Pal Pal dil ke pass - Page 8

Originally posted by: Minami_koi

Thanks a lot for the feedback. Iam a big fan of yours and Revutty's Ffs. Iam glad you read my update. Sure will bring a jealous Dev in the coming updates😊👍

Thank you yaar 🙏 I just started writing on ViDev before that I never wrote any story. Just whatever I feel after seeing them I used write that’s all . Nothing great.
you selected a diff plot from story and we all are eager to see what happens next. Jealous dev!!! Wow !! Bring it on🔥

Thank you for the update. Vidhi handled it well. Dev ki lanka lagni shuru ho gayi hai☺️looking forward to what he does next. He already has some sort of realization but as Dev is, he's pushing it away. Loved how Vidhi recalled their first hug, that warm feeling. Eager to see how Vidhi realizes her love for Dev. Absolutely loving the pace. The conversation between Arjun and Dev was fun.😆😆

Originally posted by: Name_sake101

Thank you for the update. Vidhi handled it well. Dev ki lanka lagni shuru ho gayi hai☺️looking forward to what he does next. He already has some sort of realization but as Dev is, he's pushing it away. Loved how Vidhi recalled their first hug, that warm feeling. Eager to see how Vidhi realizes her love for Dev. Absolutely loving the pace. The conversation between Arjun and Dev was fun.😆😆

Thank you for the feedback. 😊👍

Originally posted by: Minami_koi

Chapter -6 Yeh Dooriyan

What can i say Minami_koi, it is so well written and my favourite part has to be Dev talking to himself about how he doesn't want to lose respect in Vidhi's eyes regarding his feelings. This man is goals for anyone in life

The last two pics of Dev and Vidhi are so cute

Keep it going ❤️

Originally posted by: hmhss

What can i say Minami_koi, it is so well written and my favourite part has to be Dev talking to himself about how he doesn't want to lose respect in Vidhi's eyes regarding his feelings. This man is goals for anyone in life

The last two pics of Dev and Vidhi are so cute

Keep it going ❤️

conincidentally i was listening to "mere yaara" by sooryavanshi on loop and it was spot on suiting the situation in your story

Originally posted by: hmhss

conincidentally i was listening to "mere yaara" by sooryavanshi on loop and it was spot on suiting the situation in your story

Thank you for the wonderful feedback😍

Thank youuu so muchh!!🥺🥺 I was craving for an update so badly today!! Din bann gaya😁

Loving their banters n convo.. kitne comfortable ho gaye hain dono.. and such cute pics you have used..

That head tilt scene was beautifully placed n described🙌

Dev abhi bhi possessive hai ya fir with age he has learned not to be.. kyunki abhi toh Vidhi ki Arjun ke saath match making kar raha hai 🙈

Originally posted by: Chakor07

Thank youuu so muchh!!🥺🥺 I was craving for an update so badly today!! Din bann gaya😁

Loving their banters n convo.. kitne comfortable ho gaye hain dono.. and such cute pics you have used..

That head tilt scene was beautifully placed n described🙌

Dev abhi bhi possessive hai ya fir with age he has learned not to be.. kyunki abhi toh Vidhi ki Arjun ke saath match making kar raha hai 🙈

Dont worry possessive Dev is very much there..

Will be unleashed soon.

Omg! Was totally not expecting an update this soon. Loved it, please keep writing at the same pace😂

Loved part 6.. and Dev behaving in a matured way is a treat, that is what is expected of him😁😁 the gossip aunty part was funny🤣🤣. And part 7 was a mix of matured and childish coversations well that's how it is supposed to be🤣🤣👍👍 waiting for the next one.

P.S : love all the pictures😍