Pal Pal dil ke pass - Page 16

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I have told this before and I will repeat this, I love the way your characters are in love. This is a goddamn FF, the characters are so in love. The show has real human beings, but most times the love cannot be felt.!!

Originally posted by: Monkish

I have told this before and I will repeat this, I love the way your characters are in love. This is a goddamn FF, the characters are so in love. The show has real human beings, but most times the love cannot be felt.!!

Thanks a lot Monkish. This is my little tribute to videv.

This is how I would have wanted them onscreen too.

Hope the show also gets back on track so we get to

see their sizzling chemistry once again. Btw, I love ur

romantic videv.. Just the right mixture of love and lust

Please continue simply can't wait for the next chapter

Up until now I have been patiently reading and waiting for updates but now felt like asking for the update asap

Beautifully weaved story ❤️

Would love to see this lukka chupi continue and a dating phase we never got in the show

And i wouldn't mind more of harmless jealous ViDev some more 😃

I love the way Dev and Vidhi are in love with each other. Their hide and seeks, them stealing a moment, their conversation has my heart❤️. I can actually imagine Dev and Vidhi onscreen have these talks, these light moments. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Minami - how beautifully the story has progressed ❤️ loved it! You’ve set a wonderful pace and have built a beautiful story. I feel like I keep repeating myself - but it is true. I’ve loved every part you’ve written. Can’t wait for the morning after and their pseudo honeymoon ❤️😄

Originally posted by: sns23

Minami - how beautifully the story has progressed ❤️ loved it! You’ve set a wonderful pace and have built a beautiful story. I feel like I keep repeating myself - but it is true. I’ve loved every part you’ve written. Can’t wait for the morning after and their pseudo honeymoon ❤️😄

Thanks sns23.. I was a bit apprehensive about the intimacy part so toned it down. My version of videv is a bit contemporary..they believe in living in the moment.

Ohh my god, mind-blowing, I just love this version of Dev, who is not so afraid to disclose his love to whole world, love the camaraderie Dev and Vidhi share:) I suppose Yogesh would support Dev and Vidhi whilst the rest of the office might go against them:) Excited for the next chapter :)

Originally posted by: DixciB

Ohh my god, mind-blowing, I just love this version of Dev, who is not so afraid to disclose his love to whole world, love the camaraderie Dev and Vidhi share:) I suppose Yogesh would support Dev and Vidhi whilst the rest of the office might go against them:) Excited for the next chapter :)

Yes... This version of Dev is passionate, jealous, restless everything our Dev once used to be before they turned him into Devpurush.

Originally posted by: Minami_koi

Chapter -13 The Treat

Few weeks had passed since Dev and Vidhi's confession and it was June already. It was 6 months since she joined the company as intern and her internship duration was coming to an end.She had learnt so much since she joined there. Apart from her designing skills, there were a couple of other skills that she had mastered recently. The Art of kissing in elevator and how to keep a straight face post kissing. Vidhi had shared her elevator kiss dream/fantasy with Dev and he duly obliged to fulfill it, multiple times.

In the office

Vidhi had been offered the role of designer and she was a permanent staff member now. Vidhi couldn't be happier.It was the first step towards her goal , a milestone that she had achieved all by herself. How she wanted to share it with her parents. But she knew any achievements of hers would always fall short compared to Seema's ( Vidhi's elder sister - a cardio surgeon). She gave out a sigh.

Arjun, Ananya and Rishabh had been pestering for a treat later that day.

In Dev's Cabin

Vidhi: Dev main aaj sham ko thoda late aaongi..We are going out for dinner treat.

Dev: Ok. But I will be waiting for you. "Jaldi aa jaana",he said with a wink.

He hated Vidhi spending any time with Arjun but was careful never to reveal it to her.

Later that night

It was past 9.30 when she reached home. Dev had retired to study room post dinner. His restlessness grew with every passing minute. The very thought of her spending time with Arjun and not him at that moment was enough to drive him crazy.Just as he heard her footsteps, he wanted to startle her by sneaking behind the door.

