FF: IMPERATIVE IMPULSES [Ch17-20, 20/05/24 Completed] - Page 41

Originally posted by: NobleAditi6

awesome update as always dearest author, eagerly looking forward to next update, much love to you <3

Thank you so much!!

I will try to write a better chapter update and post it soon.

🤗🤗

Originally posted by: arshisimple

This was a roller coaster ride!! The details of emotions were spot on!! I loved Gurleen’s pov and thoughts!!! The backstory of why Darjee is against women working, the bad relationship between Inder and Darjee and of course Manbeer and Inder were very well described!!! I was shocked to read about Jasleen!!! She was that snake who would bite her own family, she didn’t even spare Garry , her own son!!! Garry really had toxic relationship growing up and made sense why he is the way he is today!!!!

Angad and Sahiba are growing as adults!!! I love how supportive Angad is to Sahiba!! You explained nicely why Sahiba is the way she is or why Angad is the way he is!!! I am so glad that you are showing shift in feelings first from Angad’s side and not Sahiba !!!

Once again you outdid yourself and love this part 💗

Thank you for tag PM, really appreciate it 🙂

Hi,

Thank you for sharing your opinion on the chapter, makes me happy to read it and write accordingly.

The back story was lying around in my drafts from a long time and I just found a chance to include it here.

Initially, I wrote a completely different draft of the remaining chapters of this ff. That included a serious Angad revealing his changed emotions to Sahiba and waiting for her till whenever. Sahiba was supposed to feel all conscious and tension between the two of them before confessing. Now, I do not how everything will pan out except for the fact that most of things will be different.

Thank you once again, you're welcome. I do not might dropping a pm or tag since it is easier to follow with the updates.

See you soon in the next update!

Originally posted by: LizzynDarcy

Hi!!

Whenever someone tells me that they will re-read the chapter because they like it, my day is already made.

Mission accomplished! Means so much more in the context of this chapter. I will take it as compliment to my editing skills.

I hope your exams are over and maybe we can expect an update on your story as well. I cannot help but be excited for that.

Oh, 😳 I tend to re-read your work half the time. 💖

Nah, exams are finishing in the 2nd week of August. I have the chapter planned, like what I want to show and what not .....but I haven't even drafted it yet 😔 so it's going to take some time.

Originally posted by: mirai07

Oh, 😳 I tend to re-read your work half the time. 💖

❤️❤️❤️❤️😳 really? This is so heart warming!!

Nah, exams are finishing in the 2nd week of August. I have the chapter planned, like what I want to show and what not .....but I haven't even drafted it yet 😔 so it's going to take some time.

What, seems so long. This must be getting on your nerves. Take your time, your readers will be patiently waiting. 🤗

I read the chapter Yesterday at snail pace😆. The slowest i have ever read lol. Now let's get to the comment.

I liked Gurleen's pov, she might be most calmest person in the whole family.

Jasleen😡 what type of a person is she? Ungrateful and sick. Individuals like her should never be parents. Vese it's good Jasleen got a daughter in law just like her😆Self centred and egoistic. I am feeling sad for Garry! He didn't have a nice childhood neither he is gonna have a peaceful life. He is stuck i really wish he could leave just like his sister.

Now coming to Manbir and Inder I can finally understand the reason these two have a strained relationship. Losing a child is big deal seeing the person who was cause for it still in house is not a nice feeling and on top of that your husband can't do anything. I get it.

I liked Angad and Sahiba's scene. It's nice to see Angad's care for Sahiba. Sahiba have came a long way since the marriage day. And I like how she is growing steadily but with things she will remember. The dance scene caught me off guard 🤣. I get you angad I really do(not really 😆)

As always the chapter was great. I am looking forward to read what's gonna happen next. TAG ME!

Originally posted by: Minhasmansi92

I read the chapter Yesterday at snail pace😆. The slowest i have ever read lol. Now let's get to the comment.

I liked Gurleen's pov, she might be most calmest person in the whole family.

Jasleen😡 what type of a person is she? Ungrateful and sick. Individuals like her should never be parents. Vese it's good Jasleen got a daughter in law just like her😆Self centred and egoistic. I am feeling sad for Garry! He didn't have a nice childhood neither he is gonna have a peaceful life. He is stuck i really wish he could leave just like his sister.

Now coming to Manbir and Inder I can finally understand the reason these two have a strained relationship. Losing a child is big deal seeing the person who was cause for it still in house is not a nice feeling and on top of that your husband can't do anything. I get it.

I liked Angad and Sahiba's scene. It's nice to see Angad's care for Sahiba. Sahiba have came a long way since the marriage day. And I like how she is growing steadily but with things she will remember. The dance scene caught me off guard 🤣. I get you angad I really do(not really 😆)

As always the chapter was great. I am looking forward to read what's gonna happen next. TAG ME!

Heya,

I thought my message on Sunday got on your nerves. Phew.

Gurleen and her husband both: they put up with their crazy family.

I agree with you, Jasleen did get a D-i-L like her and the latter is her perfect match. Garry is a sad villain, whom none tried to help truly.

Manbir and Inder had enough love and respect towards each other to stay together without much trouble, unlike the show.😆

You were surprised by the dance scene - Really? It was really unoriginal of me.😳 You can listen to the song to understand what he went through.😉

Thank you! I will tag you and try to update soon.

Originally posted by: LizzynDarcy

Heya,

Hellos😆,

I thought my message on Sunday got on your nerves. Phew.

You texted me on Sunday? Well than I was little more insane than you because I don't remember.

Gurleen and her husband both: they put up with their crazy family.

They surely do.

I agree with you, Jasleen did get a D-i-L like her and the latter is her perfect match. Garry is a sad villain, whom none tried to help truly.

That's the only problem Garry was never helped because he was tagged like mother like son 🥴

Manbir and Inder had enough love and respect towards each other to stay together without much trouble, unlike the show.😆

Yes yes. That's true!

You were surprised by the dance scene - Really? It was really unoriginal of me.😳 You can listen to the song to understand what he went through.😉

I will definitely listen to the song 😆

Thank you! I will tag you and try to update soon.

Yo!

Wow Lizzy welcome back. I am so happy u will finish this story

It is such sensible track for this serial and we desperately need sense in Sahan story

I am still stuck on angad watching sahiba dance and his physical discomfort. Can't wait to see how they move from roommates to someone more

Hey,

Glad to see a familiar person on the forum!! I thought everyone I was familiar with has already left this section.

I always intended to finish this, but job hunting in the way. Now that it is out of the way, I am back.

How have you been?