery later.😊

loved the update, cant wait for the next installment 😊

p.s. i loved how preeti recognised the jewellery and tried taking it off her dad, she is sooooo cute 😳

Aw thx sweets yes that Preeti has an eye for ornaments.[/QUOTE]

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: *angel94*

Great Part
Please continue soon.

Oh thank you hun 😊

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: tweety_me14

Muneeza...loved it....!!
Milind's guilt after knowing prachi's sacrifice and the whole truth was just so beautifully written...! I fell in love with Milind once again... U made it happen for me...!

I'm honoured hun 😊
I loved the last bit...! Milind very sweetly telling her to take a week off and Prachi looking at him in amazement...! I can visualize everything...! It was simply awesome...!
Waiting for you to continue soon...! I'm loving it..! 😛

Yup Milsi is a man of action not words. You visualized it... I did too and it seemed damned perfect. 😊

Edited by blind horizon - 17 years ago

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