Vidhi had not even changed and decided to meet Dev as soon as she reached home. She was clad in a black top and jeans, her regular work clothes. Vidhi entered the room and couldn't find Dev.

Vidhi: Dev aap kahan hai?

Dev, as planned sneaked from behind and hugged her tight. Dev had caught Vidhi totally off guard but in the act, her top was lifted awkwardly and his hands instead of her waist, were cupping her breasts. Shocked by the sudden ambush, Vidhi flinched and screamed" Dev! Kya kar rahe hain?" trying to release herself

Dev: "Kyuun main tume hug nahi kar saktha?"..He was still standing behind her but his hands were now wrapped around her waist.

Vidhi: Aise kaun hug karta hai?

The sudden touch and Vidhi's reaction had triggered a frenzy in him.

Dev: He bent down and whispered in her ears "Main..Sirf Main". He was breathing on her neck making her quiver and close her eyes.

Vidhi could not take it anymore and tried to release herself "Yeh aap kyya kar"...but before she could finish he tightened his grip around her waist. He moved her hair away and kissed on the nape of her neck. There was a fierceness in his kiss, a desperation which Vidhi never felt before.

Vidhi: "Sir, Mujhe jaane dijiye". Her heart was racing she begged him in a feeble tone.

"Sir" was the last thing he wanted to hear.

Dev: "Vidhi tumne mujhe fir se Sir kaha?" he said while releasing his hold on her.

Vidhi turned around to face him and said "Dev mujhe jaane dijiye na"

Dev: "Tum kahi nahi jane wali..he said holding her gaze.

He pressed his lips on hers, and she gently pulled him towards her by wrapping her arms around his neck and began kissing him back. He picked her up gently. Vidhi was taken aback but her body moved on its own as she wrapped her legs around him. He pushed her against the wall as he continued to kiss her. It felt as if he was kissing her for the first time. The kiss was more intense and heavier than before.

Dev released his lips from her and said "Tumne itni der kyuun ki? Main kabse wait kar raha tha""

Vidhi was gasping for breath. She was not in a state to talk.She kissed him back with the same force as his, surprising him in the act. Gasping for breath, they gently released each other after a while.

Dev had calmed down and now he gently hugged her like he usually did and kissed her hair.

Dev: Vidhi! did I hurt you? Main thoda excite ho gaya tha..

Vidhi: Blushing..haan thoda sa..she said pointing her neck...his stubble had caused reddish rashes on her skin.

Dev: Sorry..tumare liye yeh sab naya hoga..I will be gentle next time he said caressing her neck.

Vidhi: Who was in a mood to tease him..."naya?" "Aapko lagta hai ki yeh mera first time hai?"

Dev: Haan..Nahi ? Tumne pehle bhi kiya hai?

Vidhi: To aapko laga ki main virgin hoon?

Dev: Startled..nahi ho?

Vidhi: Aap virgin hain?

Dev: Wo..nahi..maine bola na...Dubai me..

Vidhi: To fir mujhse kyuun pooch rahe hai?

Dev: Wo sirf ek fling tha..kuch nahi..

Vidhi: Mera bhi kuch aisa hi tha.

Dev: Kiske saath?

Vidhi: Puraani baath hai...ab main har kisi ka naam tho yaad nahi rakh sakthi na..

Dev: Vidhi..please majak math karo.

Vidhi: nahi..main bahut serious huun.. 2 ya 3 affair ho chuke hain.

Dev: Jhoot..bilkul jhoot..Main nahi maanta. You are making it up.

Vidhi: kyuun mera affair kyuun nahi ho saktha?

Dev: Nahi ho saktha..tum sirf meri Vidhi ho.Bus.

Vidhi: "Kya main ye expect nahi kar sakthi ki aap bhi virgin ho? Aapne jaise mujhe abhi kiss kiya vaise aur ladkiyon ko bhi kiya hoga"..Kyuun main possessive kyuun nahi ho sakthi?

Dev: Maine aise kisiko bhi kiss nahi kiya..tum pehli ladki ho..Yamini aur main kabhi physical nahi hue the.

