Vyapti's Dreamland - Page 18

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Can you name it

I don't love you.

Love means sacrifice,

Sacrifice is not in my nature.

Then, what is this feeling

That I feel for you?

When you are with me

It feels like

Heavy rain after scorching sun.

As you put your hand on my head

As my tears wet your cloth

I want that moment to last forever.

I don't have time for you

Yet the thought of losing you

Makes me panicked.

I don't love you

Yet I always feel

The love for me within you.

Can you give a name

To this bond that we share?

Originally posted by: vyapti

Can you name it

I don't love you.

Love means sacrifice,

Sacrifice is not in my nature.

Then, what is this feeling

That I feel for you?

When you are with me

It feels like

Heavy rain after scorching sun.

As you put your hand on my head

As my tears wet your cloth

I want that moment to last forever.

I don't have time for you

Yet the thought of losing you

Makes me panicked.

I don't love you

Yet I always feel

The love for me within you.

Can you give a name

To this bond that we share?

In fact, love is comfort and protection, it is natural and accepting. It is calm and passionate. It is stoic and spontaneous. Likewise, it is generous and forgiving, a steady ship on any horizon. ❤️

Well-written poem, Vyapti. 🤗

This is so beautiful! 🤗

Originally posted by: vyapti

Can you name it

I don't love you.

Love means sacrifice,

Sacrifice is not in my nature.

Then, what is this feeling

That I feel for you?

When you are with me

It feels like

Heavy rain after scorching sun.

As you put your hand on my head

As my tears wet your cloth

I want that moment to last forever.

I don't have time for you

Yet the thought of losing you

Makes me panicked.

I don't love you

Yet I always feel

The love for me within you.

Can you give a name

To this bond that we share?

This is pure love .

Meaningless

I am a failure,

You are a failure too;

Yet we measure

The failures of each other.

I measure your failure,

There is no way out for me.

You measure my failure,

It's your right.

We give no joy

To each other.

Yet we can't leave each other,

Circumstances dictate so.

This is such a deep take on the society's shortcomings!

Nice poem, Nibedita. ❤️Failure brings us some insights into life, and success inspires us to march forward with new zest. Look at the failure from a different perspective. Failures are the intermediate steps towards success. Every failure has some new life lesson to teach you, and you can add on to your experience to make your ride more powerful on the path of success.

Water

************

The heart flies away.

Like a bird

It immerses its beak in pond

And drinks.

Do birds really

Immerse their beak in ponds and drink?

I don't know,

I have not watched birds for years.

It immerses its beak in pond,

The thirst is unbearable.

It was without water for ages.

The thirst is quenched,

The insufferable days are wiped out

Like the light of stars at daytime.

Yet it does not lift its beak,

It can not.

Except keeping its beak immersed in that water

It does not find any other meaning of life.

Highly meaningful poem, Nibedita.

A longing and a never-ending desire are reflected in these lines.