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Well TBH i don't feel that level of sympathy to anyone in the show but this version and the way you are writing are making me things.

You are right he could have done a lot of things better, not getting involved with Aruhi was one of them.

That's what i meant she wasn't the victim of Abhira like she and others are making it look like Abhinav maybe in future.

Abhi unlike Akshara was always clear with one thing that his love his Akshara and rest is responsibility. But i strongly feel alot of wrong happened in Abhira life coz of Aruhi and i don't think she realises this fact. Post leap Aruhi is yes a sensible person but pre leap the fact she sold info about Kairav.

Yes I really look forward to read ahead and more of their POV.

I am glad that out of the three at least Roohi had a somewhat stable life. Roohi lives with Yash, right?

My heart goes out to Abhir and Abhinav. They do not deserve this. Actually, Nobody deserves to be related to Abhira. They are just too messed up and keep ruining everything and everyone around them

But can we get more of Chanchal in the next part? I want to know more about her. And Yash

Yeah... I kinda agree with you on the Abhira part.. but to be fair... They are too dumb to actually realize their mistakes and learn from them.

Maybe my writing sucked. so let me put the basic facts in this post regarding Birla kids.

1. Abhir and Shivu stay in an all-boys boarding school. (Though not said till now.. The school is in Ajmer)

2. Krish is also in the same school.

3. Shivu graduated (18 years)

4. Roohi is staying with her new grandmother Rajashri Bundela in Delhi.

5. Naira is the only Birla kid staying with Birla House all the time.

6. All the Birla kids did not change their surnames.

7. Yash and Arohi are staying in London.

8. Roohi's full custody went to Arohi, but she was not yet adopted by Bundelas. So if ever Arohi dies before Roohi reaches adulthood then, Roohi's custody will be taken by Birlas.

These are the points. So that no one gets confused. These were told in the above parts but I guess wrote it way too complexly... sorry for that...

All the kids come to Udaipur for festivals and summer vacations. Roohi's two grandmothers hate each other so her case will be always complex regarding her vacations. but other than that... Roohi had fewer problems compared to her brothers.

Actually, the only Birla kid without any problems in her life is Naira Birla🤪

Now to another point...

Chanchal Sharama physically appeared, had a significant screen space, and interacted with the main characters in one of the chapters. I just did not mention her name. But I put clues for people to identify her.

But she will be properly introduced like Yash.

About Chanchal. From her little interaction with Abhinav and Akshara. I have a theory for her. But I don't know if I should reveal it or not

Originally posted by: Agni_Jytsona

About Chanchal. From her little interaction with Abhinav and Akshara. I have a theory for her. But I don't know if I should reveal it or not

You can share your theory if you want.... I'll will neither confirm it nor deny it so as to not spoil anything 👍🏼

I wish writers of serial read this....

Handling complex relationships with good content unlike what's happening in serial.

Loved Yash and Arohi story. Arohi too deserve another chance to be happy and also not to be taken for granted.

Abhinav calling Abhir and not Nikki ji makes Abhir really hurt....he expected his father to claim his right but something is stopping Abhinav.

Akshara Abhimanyu reunited with their love but still not happy and Arohi Abhinav might had suffered but came out of the web of insecurities and unwantedness....

Best part is Abhir and Shivu had therapy and Abhir opened up infront Ted.....

Finally,Your story is the best ....I really like how you are handling it. Story is intriguing and interesting....some part it is emotional while some part it gives happiness 🤗

Thanks for tagging

Yaar Uma... still reading... Ted Norman😆 that whole para was hilarious...

I was gonna ask if you could make an index on first page... I need to refer to previous chapters once before continuing mostly 🙈 just get that flow again...

Also seems like I may have missed reading the whole Aanchal making Abhir insecure bit last time... That was sooo much fun!! Abhir being thoda jealous sad seeing papa with new beti☺️

Chalo... Getting back to reading....

Originally posted by: shahsb_26

Yaar Uma... still reading... Ted Norman😆 that whole para was hilarious...

I was gonna ask if you could make an index on first page... I need to refer to previous chapters once before continuing mostly 🙈 just get that flow again...

Also seems like I may have missed reading the whole Aanchal making Abhir insecure bit last time... That was sooo much fun!! Abhir being thoda jealous sad seeing papa with new beti☺️

Chalo... Getting back to reading....

Hi Sejal

There is a index already on Chapter 1 page.. pg-1

About Anchal, he is not jealous.. at least not in that way.. She just reminds him that Abhinav never treated Abhir as his own.,.. you know blood relations all that...

Trivia: Ted Norman was a character from my previous story.. just thought to add him.. he was kinda my favorite😆

Krish and Yash🤣🤣

Crush from college... Kairav was protective of Arohi... Makes sense🤪

But I think Krish represents fandom when he says... Why did he became so invested in random stranger's story after Payal and Juhi😆

He is no Anuj of Anupamaa...

Ok... Gonna go and continue.. But had to comment...

Originally posted by: umawanderer

Hi Sejal

There is a index already on Chapter 1 page.. pg-1

About Anchal, he is not jealous.. at least not in that way.. She just reminds him that Abhinav never treated Abhir as his own.,.. you know blood relations all that...

Trivia: Ted Norman was a character from my previous story.. just thought to add him.. he was kinda my favorite😆

🙈 Bina page one dekhe hi I was clicking back back find previous chapter....

Yes.. That was kinda clear in today's chapter but somewhere I do wanna believe it was insecurity that he papa didn't choose him at all.

And gosh... Everything is so complicated...

I Finished reading the chapter! And I soo much loved it😛😛

I would definitely say this was my favorite chapter... Personally! Finally Abhir spoke... He accused Abhinav of everything I wanted to hear from him..

His questions were valid, his point of view was on point... I loved it most when Abhinav didn't stop them from smoking 😆and he hated that... To an extent of holding his collar..

Yash and Arohi ki kahani sunder thi.... Aise hi sabki Kahani batana! I am very very happy for Arohi... Infact is show mein bhi she deserves justice... But khair.. Umeed nai hai..