Vidhi: Was still faking anger..Main nahi maanti.

Dev: Please Vidhi..trust me..Main jo tumare liye feel karta huun.vo maine kisi ke liye nahi kiya.

Jab tumare muh se kisi aur ka naam sunta huun to khoon khaul jaatha hai mera.

Vidhi: laughed out aloud..Yeh kaisa cheesy dialogue tha..

Dev: Vidhi..Iam serious. Please majaak math karo.

Vidhi hugged him gently wrapping her arms around him, facing his chest. She whispered..."Dev I love you so much" "Aur main majaak kar rahi thi"

Dev kissed her forehead gently.

Vidhi was still in a mood to tease him.

Vidhi: Haan lekin kayi baar crush jaroor hua hai.

Dev : irritated..Kya?? "Next time hua tho uska sar crush kar doonga..he said while kissing his fist."

Vidhi laughed ..

Dev: Sabko treat diya? Mera kya? Mujhe kab milega?

Vidhi: Abhi diya na?

Dev: Main nahi manta..Mujhe actual treat chahiye..he whispered while kissing her neck again..

It was clear to Vidhi what Dev wanted but she acted ignorant anyway.

Vidhi: "To kal cafetaria me sath me coffee peete hain..Meri taraf se treat"

Vidhi's room

Vidhi was still lost in thoughts.She could still feel his arms wrapped around her as he hugged her from behind. She could still feel the places he kissed her body.She touched her neck and closed her eyes reliving every movement.Her cheeks turned bright pink and suddenly she wanted to go back and do it all over again and more.

Next day in office

Vidhi and rest of the team were having a brainstorming session.Dev noticed her having a serious conversation and was in mood for some mischeif.

Dev knocked the door and said "Vidhi, Can I talk to you for a minute?"

Vidhi nonchalantly replied without looking up "Dev aap dekh nahi rahe main busy hoon..hum baad me bath karenge"

Pre-occupied with work, it slipped out of her mind that they were in office and had spoken to him too casually.

Arjun, Ananya and rest of the team were caught off guard with Vidhi's response..But Dev was not letting her go.

He said "Miss.Vidhi,What nonsense! Aapko apne boss se baath karne ki tameez nahi hai?

Vidhi: Totally embarassed, "Sorry Dev sir, woh main busy thee..isliye"

Dev pretended to leave the spot angrily but soon sent a devil emoji message 😈 to Vidhi

Arjun: Vidhi..tuune aaj kamal hi kar diya. Sadu ko accha sabak sikhaya.

Vidhi smiled then said "Sabak tho ab sikhaungi"

In the elevator

Vidhi and Dev were leaving for home when Dev decided to tease her again.

Dev: Vidhi..kuch hua hai kya? Tumara mood kyuun down hai? He said, "Abhi theek karta huun and leaned in for a kiss

Vidhi who had been waiting for the moment caught hold of his cheeks and pinched them real hard "Bade boss banne ka mood kar raha tha na..ab dikhaiye". She was petite but her hold was strong enough to make Dev squeal in pain. "Vidhi jaane do yaar"

Vidhi said "To kaan pakad kar sorry boliye".

Dev said " Abhi..yahaan?" He knew he had no other option but to oblige. Dev held the tip of his ears to say sorry.

Neither of them had noticed door open and and Yogesh walk in.

Yogesh was shocked by what he had just seen and decided to act as if he had seen nothing.Dev and Vidhi were left totally embarassed.

On the way home- In the car

Vidhi: Oh God ! Yogesh Sir ne dekh liya..Kya soch rahe honge!

Dev: No issues..Main handle kar loonga.

Vidhi: Saare problem ki jad aap hi hain..Kya jaroorat thi office me prank karne ki?

DEv: Tume kya jaroorat thi lift me mere gaal pakadne ki?Tum ghar pe bhi mujhe punish kar sakthi thi na..He said while gesturing a kiss towards her.

Vidhi: Yahaan main tension me hoon aur apko majak soojh raha hai?

