Neil Bhatt/ DCP VC AT 3: Duniya ke saare hero Virat sir ke aage zero - Page 61

Originally posted by: Asur

Haalim, yaar kuch to reaction do. Achchha laga, bura laga, kuch to batao

Kal bhi busy thi yaar. Aur meri cousin ki beti ne mujhe maa banaya hua hai, saans le paa rahi hun itna hi time bach'ta hai mere paas

Iss se pehle aap naraaz hojayein maine apni adopted beti ko meri mother ke hawale kar diya aur ek saans main poori story padh daali

Yaar Sai se kya naraazgi thi aapki?

Ek tou cheating karwa di aur itna torture

I loved the Virat you've written not like the show one who let people walk over him.

Pehla part padh ke itni hansi chhooti meri

I loved the first and the last part the most.

Damn good!

You are an amazing writer. You should write more

❤❤❤

Originally posted by: Haalim

Iss se pehle aap naraaz hojayein maine apni adopted beti ko meri mother ke hawale kar diya aur ek saans main poori story padh daali

Yaar Sai se kya naraazgi thi aapki?

Ek tou cheating karwa di aur itna torture

I loved the Virat you've written not like the show one who let people walk over him.

Pehla part padh ke itni hansi chhooti meri

I loved the first and the last part the most.

Damn good!

You are an amazing writer. You should write more

❤❤❤

Many people hadn't liked this story because I didn't make them perfect

If I write more, you'll have to keep your adopted daughter with your mother for a long time

And thank you for this

Originally posted by: Asur

I had made Devyani cheat on Pulkit too

Many people hadn't liked this story because I didn't make them perfect

If I write more, you'll have to keep your adopted daughter with your mother for a long time

And thank you for this

Really? After someone's entry I've started loving cheating troupes

The show already ended na, I can enjoy the good writing now.

Even my mother likes to pamper her, thoda adjust kar sakte hain. Aap likho

Cheeku ji aap apna dusra naam batayen.....OS ke baad mujhe cheeku pasand to nhi tha ab humesha yaad rhega

Originally posted by: Ashane25

Cheeku ji aap apna dusra naam batayen.....OS ke baad mujhe cheeku pasand to nhi tha ab humesha yaad rhega

Call me Asur

Cheeku ka beej is nice

I tried cheeku a few years back, achha taste karte hain yaar. Haan pehle thoda earthy taste aaya tha munh main.

Originally posted by: Haalim

Cheeku ka beej is nice

I tried cheeku a few years back, achha taste karte hain yaar. Haan pehle thoda earthy taste aaya tha munh main.

Originally posted by: Asur

I loved playing with cheeku ke seeds more than eating cheeku itself

Nice! I played with marbles

I loved Cheeku ka beej OS. When I didn't know you write stories too I got from your writing style that you are an amazing writer ❤

Originally posted by: Haalim

Nice! I played with marbles

I loved Cheeku ka beej OS. When I didn't know you write stories too I got from your writing style that you are an amazing writer ❤

Thankyou Haalim I was immersed in writing stories during those ganja days