FF: IMPERATIVE IMPULSES [Ch17-20, 20/05/24 Completed] - Page 39

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Posted: 2 years ago

Hey when are you updating the story ?

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Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: Reader17

Hey when are you updating the story ?


Hi,

I will update this weekend.

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Posted: 2 years ago


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Posted: 2 years ago

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I think, these are all the remaining tags that were missed during PM. Apparently, a senior member cannot message more than 50 people within stipulated time. So, whoever was missed, I tried to tag you all. Some of you might have been accidentally both tagged and pmed. Apologies for being all over the place.

Do tag this post if you wish me to add/remove you from alerting you with the updates of this story.

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Posted: 2 years ago

What a lovely update! I love how you’ve justified Akaal’s stance on the women being being barred from working, how supportive Manvir and Gurleen are with Jaspal..


The backstory does make one sad for Garry… he had a toxic parent growing up..it’s bound to leave scars on his soul.


Seerat and Jasleen are finally getting their dues while Sahiba is innocently leading Aangad to long cold showers!!!!


Update soon! 🤗


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Posted: 2 years ago

Lovely update dear 😘

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Posted: 2 years ago

Very detailed chapter portraying every character progress in current times. My favorite section was how Sahiba and Angad relationship is growing. Would love to see a strong Sahiba return to India who can teach her sister and Jasleen a lesson.

Thanks for tagging

Great job! Continue soon

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Posted: 2 years ago

Wow Lizzie what a nice update. Gurleen's POV was nice and gave the background on majority issues in brar family. I feel sad for Garry, after having abusive parent (Jasleen), observing an obsessive parent (Manbir) and a controlling grandparent no wonder he is messed up. Plus I am sure the constant comparison with Angad wouldn't have helped matters. I am surprised why indar and manbir didn't seperate out. They should have when the elder brars allowed Jasleen to stay. Manbir to be disillusioned and angry with him becomes understandable


As u have compared angad is more action oriented than his father. He identified issues and took immediate steps to maintain respectful distance from toxic elements. His care for sahiba when she had the breakdown, his subtle ways of guiding her to explore new places was such a cute thing. He truly is a gentleman and a sharp businessman


Hahaha the dance sequence was hilarious. I guess angad first time realised sahiba is beautiful and sexy woman. I mean he might have noticed it before but in all the turmoil he never did give it much thought. His solution to avoid bathroom trips was awesome. Sahiba though is very comfortable with him and considers him her friend, is still clueless. Can't wait to see how they acknowledge to themselves and each other that they want to be more tha. Friends

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Posted: 2 years ago

Thanks for the tag

Beautiful update ❤️💞

Gurleen's pov was beautifully described 👏

The events which led to Manbir's misscariage was painful 😭

The reason for Manbir and Inderpal's fallout was tragic 😭

Loved the way you described the strong bond between Manbir, Inderpal, Gurleen and Jaspal

Felt sorry for Garry, he is like this because of his parents

Glad Seerat and Jasleen are getting their due punishment

Angad is a gentleman, loved the way he took care of Sahiba during her breakdown and helped her navigate her college life❤️

Sahiba unknowingly led Angad to cold showers😉

Angad is getting attracted to Sahiba while she considers him a friend 😊

Waiting for the time when Sahan will realise that they can be more than friends

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