Dev: Agar office me sabko patha chalta hai to kya problem hai? kabhi na kabhi to patha chalne hi waala hai.

Vidhi: Bilkul nahi..Main nahi chahti itni jaldi patha chale.

Dev wanted the whole world to know he was in love with her as soon as possible but was concerned about Vidhi's reaction.

At home - Dining room

Dev, Vidhi and Sathyavathi had just finished having dinner when Sathyavathi said

Sathyavathi: I have some good news guys. Humare dance school ke students ko Europe ke "Indian dance festival week" main perform karne ka chance mila hai. Iam very happy.

Dev: Yeh to badi acchi news hai ma.Congratulations.

Vidhi: Congratulations aunty.

Sathyavathi: Mujhe next week ke Monday ko nikalna padega. 1 week ka program hai ..Main soch rahi thi ki Chithra se bhi milke aaungi. (Chithra lived in Uk with her husband) Bahut din ho gaye usse mile.

DEv couldnt stop smiling.."Yeh to badi acchi baath hai..aap aaram se vaapas aayie..Yahan pe kya jaldi hai?"

Vidhi knew exactly what Dev was happy about.

In the study room

Dev grabbed Vidhi and kissed her frantically..and was extra chirpy.

Vidhi: Aap itna chehek kyuun rahe hain?

Dev: Tumne suna nahi..Maan ne kya kaha?

Vidhi: haan suna..Mujhe patha tha ki aapke man me laddoo phoot rahe honge.

Dev: Tum khush nahi ho? Main to kush huun..

Vidhi: kyuun ? She asked innocently..

Dev: Tum finally mujhe wo treat do paogi.

Following Monday

Dev had just dropped Sathyavathi in the airport and was heading home. He couldnt contain his excitement thinking about what lay in store for him.Meanwhile Mumbai was welcoming its monsoon. Entire city was in the grip of rain which only added to Dev's happiness.Dev stopped his car en route in the medical shop and bought the necessary supplies.

At home

Vidhi was tensed. She knew she was about to open a new page in her life. The very thought of Dev's touch was making her go weak in the knees. She was getting ready for "their night" but was confused about choosing the right dress for the occassion. She remembered what effect saree had on him on his birthday and decided to go with saree,

Dev reached home by 9.30pm..The house help had retired for the day and the house was absolutely empty and Vidhi was nowhere to be seen. Dev's heart was racing. He freshened up as fast as he could and headed to study room. But there was no sight of her. He quietly reached for the stairs and to her room..The door was open and he entered calling her name "Vidhi tum kahaan ho"

Vidhi: Main yahan huun Dev ..she said in a husky voice. It was Dev's turn to go weak in the knees.

Vidhi was in a delicate yellow saree. With kohl black eyes, alluring red lips and wavy hair, she looked nothing short of a goddess. The entire room was lit with candles and filled with her fragrance. She was seated on the bed flashing a naughty smile at him.

Dev: Vidhi! Tum Tum...he was swallowing hard

Vidhi enjoyed seeing him in pain and asked "Kaisa laga mera treat"?

Dev: Main tume bata nahi saktha ki tum kitni khoobsurat lag rahi ho..

Vidhi: Fir se cheesy dialogue...and laughed..

Dev sat closer to her and held her hands..."Vidhi you are looking gorgeous"

Vidhi blushed and hung her head. They could listen to each other's frantic heart beats.

Dev gently hugged her gently and kissed her neck. Vidhi hid her face in his chest. He gradually tightened his grip and whispered "Are you ready" in her ears. Vidhi did not reply instead gently nibbled his ears which ignited all his hidden passions. Dev kissed her sensuously on her lips and proceeded to kiss her neck and nibbled her ears.They took turns to explore each other's bodies with their lips and hands and when Vidhi was ready, Dev made love to her all night.

Koi aise rokta hai kya?? Rhythm el dum sahi pakde hai. Dev and Vidhi are from different planet in your universe. Absolutely love the chemistry and the boldness Vidhi's character has, not the sehmi hui ladki.