The Art of Pulling Heartstrings- Fanfiction - Page 3

Noted. i wanted to bring out something else but I realize it did not come out as I intended. will be tweaking some changes to it now.

Thank you for the feedback..

Originally posted by: Pinecone

This is SO well written. But i don't think the apology to manbeer was needed. That part bothered me. Sahiba never did anything to negate Manbeers pain at being cheated by her husband. But an innocent child should not suffer and grow up an orphan for her issues and pain. Apart from that one aspect I liked your chapter.

I would have liked Sahiba to also point out that not only did Angad do nothing, he defended Seerat and claimed Sahiba was being too harsh on Seerat.

What a well written chapter. Big applause to Sahiba where she laid bare all things. she should have been vocal on another point that Angad never stopped Seerat from badmouthing her but immediately jumps in when Sahiba says anything to Seerat. I mean that's such a disrespect for your partner. this shows forget love you don't even respect them. and all for whom a girl who did fraud with you and left you on altar and ran away from wedding

Plus she should told angad that how easily he has forgiven Seerat for everything but made sahiba's life hell since the day they got married where he agreed willingly for the marriage

I somehow cannot forget these instances even if i want to believe Angad loves Sahiba. This is toxic love and the expectation out of it is u possess the person as atrophy rather than embracing their true self

I feel may be in some future instance, sahiba should give it to all Brars too for their treatment of her and Seerat

ek baar sub bhadas nikal ke nikal lo waha se

I dont feel like pinecone the apology to Manbeer was necessary. or may be you can add that even though Sahiba never knowingly did this to manbeer but manbeer made sure Sahiba suffers with full consciousness. Sahiba should point that out as well. plus its high time sahiba also opens up on simran's kidnapping. I mean the event orchestrated by manbeer which almost took Sahiba's life

overall a wonderful chapter and as usual angad ko kuch samazh nahi aa raha..what is th end..i cant wait to know the suspense

Thanks for the tag. really looking forward to read more as we surely are not getting a proper arc for all of sahiba's pain and angad's treachery in show

Eagerly look forward to next update, pls write soon. ❤️

How I wish this happened in the show!!!! This is what we need. I loved how Sahiba pours her heart out... I really felt for her... And people finally realizing that yes... Seerat puttar is the jadd of all problems! And the way she listed out all of Angads kaands... Dil ko sukoon mil gai 😍😍... Very very nice update... Loved it!!! And the cliffhanger.... M really eager to know what Pam saw... Can't wait 🙃🙃🙃.... Thanks for tagging me... Eagerly waiting for the next chapter...

Beautifully worded and the emotions are written as if we can visualize...waiting for the next...

The best part is Sahiba listing all the sins..

Angadi reaction sao predictable

Waiting for an update. ❤️

I just caught up with both the chapters and loved them!! Finally the truth is out!! Sahiba poured her heart out and I loved that she said it to Angad and in front of everyone!! They needed to know the truth and suffering she has gone through!! I love that you mentioned Sahiba’s behavior also and it was totally justified!! She started to love her husband and she saw her husband with her own sister!! I am so glad that finally Sahiba spoke about all her sacrifices and struggles for Seerat out loud!! Beautifully written and well done!! Can’t wait to read more 💕

Please write more soon

Where did you disaapear? Hopefully you are writing another awesome chapter...

Please please give us another chapter. U can’t leave us like that