His last good bye migrated (link in pg 21) - Page 15

Bookmarked 😌

Thanks for the tag. 💚

Originally posted by: Hetvi_12

Bookmarked 😌

Thanks for the tag. 💚

Sorry Hetvi for sounding like a total noob...

What does bookmark mean in IF.

I mean can we bookmark 🔖📑 a topic in IF?

This was bugging me for long time...

Originally posted by: umawanderer

I mean can we bookmark 🔖📑 a topic in IF?

This was bugging me for long time...

No no, ye toh Me apne clipboard par ye post ki link paste kar rahi hu. Jab time milega i will read. Easily link se topic mil jata hai... 😅😅

Originally posted by: umawanderer

Sorry Hetvi for sounding like a total noob...

What does bookmark mean in IF.

I mean can we bookmark 🔖📑 a topic in IF?

This was bugging me for long time...

(Disclaimer: this post will be all over the place so please bear with me😆)

I appreciate you tagging me in updates, Uma.❤️ I have taken a break from here but I kept coming back to read this story . I'm so glad you're giving each character a backstory; makes read more interesting. This fanfic has me totally hooked.

I would love to know more about Yash and eventually watch him triumph over the Birlas in court🤣 he seems like such a sweetheart.

More of Sanju, please. I already like her 😆❤️.

Why am I not surprised by Birla's corrupt and self-centered behaviour? They are terrible in both the show and the fanfiction, but at least you're giving them more depth in this.😆

A+ grade angst served by NavBhir 🤌🔥

Loved all of their interactions Abhir still calls himself as Sharma 😭 so wholesome ❤️

I want to see Abhir with rest of the Sharma family now , for some lighthearted moments 😅😆

Felt awful for Shivu , boy deserves better.

Parth had a sad ending but he had that coming .

Birla elders screwed up big time, huh ? 😆

Destroying lives of next two generations, but atleast Aarohi , Roohi and Abhir have got some exit points in form of Abhinav and Bundelas 😆 happy for ‘em but Shivu is really stuck in there .

Thanks for the tag... Wow, the adults in this story are so horribly insensitive... Unable to deal with their issues they've spoilt these poor kids life. They need to be punished for their doings. I like Yash. I am interested in the mystery you have introduced. Nice chapter once again... Kudos to you

Finished chapter 7

I couldn't read part 7B after understanding Parth's sequences, I just FF read it . Will definitely try to read it little later. But wow, that was intense. Poor Shefali!

Shivu at this point seems to have had worst childhood now. 😭

Originally posted by: TianaWrites

Thanks for the tag... Wow, the adults in this story are so horribly insensitive... Unable to deal with their issues they've spoilt these poor kids life. They need to be punished for their doings. I like Yash. I am interested in the mystery you have introduced. Nice chapter once again... Kudos to you

@bold: I feel they are already being punished... Their children are not happy with them... They themselves cannot be happy...

Sometimes I feel there should be exams to be a parent... Being a parent is a huge responsibility and many people become parents before they could mature enough to handle that... Sigh 🙄😔 I have no idea why I just said that.

@italics: Yeah ... This mystery was introduced in chapter 2 itself... One of Abhir's memories was Manjari refusing him to do last rites....

So... To do last rites... There should have been a body right? At least that's what I tried to imply....

I guess I am not that good 🤷‍♀️🤷‍♀️🤷‍♀️

Parth death and Shivu's trauma was also hinted before... Chapter 3.

Originally posted by: umawanderer

@bold: I feel they are already being punished... Their children are not happy with them... They themselves cannot be happy...

Sometimes I feel there should be exams to be a parent... Being a parent is a huge responsibility and many people become parents before they could mature enough to handle that... Sigh 🙄😔 I have no idea why I just said that.

@italics: Yeah ... This mystery was introduced in chapter 2 itself... One of Abhir's memories was Manjari refusing him to do last rites....

So... To do last rites... There should have been a body right? At least that's what I tried to imply....

I guess I am not that good 🤷‍♀️🤷‍♀️🤷‍♀️

Parth death and Shivu's trauma was also hinted before... Chapter 3.

Ooh I didn't actually guess that... I thought like you know in some cases police will come and inform and people perform namesake rituals right? I thought something like that and Abhir wasn't allowed.

About the parents already punished I feel that the child have been suffering way more than them though they are not at fault at all...

You are a great writer... The story has kept me hooked so far

Originally posted by: shahsb_26

Finished chapter 7

I couldn't read part 7B after understanding Parth's sequences, I just FF read it . Will definitely try to read it little later. But wow, that was intense. Poor Shefali!

Shivu at this point seems to have had worst childhood now. 😭

Thanks Sejal...

Because of you, now I know that my hardwork is not wasted... Splitting the chapter into 2parts and informing everyone about the dark theme....

I guess this chapter 7b was waay dark... It had many serious topics...It must have been too much...

@bold: Maine toh pehle hi sab ko bataya tha ki Shivu ki life baaki dono se zyada bhayankar hai... Chapter 3 mei hi hint diya tha...

Wait till others backstories...

I repeat... The only Birla kid who is truly happy is Naira Birla 😂😂😂😂